Date: 07/17/12 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, I can't believe you made it all a dream in the end! Lol. This was an interesting fic, but I can't help feel that it needs some work to make it even better. Also, I kept wondering the whole time how the twins had ended up in that sexual situation, and you weren't really giving me any answers to why Tom was participating. Though, I guess the fact that it was all a dream in the end answers it, even if it's not satisfactory. Well done on this fic, looking fwd to reading more twincest from u. :)
Date: 10/06/11 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Insanely sensual little fic! I adored the sensuality, certain erotic tough in this. I think it came from details, their obvioous connection, hesitation, definitely. Very talented way to describe the hotness between them and it never got boring or repetative. I enjoyed this really much. :)
Author's Response: Wow, what a review - thank you very much! Glad we could convey so many things ;)
Date: 10/06/11 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me happy =)