Date: 11/20/11 10:33 am Title: Chapter 6
this is a really great story idea. u should keep up the good work. ^^
Date: 10/26/11 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
A few mistakes, but not bad for a post-meltdown chapter. Hope you are feeling better.
I am glad they are getting along better. As usual though I think Tom is way to good and forgiving for Bill. Which of course I am grateful for because i want them together. =) Thanks for the update!
Date: 10/26/11 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
hilarious conversation with the girl in the drive through.
Date: 10/23/11 05:44 am Title: Chapter 6
it does make sense:] i luv it! i forgot to track it last time so i spent 20 minutes lookin for it[forgot the name]. lol
Date: 10/21/11 07:47 am Title: Chapter 6
the storyline is actually really good and funny and I like it; but it's written so poorly, I mean grammatical mistakes, typos and stuff. Too bad this site doesn't have the beta reader service anymore:(
keep up with the story though, it's a really nice one
Date: 10/21/11 01:48 am Title: Chapter 6
oh sugar, i'm sorry for how you feel and trust me this story is really amazing! it gives me butterflies and all that good stuff, post more whenever you can okay? -hugs-
Date: 10/21/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 5
i read the story i just had to comment lol, very good!
Date: 10/21/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 4
LMAO! great job! too funny! xD
Date: 10/21/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 3
how sweettttt!!!! i wish the best for tomi!
Date: 10/21/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 2
bill is a meanie! just wow, i can't believe that! poor tomi all sweet and dirty lol love it!
Date: 10/21/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
love so far! this is just an amazing start!
Date: 10/20/11 10:06 am Title: Chapter 6
awwwwwww. I love it :)))
Date: 10/19/11 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is dope as hell! I mean, it's good! :D It's been a looonngg time since I've logged on here, and your story really caught my eye! You just might be the one that gets me interested in THFF again! :) Well, I must Read on! :D
Author's Response: OMFG really?? that's reallyyyy super duper sweet of you!!! im glad you like it! makes me extremely honored!<3333rnrn*hugs you tight!*
Date: 10/19/11 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw babe what happened!!!??? i love chapte btw but ive been worried bout you!!! :'(
Author's Response: oh baby, i'll mssg you on facebook okay love?? :/
Date: 10/19/11 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg babe that must be hard what your going through! -hugs you super tight- you'll pull through, and for you to write this chapter while going through a lot just for us...thank you. stay strong and pray ^^
Date: 10/19/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
-sniff- i have a little sister and i would DIE if i lost her!!! :'(
Date: 10/19/11 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
i'm now in love with sweet bill but i will always have great love for strong tom! :*
Date: 10/19/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
i hope you take time off to recover, i know how it feels to go through such a hard time, been there. im sure all your readers will understand. great chapter and i'll always look foward to more! :)
Date: 10/19/11 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
i love you and this story