Date: 03/29/08 09:45 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
Nooo! Don't go Tom!
Date: 03/29/08 09:24 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
"Tom can't swim those three inches any better than he can swim those three thousand miles. He's not strong enough."
That was my favorite line. Update soon! :D
Date: 03/29/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
mind over heart
mind over heart
mind over heart
Date: 03/29/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
omg. :-(
Date: 03/29/08 06:35 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
I read this fic all in one go, and I must say it's really heart wrenching. I can't wait to read the next part.
Author's Response: hehe...
Date: 03/29/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
he is leaving!!!!!!!! bastard!!!!! how can he!!!!!!! how can he be so weak....... noooooooooooooooooooooooooo~! i loved that Bill was there and asking for a kiss... i wanted him to jump Tom.. but this was nonetheless as good.. ))
Date: 03/29/08 04:44 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
oommggg !! It's so good! I love it.
Date: 03/29/08 04:26 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
fucking tom!!!! *slaps him*
Date: 03/29/08 02:53 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
wow
that was
shit
O_O
I dont want him to go back, I want him to stay, i want him to ditch Vanessa too...
but im glad he and Bill kinde of made up, well, at least they understand eachother better now
gaaah...this fic is heartbreaking!
Date: 03/29/08 02:05 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
No! I don't want him to get on the plane!!! Damn stubborn Tom!
Okay, beyond me freaking out over what this plot does to me, this chapter was great. They are all great. I love the imagery and the intensity.
Date: 03/29/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
"It doesn't matter that Bill's sitting right there. He may as well still be across the Atlantic. Tom can't swim those three inches any better than he can swim those three thousand miles. He's not strong enough."
...loved it. Can't describe how much.
Update soon, ok?
Date: 03/29/08 12:13 am Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
i cry...
this is soooo good
Date: 03/28/08 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
"It doesn't matter that Bill's sitting right there. He may as well still be across the Atlantic. Tom can't swim those three inches any better than he can swim those three thousand miles.. He's not strong enough."
That was a really fantastic line.
Date: 03/28/08 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Fight or Flight
He can't go home! Make him go back to Bill this has gotten really sad really fast!
Date: 03/28/08 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
NO! Vanessa's nice an all but I want Tom and Bill to be together! Make it all work out. Please, and update soon
Author's Response: lol, soon enough?
Date: 03/28/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -hate you-
well, maybe not 'hate', but still. Its a strong dislike here. Homg. Please. You are killing me slowly. They kissed. They fucking kissed. Homg. Homg. And now i feel like I am going to hyperventilate. Jeez. Please update soon!!!!!!!! !!111 !!! . ^-^
Date: 03/28/08 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
Wow. Just wow.
I really can't wait for your next update. God, this is awesome...
Date: 03/28/08 09:50 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
Nooo! That is not a sign! That is an interruption! Finally they get to talk and so many things come in their way. At least they've managed to understand each other a bit more. Tom is so afraid of their relationship. Good chapter, update soon!
Date: 03/28/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
You have no idea how happy I was to see this updated. I really like your Tom and Bill and the way you write them. The idea of them actually parting for so long is terrible but I love how they're mending their relationship now. Poor conflicted twins!
Date: 03/28/08 07:57 am Title: Chapter 11 - Breathe
that was just brilliant.