Date: 08/04/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
I have to say, I only joined this site to read the stories, not write any, not really review. I am a lover of literature I can't get enough of books. When I found this site, I was incredibly excited to read stories about Tokio Hotel, more specifically Bill and Tom, I can't get enough of that pairing I don't care what people think lol and aparantly im not the only one. But what I wanted to say was, your the first person I've reviewed too because, this story blew my mind. Completely. I loved every bit of it, you are incredibly talented and should never stop writing. My name's Lindsay by the way.
I have to say thank you for writing this story, it really was incredible.
Date: 08/01/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Grind Stone
This is amazing. I've never read something like that !
Is there a French translation of your fanfiction? Cause if there is not, I would like to do it so we can share your story with french fans.
Date: 07/29/08 03:42 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
This has been by far the one of the most well written stories I have ever read next to Harry Potter! Whatever you decide to write next, I'm behind you two hundred and fifty percent!!!
Date: 07/25/08 04:31 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
OMG that was an amazing story!
good job :]
Date: 07/23/08 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Haha that was THE most fabulous ending ever! It took me a few days to read this but DAMN was it fantastic! Really, the plot mixed in with the smut was amazing. Seriously I loved it!!! Fucking amazing job! Kudos.
Date: 07/23/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
This is an amazing fic. I'm definitely reading it again after my list of things to read is complete.
Date: 07/21/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
um, HELLZ YES that castle in the country is a good idea!
i love this, you can be sure i'll come back and read it again. and again. and again....i think you get the point ;)
oh by the way...any chance of a one shot or very short, vignette-style continuation of this? 'cause you're a damn good writer.
Date: 07/21/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
I love this story!!! Thank you for writing it, it's romantic, hilariously funny, dramatic, actiony, about vampires i love vampires! It's also about my favoritest people in the world (Tokio Hotel!). This is a fantastic, really great story and i thank you very much for writing it. This should be a book! Ya defenatly a book!! Thank you again!!!!!!=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]=]
Date: 07/21/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 10 Getting Ready
"Nothing was remotely as large when Tom was there" - except for bill's dick. sorry, just had to say that :P
and i was SO right, it was all the better for waiting.
Date: 07/21/08 10:44 am Title: Chapter 8 - Eccentricities
"Bill still wanted to tear Delphine limb from limb, but he did feel a little less homicidal when Tom quickly walked across the room." ...um, lol? that was one of the funniest lines i've read, even though it was intended to be serious. or at least intended to be funny-masquerading-as-serious.
by the way, i think this is the only story i've been reviewing individual chapters on, aside from one work in progress. (that means i like it. a lot. lol.)
Date: 07/21/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - Home
ahhh bill was so CUTE! i was so ready for something to happen, but...the tension's building up and i know itll be better this way XD
Date: 07/21/08 12:27 am Title: Chapter 4 - Others
oh. my. god. that. was. so. fucking. hot.
somebody get me a thermometer, i must be burning up! XD
Date: 07/11/08 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
My dear, you have done a wonderful amazing job. i can't believe how you even came up with this. i have enjoyed reading this sooo much...you really have no idea;P the characters are golden, i love how you protrayed all of them. and sorry if like this story is old or something, i never look at the updates and i only read completed stories. but once again, you did an amazing job. sorry that i can't express more, but my staying in germany (i've been here for the summer, visiting my grandparents) has really confused my english vocab. simply delicious...you deserve an award^^
Date: 06/21/08 04:51 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
First off, before I even say anything about this fic, I have to say a HUUUUGE thank you to you. You're actually the one that alerted me to the existence of Tokio Hotel (on your LJ) and I haven't been the same since. So....THANK YOU!
About the fic now...It has been a most enjoyable read. You know, every time I read something by you I am astounded with the way you put together mere words to make literary masterpieces. :p This story is no exception. I would say stuff that's more constructive, only I really liked it all, so I certainly can't find room for improvement.
It was very thought-provoking, and definitely emotional (Had me freaking crying at one point! But there were also many many laughs, and quite a few "aww's" too) and altogher worth the hours it took to read it.
Well...thank you for writing it! I know I had fun reading it! :]
Date: 06/18/08 07:51 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
fantastic piece of work... I really enjoyed it. Thanks for it :-)
Date: 06/17/08 09:07 am Title: Chapter 16 - Normal Is As Normal Does
this fic is good
Date: 06/12/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
Oh I enjoyed it so much!
Every single part of it (though the toys were a bit weird for me)!
This really is one of the most beautiful fanfics I've ever read... Every single aspect of it and the way you write made me happy every single day while reading it :D
Thank you, and write more, I promise I'll read! ;)
Date: 06/09/08 07:55 am Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
OMG. I frigging LOVED this story. I'd avoided reading it for a while, cause I only read the Tom / Bill pairings, and the OMC put me of. But a friend said it wasn't a romantic thing, so I thought I'd give it a shot. And I was blown away. This is truly awesome. I will definately be looking at your other stories!
Date: 06/08/08 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Coming Round
You have my deepest respect now.
The story is a piece of art.
Keep on writing masterpieces like this.
Date: 06/07/08 08:19 am Title: Chapter 16 - Normal Is As Normal Does
YAY! So beautiful!