Date: 03/01/08 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Guh, NO. I hope this is not what's in store for them. Great writing, horrible possibility.
Date: 02/29/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Oh! this is so heartbreaking! and really great! I definitly think you should turn this in to a story, it's too good to let it go! It's has all the potential in the world to become a great story, even though it is a great one-shot that obviously leavs you longing for more. But I beg of you, please turn this into a story! :)
Date: 02/29/08 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
looooooooooooove
Date: 02/29/08 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
this is a very good distraction.
Date: 02/29/08 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Oh God...
Goosebumps!!
Date: 02/29/08 12:51 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
I loved it so much.
I don't know what's worst...twins acting like strangers or one of them dead, it's just wrong.
I just wanted to know what happened to them.
Great work. PERFECT.
You could make a sequel. ^___^
Date: 02/29/08 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
wow. This was so beautifully written, it made me cry. The lyrics are fit perfect with the story (I love Vienna btw, she's amazing) and the plot is really touchy. However, I can't help but wonder what could possibly have happened between the twins. Reading about Tom and Bill as strangers is hard and sad. But it's a great story, I love it, but now I'm all melancholic. Great work!
Date: 02/28/08 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
oh, that was beautiful. listening to the song while reading really added an effect that made me feel so much more. you're such a good writer. :)
Date: 02/28/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
What could have possibly happened? Unfortunately that's all I can think to say, but this has me tearing up and it doesn't even have a death warning, but it a certain kind of death. Devistating...
Date: 02/28/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Awesome. Most awesome. And also most depressive. But not a flat out, screaming, in-your-face depressiveness. More of a real sadness. It actually reminds me of an encounter I had with an old friend. We used to be insanely close, but hadn't talked for a couple years. This pretty much summed up what happened.
One of the most realistic stories I've read.
Date: 02/28/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
THAT'S so sad..... twins talking as if theyre just strangers
Date: 02/28/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
oh shit
you made me cry XD
i loved the song too
jeez. i love angst. so much. ♥
Date: 02/28/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
That was really sad.
I really hope this never happens in real life, but your writing style is really good and the song really helps.