Date: 11/04/11 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love it!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 10/11/11 11:54 am Title: Chapter 4
You sir have yet again gotten me hooked on this story even more so than I was when I read the first chapter. Loving the story with every chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm magical. There's still more to come :)
Date: 10/11/11 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1
this is just amazing! im glad i read this! waiting for more! :D
Author's Response: well there's 4 chapters so far :p haha. Thanks though! <3 I'll update soon
Date: 10/11/11 03:22 am Title: Chapter 4
i love this :D
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 10/08/11 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
*Plays dramatic music* Dun dun duuunnnn...Something tells me Andreas is thinking Bill is connected to Mischa's disappearance. WHY must you tease us with these cliffys?
Author's Response: Cliff hangers are my specialty and you know it.
Date: 09/29/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh man. That's messed up! BILL is messed up! *sits back and munches popcorn, wondering where you'll take this.*
Author's Response: Haha glad you're enjoying it! :D I'll have more up soon <3
Date: 09/29/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
I KNEW IT! I FUCKING KNEW IT! I knew Elizabeth Bathory was what gave Bill his inspiration to bathe in the blood of virgins! You sir are good, very good at this. Can't wait to read more. Btw, what happened with Forget to Forget? Please tell me you didn't discontinue it.
Author's Response: XD I have a shit load planned for this story. At least 6 chapters are plotted out already. :p The others are on hiatus until I get the new laptop. Thanks for the review.
Date: 09/25/11 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Agh, that's awful! So gory and yet so weirdly elegant. Very good imagery here! It's really shocking and twisted.
I suggest that you put paragraph breaks for dialogue. The next to last paragraph is huge, and it help the flow if you broke it up a bit.
Author's Response: Haha thank you! i'll go re-read and consider your suggestion :)
Date: 09/25/11 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O I'm hooked! This was really really really good! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: XD Thanks. I'll have more up soon. I've actually already written 3 chapters.
Date: 09/25/11 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW! it was amazing. Nice job, something i would read
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I have quite a bit more planned for this story. :)