Date: 10/08/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
i just can't get enough! this chapter was just perfect!! :)
Date: 10/08/11 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
LOVE this soo much! *hugs*
Date: 10/08/11 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
good job on this! i looked foward for it! :D
Date: 10/08/11 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg too good and im craving for more!
Date: 10/08/11 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooh....this is gonna be interesting...really can't wait to read more.
Date: 10/08/11 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
LMAO! bill chugging water after 30 mins on grill?? xDDD sounds like something i would do LOL
YES!!! tom go a make over and bill loves it LOL
the end got me! uggghhh i want more now! but i will wait, if i have to :D
Date: 10/08/11 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
i like your writing, so dont worry about it lol this has a good plot and you know the direction you want to go!
this was good, bill is funny, mean but funny lol annndd hes starting to like tom, little by little :D
Date: 10/08/11 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
*stands up clapping* this is just amazing!bill is one feisty guy and im glad tom got a make over!!! :D
Date: 10/08/11 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
im in love with this...and you! :)
Date: 10/08/11 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
YAY! lol those two boys are going to drive each other crazy!!!
Date: 10/08/11 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
awwww lol i'm glad tom is excited to work and bill, well let's see how they work together lol that would be funny as hell!!! xDDD
Date: 10/08/11 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
i'm lovin this lol okay bad line. xD
seriously though i really enjoy this story and i'm looking foward to read where they work together! :D
Date: 10/08/11 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
is it stupid to say i started dancing once i saw this posted? LOL
fuck i have to wait till friday to read it again? *cries* i love this though!
Date: 10/08/11 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
another great chapter!! soooo good!! now i want MORE! lol
Date: 10/07/11 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG I'm very in love with this.
I'm really happy for Tom *O*
I can't wait for more!
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank You!! im really glad u like it! i'll post more really soon!! <3
Date: 10/07/11 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is seriously sooo amazing! i cried when i read about toms past, i feel for him. it must be so hard and yet remain so strong, i have a little sister and i would die if i lost her. and my parents..but this whole thing is just awesome, tom gets a chance and bill..LOL oh fuck i can't wait till he finds out!!! :D
Author's Response: tomi is very strong, i just love hime! :Drnthanks sooo much for ur review! more soon!!! :))
Date: 10/07/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is getting good, really it is! im already eager to hit the next button!! :D
Date: 10/07/11 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
very interesting, i like it so far :)
Author's Response: thank you! :D
Date: 10/07/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMFG!
"Hey Uncle Fester, you need to hurry up and wrap the burger fast and quit wheezing all over it."
I fucking died when i read that! it's sooo mean but toooo funny! my friend has the same problem, not funny but shit, bill is a classic!!! im looking foward to it,
HURRY UP SATURDAY!!!
Author's Response: lol no kidding! a friend of mine is the same! oh bill! xDrnthank you for reading and for ur nice comment! *hugs*rnrnwell, i have 5 more hours till saturday, so lets hope it goes through soon! <3
Date: 10/07/11 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
LLLMMAOOO!!! oh shit bill is a jerk but totally fucking hilarious! i feel bad for tom, i really do but i couldnt help but laugh!