Date: 03/28/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
O_O
why have I not found this fic until now?
you ahve had me crying through every chapter
there's just such a hopeless feeling over it all
I just want Tom to break, to give in to all his botteled up emotions, to stay in Germnay and to make up with everyone...
and yeah, I dont like Vanessa
Date: 03/28/08 03:54 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
FUCKING VANESSA!!!!
Date: 03/28/08 01:56 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
I can't believe Tom just left Bill after kissing him to answer his phone! He's going to end up making things worse between him and Bill!
Date: 03/28/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
Bill for sure should just jump Tom as soon as possible!!! and break his phone... and never let go back to LA...
I want them to find the way to accept that they love each other...
chapter is beautiful... breathe....the eyes... and the voice of Bill in Tom's mind so that he would do smth...
it's cool...
Date: 03/28/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
ahh places my comment on the first chapter. it was supposed to be for this one.
cant wait to read more
Date: 03/28/08 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
left me shaking...
punches vanessa shhhh!
Date: 03/28/08 12:17 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
Oh god! It went where I thought it was going, but god damn it still shook me! I feel so bad for everyone involved.
Date: 03/28/08 12:10 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
Can the healing begin nao?
God. Two steps forward, one step back.
The panic attack scene was bitterly sweet. You continuously reinforce how much they've grown apart. It's always consistent, always there in the back of Tom's mind. Sad, but true.
I can't help but groan at Vanessa's intrustion from across the ocean; perhaps it needed to happen but it was such god awful timing. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03/28/08 12:03 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
god, that's beautiful
Date: 03/26/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
Goddamn cliffhanger! You better update ASAP! ;)
Also, this is my favorite story right now :)
Date: 03/26/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
Damn. I remember when i thought it was funny when i left a cliffy on my own fics, but this is just downright cruel.
Date: 03/26/08 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
Nooo.... I can't stand the suspense! They're FINALLY going to talk about that night, and you stop there?! Argh, the next chapter better come soon or I'll go crazy..!
Lol. Anywayz, wonderful chapter as always. I can never get enough of how awkward they are with each other. It's a nice change from all the usual fluff of the other stories.=P
Date: 03/26/08 11:51 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
You're soooo evil...stopping there...*mumbles about evil cliffhangers*
Please write more! MORE, you hear???
Date: 03/26/08 08:02 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
I love the quiet but tense mood of this fic.
Date: 03/26/08 04:39 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*kills herself*
...
*return from the dead* - AND THATS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!
*dies again*
Date: 03/26/08 03:58 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
Gosh..I just love this story...im addicted! Please continue soon.
Date: 03/26/08 03:00 am Title: Chapter 10 - N-S
*gives cookies to the evil author.. who is not that evil after all... *
so.. this is the finish-line already for them.. thery gonna talk about that night... i feel relieved.. becuase all this time i was afraid Tom would chicken out again and leave not saying a single thing... let them speak.. please...