Date: 10/08/11 04:46 am Title: A case of Favorable Deception
I like it :( though call me stupid but I don't think I got it :(
Oh and is that Randy Orton in your banner!!?
Date: 10/06/11 11:36 pm Title: A case of Favorable Deception
An epic scene. I do hope you have more extras under your sleeves. :P
Date: 10/06/11 09:45 pm Title: A case of Favorable Deception
RANDY ORTON!!!! DUDE IM A HUGE FAN!!!! LOL..okay i had to say that, he gets me all worked up..i bust out the viper.
anywaysssss.....
intense story, very well written! i can't write that good to save my life LOL...i really enjoyed it!
Date: 10/06/11 06:12 pm Title: A case of Favorable Deception
you use A LOT of big words...u make Tomi sounds so smart and evil!!
Date: 10/06/11 02:23 pm Title: A case of Favorable Deception
Tom is a pretty convincing liar when it comes to his feelings for Jensen. It seems that Bill can see right through his excuses though which I love. I also love Tom's facial expression in the banner hahaha. I hope this means there will be another BDR update soon!
Date: 10/06/11 11:05 am Title: A case of Favorable Deception
OH MY, IS THAT RANDY ORTON ON YOUR BANNER? I USED TO LOVE RANDY ORTON!
Sorry that your first review wasn't really exciting and praise to your story, that I didn't read (Nothing personal, I just have no desire to read het at all!) but you see, I JUST LOVED RANDY ORTON SO MUCH ONCE THAT I GOT EXCITED.
:3
Author's Response: Uh yeah, that's Orton; he depicted exactly what I wanted for the character:a somewhat imtimidating allure. rnrnIf Het is not to your preference then is perfectly fine that you didn't read the story for is derived from a much developed one, so that one would've to be readen in order to fully uderstand this extra, and being that you don't read Het it would have a tedious experience.So is okay if you didn't actually read it.rnrnThanks for your review nevertheless.rnrn