Date: 12/31/11 07:43 am Title: Tom Gets Cured.
As a late comer who read it all at once, I honestly feel like things moved very fast.
It was very good though. You do not do a bad job writing Tom/Bill imo. I kinda wish. You had dropped some hints about the Bill and Mark situation throughout the fic instead of just throwing it out there in the end. And telling us Mark comes to the coffee shop frequently just kinda....seems like lack of foresight. There were plenty of times we were at the coffeeshop to drop somesort of hints. No offense or anything. Just something you might think about for your next work.
Overall it was a good fic though. I look forward to seeing what you bring us next. And might I suggest a small sidefic to this where Tom gets to kick Marks ass, or at least very publicly throw him out of Shed 2? Maybe?
Author's Response: This has to be the best review I received for this fic. Thank you so much for your opinion and advice, I am new to writing stories so I need all the advice I can get! I'll keep it in mind ;)I am not very happy with this story, I wish I'd planned ahead before I started it.rnrnHmmmm that sounds like a good idea . . . I might give it a shot after I've finished the ones I'm currently writing.rnrnThank you so so so so so much!
Date: 12/21/11 04:37 am Title: Tom Gets Cured.
yay for happy endings. =)
Author's Response: We all love a happy ending :D
Date: 11/24/11 02:02 am Title: Tom Gets Cured.
awwwwww so cute ^_^, to bad we didnt get to see Tomi beat up mark XD
Date: 11/21/11 10:55 am Title: Tom Gets Cured.
I loooove this so much!
Date: 11/21/11 10:22 am Title: Tom Gets Cured.
The end already ? :(
I love this story, it's one of the best I have ever read, and I can't wait for your next story :)
Date: 11/20/11 12:31 pm Title: Battle of the Head and the Heart.
How could u stop there! I can't wait to read Toms reaction.
Date: 11/20/11 05:10 am Title: Battle of the Head and the Heart.
nice new chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 11/20/11 01:32 am Title: Battle of the Head and the Heart.
dun dun dun...now to see Toms reaction and if he has the guts to say it back!
Date: 11/19/11 08:46 pm Title: Battle of the Head and the Heart.
I hope that Tomīs silence was because Tom didnīt expect that info from Bill... because I am sure that they are deeply in love... Awaiting for your updated!!!
Date: 11/19/11 08:17 pm Title: Battle of the Head and the Heart.
Definately EVIL!!!
But you made my day!
Date: 11/19/11 05:51 pm Title: Battle of the Head and the Heart.
Those three words.. I can't wait to see what will happen ^_^
Date: 11/12/11 11:47 pm Title: Best Friend Advice.
Can't wait til they say those three little words.
Date: 11/12/11 10:25 am Title: Best Friend Advice.
Love this story, I'm sad it's coming to an end ..
But I love it so much ^_^
Date: 11/12/11 04:47 am Title: Best Friend Advice.
Awesome. Danke
Date: 11/12/11 02:14 am Title: Best Friend Advice.
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/05/11 03:54 am Title: Pictures Can Speak A Thousand Words.
yay for a little clearing of the air. A little more to do, but they are getting closer to total honesty. =)
Date: 11/04/11 04:58 pm Title: Pictures Can Speak A Thousand Words.
Got scared in the begining of this chapter!
Thanks for updating!
Date: 11/04/11 01:44 pm Title: Pictures Can Speak A Thousand Words.
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/04/11 01:05 pm Title: Pictures Can Speak A Thousand Words.
Aww...Bill should tell Tom first. That way they aren't waiting forever to say it =) Can't wait to see what happens next.