Date: 03/17/08 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I love it and I love you for update so often :)
Date: 03/17/08 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I.Love.This.
You made me like even Vanessa! She's pretty lovely =) But...Eveyone knows that Tom's soul mate is Bill, and vice versa! XD It's so late and I'm saying lots of stupid things..but the important is: This story is amazing!
Date: 03/17/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
Is it wrong to kind of really dislike Vanessa? Not that she's done anything wrong, or indeed been in the story much, but Tom shouldn't be with her, but with Bill :D Also, just a question, does Bill still live at home with Simone and Gordon?
Good story. I really like the concept and the idea. its sad that such a big rift has developed between the twins! Update soon! I Can't wait to read what else is going to happen! :D
Author's Response: Don't feel bad, I don't care for her much either, though I'm trying not to let that show any more than neccessary, lol. And no, Bill doesn't still live at home. I'll address that soon enough, along with what he's doing now that the band is over.
Date: 03/17/08 08:19 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I adore your writing style. Please write more.
Date: 03/17/08 07:10 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I love that you can get all of that from one scene and one internal dialog. Great stuff.
Date: 03/17/08 07:00 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I can feel Tom's frustration. Very well-written. Please update soon! =)
Date: 03/17/08 06:03 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I really like your writing! It's a different take, a different perspective and it's very emotionally-charged. Loved this!
Date: 03/17/08 05:43 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
i can't wait to know what bill's thinking. it's good how he's absent in this scene and crazy how much i terribly miss him and want him to be there.
Date: 03/17/08 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - Transatlanticism
this story is interesting and...different...
i wanna read more
Date: 03/17/08 12:27 am Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
it IS short... and it's like one is given a favorite candy and then it's taken out of his/her mouth straight away... could taste it but couldn't savour this taste...
though it tasted bitter deliciously!!!!
Date: 03/16/08 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
I feel for Tom, I really do. He's screwed his life up so much it's rediculous. And what's worse is that he basically ended Tokio Hotel without talking to the other guys.
I like he feels guilt for not calling Bill, of all people, and the general disconnect with his family and friends in Germany. I look forward to seeing some development from him because it's obvious his life isn't really working for him.
Date: 03/16/08 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
I want to see The Confrontation, and why, exactly, Tom left in the first place.
This is really beautifully written.
Date: 03/16/08 11:42 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
and wanted to add that my heart is shredded by this chapter ... it was already torn by the previous ones... so... nothing will be left soon... if you don't amend the situation. *winks*
Date: 03/16/08 11:40 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
one more chapter.. and thoguht i thought it cannot get any better - it does... I loved how you described Simone's feelings and reactions... awesome...
and Bill - poor guy... he doesn't have a clue, right???
Date: 03/16/08 09:11 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
we're a little closer to fully understanding what happened but god is there even room for a happy ending in this? your writing style is simply amazing
Date: 03/16/08 08:29 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
You're leaving me so unsatisfied! I feel like biting my nails or something.
Date: 03/16/08 07:23 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
Eeeh want more. =]
xx
Date: 03/16/08 07:20 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
I...I.. I don't know what to say. I'm stunned.
This is an amazing story, you can't stop reading once you've started. I spend the whole morning reading and I still can't get enough of it.
I think you're and amazing author, you're really good with words and you can really capture all of Tom's feelings in a simple but powerful sentence.
You seriously need to continue this and update soon! :D
Date: 03/16/08 05:43 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
This is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter :D