Date: 09/23/11 03:58 pm Title: Quiet
You write beautifully as always. I can't really locate this to any particular time period, but maybe it isn't important. There was certain sadness through the whole stpry. nOt only in cheating and arguing, but in things we do and can't be undone,,, because for a fraction of a second we were not thinking straight and we acted lkike fools and suddenly things can not be undone anymore. The ending... The metaphor was beautiful and comforting and it helped to explain the bigger concept of this. Yes, beautiful and sad and good. :)
Date: 09/21/11 02:23 pm Title: Quiet
Please tell me that Tom is not dead...:(
Great story, I added it as favourite... I like happy endings so I want to believe that Tom is just unconscious and not dead...
Sequel please? :)
Author's Response:
Just like the review before yours: there is no character death warning on this story and I never said Tom died.
rnBut no, there will not be a sequel, sorry.
Date: 09/20/11 09:52 pm Title: Quiet
This was a lovely short story, a horrible twist of fate. It's ironic that Bill cheated all the way, yet Tom fell to his death.
Author's Response:
Ah, but there is no character death warning on this story. He fell, but I never said he died.
rnThe ending of the end note says that a new Venus would be born from this.
Date: 09/20/11 06:33 pm Title: Quiet
Gorgeous and so well written!
Date: 09/20/11 11:35 am Title: Quiet
i was not expecting the ending. i really wasn't. there are tears in my eyes, trying to fall right now. that was so painful.
Date: 09/20/11 02:53 am Title: Quiet
would've appreciated a whee bit more warning before reading this, cause it isn't exactly the kind of story I'd want to read on my birthday. I have tear tracks down my cheeks now :/
but it's really beautifully written :)
Date: 09/20/11 01:18 am Title: Quiet
This story was beautiful and had such a strong message! I'm normally not one for reading the Slash genre but I'm so glad I did. It almost sounded poetic to me; I loved it! The banner is fantastic as well. I've never seen that picture before so it captured my attention. GREAT STORY!