Date: 03/26/08 02:04 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
You're killing me!!!
Date: 03/26/08 01:59 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
oh wow, MORE :)
Date: 03/26/08 01:37 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
I have no words. The tension was absoultely delicious and I am so eager to find out EXACTLY what happened that night it's crazy.
Evil, evil cliffie.
Date: 03/26/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
its going to be 'the talk' :D
ahhh, this chapter was amazing just like the others
can't wait for the next one!
Date: 03/25/08 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
God, this is so [i]painful[/i]!!!!! Utterly! Gawd, i want to know more, and they NEEDZ interaction!! Homg. I love this fic, maybe more than All Reason, and i remember when i read the one-shot, or the beginning of this and though to myself "Wow, that was entirely unsatisfying". And now, you made more! Imagine how happy that made me!! So please. End the pain. >.< I'm dying to know what happens!! And whats [i]happened[/i]!!
Date: 03/25/08 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
GAH GAH GAH GAH GAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH
MORE RIGHT NOW CAUSE THIS SI KILLING ME ALIIIIIIIIIVEEE
IT BURNSSSSSS
..
*iz dead*
Date: 03/25/08 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
Yay, more updates for this one. I love how Tom's so awkward with everyone but Vanessa now. Very well-written. Update soon!
Date: 03/25/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
Great chapter, as always! Yey, you'll update more often! *dancing like crazy*
Date: 03/25/08 01:51 am Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
this is a great story... and it develops nicely.. it's just the right speed.. not rushed.. but still it has the frames of Tom's visit..
Gustav couldn't make himself see Tom. that's like Gus, I believe.. ))
I hope that the feelings Tom has for his brother will flood him and this will overcome and overpower his fear to be rejected... cause he is afraid and he left before because of being afraid...
Author's Response: Tom's guilt about that night extends beyond fear of rejection...oh, the things you readers don't know yet... :D
Date: 03/25/08 12:30 am Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
It's so sad and beautiful at the same time, and I really don't know how too feel..
But I don't want Tom to want Vanessa, I want him to want Bill :P
Date: 03/25/08 12:28 am Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
i'm really looking forward to the next chapter. weeeeee!!!
Date: 03/25/08 12:27 am Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
oh goodness. The awkwardness is fucking coporeal, but to be honest Tom needs it. When he left he didn't think about how it would affect everyone else; now he knows. I'm glad he was able to connect with Georg on some level, and I hope one day Gustav will be able to actually see him. I can't wait to see what's going on with his life.
As for popping in on Bill, I have mixed feelings about that. I'm glad he went to see him, because if he had asked Bill they probably wouldn't have done it. I know Bill's hurting and I can't wait to see him start to work past it a bit.
And they need to have THE TALK. :D Great chapter as always.
Date: 03/25/08 12:21 am Title: Chapter 9 - All The Comforts Of Home
This story breaks my heart and makes me ache. You are doing such a beautiful job communicating the emotions of everyone and drawing the reader in.
I am so angry at Tom for what he did, and at the same time I ache for him because I can see how badly his mistake has hurt him.
Date: 03/24/08 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
O.O more...NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/24/08 08:52 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
bill taking a step forward to hug tom: omg so much win omg omg omg
are you going to expound on vanessa's character?
i haven't read a fic wherein there's a serious competition for bill, and i think you have what it takes to write THE ULTIMATE OFC. XD
Date: 03/24/08 04:31 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
I reeeally love this story, I have told you before but it never hurts to say it again. Amazing!
Date: 03/24/08 02:13 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
I'm interested to see how Tom and Bill's situation will turn out. Tom doesn't really seem to like his girlfriend much either ...
Date: 03/24/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
...
I really don't know what to say. I don't think I can describe how this made me feel. Definately loved it, though. I'm waiting for more!
Date: 03/24/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
oh!! so the intrugue is revealed of what happened THAT NIGHT...
thanks for the chapter... enjoyed it..
It's overwhelming that Bill did m0;km7; pursue the solo career..
Date: 03/24/08 12:24 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Natural Progression
This is quickly becoming my favorite fic on the site, and has somehow become even better (in my mind) than "All Reason..." and I loved that fic. :)
