Date: 05/16/08 11:59 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Thank YOU for writing this AMAZING story.. Wow! Big applause to you! This have been an amazing journey..
Date: 05/16/08 10:37 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
i love it. the bill biting tom during sex was so funny. i can actually see it happen *snickers* this one goes straight to my 'favourites'
Date: 05/16/08 10:22 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
oh yeas what a lovely way to end this fic.
ngggggghhhhh!!!!
much love, im glad i was able to read this one!!!
Date: 05/16/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Oh, wow. So worth the wait. I'm kind of sad to see this finished; it has been an amazing journey and I've enjoyed every word of it.
I'm think that Georg and Gustav are made for each other. It was adorable, how clueless they both were. Bill's little plan was so devious, and I could really imagine him getting so excited about match-making. The worry and the guilt he felt was sweet too... That's one thing I've really noticed throughout this; despite the fact that this is AU, you've still managed to capture their personalities perfectly, (or how I perceive them to be, anyway^^). Your characterisation is always so good.
And Andreas and Delphine! I was so ridiculously excited at that prospect. I bet they'd make a cute couple.
I could totally imagine Bill and Tom living in a little castle; Bill throwing huge parties and Tom humouring him ;)
As for the last part... Wow, that was so sexy! The shower scene, the toys and then Bill topping... You really have given me everything I love with this fic ^_^ And they finally worked out the relationship between feeding and sex; that scene was so very hot.
The ending was cute, with Gustav and Georg saving them from the security and Gustav's little note... I can imagine he'd be a little annoyed with the pair of them for a while, lol.
I really don't know what else to say, except: Thank you for writing such an amazing fic. As sad as I am to see this finished, the prospect of reading more in this universe makes me happy. I'd love to read more about Georg and Gustav, Andreas and Delphine, and Syb and Markus. Not forgetting Bill and Tom of course ;)
Again, thank you so much for writing this and I look forward to maybe reading more from this universe sometime in the future.
xxx♥♥♥xxx
Date: 05/16/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Finnished? but...
Wait... What!?
Finnished?
What am I supposed to do now? This was like the highlights of my day. *sniff*
So good!
Please make another one... Please?
Date: 05/16/08 08:42 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant, kinda sad its over. But well done!
Date: 05/16/08 08:24 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Hooray! I love this story so much, it really is very elegant and generally just a delight.
Thanks so much for this, I always wanted a really considered Vamp fic and this couldn't fit the bill better. :)
Date: 05/14/08 10:47 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
ahh..more soon? please!
Date: 05/11/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Others
I loved that scene when Bill is going to suck Tom's blood, it's just awesome and so well described.
Oh, well, the whole chapter is very well described, so... :D
Date: 05/11/08 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 2 Beyond Reality
Omg, vampires.
I already love this :D
Date: 05/11/08 02:27 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Is it over...?
Date: 05/04/08 09:39 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Me again, bothering u! Persistent, aren't I? Just wantd 2 add that I'm yearning for it 2 proceed 4 a whole lot of chapterz more! Don't cut it short, it's 2 inspiring&enthralling! Luv how complex u'r making it, 2! Xcellent!!!
More... Soon?!
Date: 05/04/08 09:30 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Contrary 2 my original xpectations, after having read ya summary, I'm hopelessly addictd 2 your story! It's amazing&captivating! U make it so vivid, plausible&deep; I'm stunnd how u constantly manage 2 cover all anglez, aspects, detailz! I'd say it's almost 2 realistic! I'm so looking forward 2 the next installment, so 2 call it! I'm tingling wit anticipation, literally! Awesome skill&style! Compliments on ya English level! It's truly a relief 2 not hav 2 blatantly ignore/overlook mistakes, both in grammar&vocab! Respect! Keep it up, though...
Date: 05/02/08 09:33 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
OMG! i love this story. You have so much tallent! I cannot wait until you post more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. There is only one chapter left, so I hope you enjoy it when I post it.
Date: 05/01/08 12:21 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Amazing as ever!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :).
Date: 05/01/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
best story of the site, seriously the best!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm very pleased you're enjoying it.
Date: 04/30/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Thank you! This was the chapter I wanted. It gave me all the insight I needed about Nikols. Very interesting, and also interesting to know that he made bill sick in the first place. I still don't totally get Gustav but he's always been a bit of a mystery. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope the court didn't mess bill's mind up too much. Nothing Tom can't fix though, right? Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you :). So pleased you like the background on Nikols. As for Gustav, I think he's a bit of a mystery to all but himself ... he's a quiet one.
Date: 04/30/08 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
Aww!
Ugh! That Strigoi got what was comming to him! I would say they should have tortured him first but seeing as how he was still healing from Bill's little episode *giggle* I guess it works out. =]
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you :). Bill did get some revenge in there with his shredding incident, which I think is a good thing.
Date: 04/30/08 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! THE BASTARD ID DEAAAAAAADDD!!!!!!!! SERVES HIM RIGHT!!!!!!
...
(two hours after)
YYYYYYEEEESS! DEAD DEAD DEAD!!! *dances*
Author's Response: Okay, that's the best reaction to Nikols being executed so far :) Thank you for commenting.
Date: 04/30/08 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Trial and Retribution
HOLY FUCK YES! THE BASTARD'S DEAD!
*is insanely happy*
(oh, and I'm still loving overprotective Georg. ^^)
Go Bill! I'm insanely proud of him. Which is kinda silly.
Author's Response: LOL ... I have to admit I didn't like Nikols much either :) Thank you very much for commenting.