Date: 10/11/11 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
I swear if it isn't because I'm hormonal or something because this chapter gave me the sniffles.
What I really liked and appreciated was that Tom's presence in the story as well as his past was not explained in a neat and quick paragraph but built up a bit, and his homeless life well depicted.
Keeping track of this and looking forward to your update after the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank so very much! your review made me smile like a crazy person! i hope you enjoy of what else is ahead!! :))
Date: 10/11/11 02:40 am Title: Chapter 3
Tom's story was so sad, I felt so bad! And I hate that Bill treats him like shit, but I suppose that's just how he is...for now. Can't wait to keep reading XD
Author's Response: thanks sooo much reading! lol exactly, for now..oh tomi will sure break him soon :D
Date: 10/11/11 02:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter. I am really loving this story XD I can't wait to see how the relationship between Bill and Tom is going to change.
Date: 10/11/11 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this. Your characterization of Bill is great. :)
Author's Response: *gasps* thank you!!! *hugs*
Date: 10/09/11 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill has no idea how lucky he is that these people don't just beat him up. he is just awful. Thanks for the update!
Date: 10/09/11 03:52 am Title: Chapter 4
perfect! really is! :D
Date: 10/09/11 03:51 am Title: Chapter 3
:DD more!
Author's Response: more soon sweets!! :))
Date: 10/09/11 03:46 am Title: Chapter 1
a-fucking-dore! :D
Author's Response: thank you!!! :))
Date: 10/09/11 02:58 am Title: Chapter 4
*snorts* Ohhh they are so bad.
I knew Bill wasn't going to take Andi invting Tom along well. But I love makeover times!! They are always always wonderful. I'm so happy Tom got rid of his ratty dreads for those sweet tight cornrows, not that I didn't love RL!Tom with the dreads, but nasty unkept street dreads dn't sound sexy at all....Heehee, Bill thinks hes been all sexified now, thats amazing. It means it only a matter of time now before Bill and Tim get together, and Bill realizes money isn't everything.
Andi was so sweet, loaning Tom so much money, well, hell, he didn't even really appear to expect the money back, making it even sweeter.
Wonderful work, Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the amazing work.
Date: 10/09/11 02:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg i love this story :D
Date: 10/09/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 4
lol i'll be lurking for other stories, but they are good also, i just can relate to this, and the customers :D
Date: 10/09/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 3
this is just really good, i love tom:)
Author's Response: thank you bunches! i love tom too!! :D
Date: 10/09/11 01:36 am Title: Chapter 2
LOL oh shiitttt there really are customers like that! i've had them and bill is just awesome/mean but it's true, hard work for no pay! that sucks!!! :/
Date: 10/09/11 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
my friend had told me about this story lol i work at mcdonald's so im excited for this! :D
Author's Response: lol really? i did too! worst job for me though, im actually not a people person lol xD
Date: 10/09/11 12:11 am Title: Chapter 4
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10/08/11 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
more! more! more! this is interesting...
Date: 10/08/11 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
D: The next chapter is on Friday...b-but today is Saturday.
I expect the full spectacular Bill reaction then :P
LOL at Bill daydreaming about making out with a bum XD
Date: 10/08/11 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling the insults are going to be worse now that Bill finds himself attracted to Tom. This is too good haha.
Date: 10/08/11 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol remember when you thought no one would like this babe? Now look, 85 reviews and almost a 1000 read count! Great job and I love the story! ( i get to read it in advance haha! ) Lol love you so much!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i love you! i thank you like crazy!!!! :D