Date: 03/23/08 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
Tom wonders how long it took Bill to learn to say my instead of our and how long it will take to reverse the process.
This was unquestionably my favorite line of the chapter, though the withheld hug part pulled at my heart pretty strongly.
And what's this? They weren't even sober for what happened? Jeez...
Date: 03/23/08 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
I've been too busy to read much lately, but I finally took the time to sit down and start this. I put recessional on repeat and started reading.
The combination of the music and the story is brilliant. The music alone is beautiful. The story alone is beautiful. The combination is moving.
This is the sort of thing that inspires me to write and leaves me torn between desperately wanting to read more and wanting to go attempt to write something as creative.
Date: 03/23/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
god, your end notes cracked me up wierdie.
Gah, what to say about this chapter. It was so sad... but so necessary. What in the world are our favorite twins going to do with each other? (no pun intended). I just want to see them move past the hurt and discomfort. *sigh*
Date: 03/23/08 10:40 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
guess it' Saturday already... and no update... *pouts*... checking for updates the whole day... wanna see more...
Date: 03/21/08 12:44 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
yep, still sad. this is kinda depressing. i was suprised that tom hadn't thought of it as abandoning bill. i'd like to hear more about what happened after tom left too. will the g's be making an appearance? i shall be waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 03/20/08 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
I loved it. This is great!
Date: 03/20/08 08:01 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
Everytime I read this, I can feel my stomach tying up in a knot. It's really heartbreaking, but amazingly good, and even more amazingly written. I can't wait for your next update.
Date: 03/19/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
I am strangely in love with the amazingness that is this fic.
Date: 03/19/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
Killed it.
Author's Response: lol, is that a good thing?
Date: 03/19/08 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
Erm, I still don't know why Tom left. I'd kinda like to know, like now. I mean, if you feel like telling us.
I really enjoy this, so much.
Date: 03/19/08 09:21 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
OOhh.. I don't want to wait till saturday.. :P
There is something going to happen, I can feel it!
Date: 03/19/08 07:38 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
omg poor bill.
his dialogue is just heartwrenching.
Date: 03/19/08 06:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
this is awesome, and i've only read the first chapter. :) i love how you managed to weave the lyrics with the story so fluidly, it makes everything twice as nice to read. great work! :D your way with words is completely enrapturing.
Date: 03/19/08 06:24 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
The interaction between them is very well-written. SO angsty and tense. Update soon!
Date: 03/19/08 05:31 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
Something is going to happen: I can feel it..U_U !! Wooow I'm really curious!! Keep on uploading. it's lovely
Date: 03/19/08 04:00 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
Wow, it's SO good!
Date: 03/19/08 12:47 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
it's so sad...
poor bill
Date: 03/19/08 12:27 am Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
why Bill was laughing though??? when announced about the marriage? i don't get it... but nevermind...
still hot, still emotional and stressful...
thanks...
Date: 03/18/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
This is so sad. Is it always going to be sad? Are they going to hook back up? I shouldn't ask questions just wait and read but the tension between the twins in this makes me anxious.
Date: 03/18/08 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Genug
Oi.
Tomi, Tomi, Tomi, you just don't get it. I'm glad you finally do. As for Bill, I'm glad to see some character development beyond the insurmountable anger that you can practically feel radiating from the computer monitor.
God, I hope they work this out.