Date: 04/02/08 06:59 am Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
agh the tension! Congratulations! It's remarkable that after so many chapters you still have us all biting our nails! ;)
Date: 04/02/08 05:19 am Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
It was really good chapter. Vanessa is in danger =D.
I've got some vision ^^
*Vanessa comes back home. She can't see Tom anywhere. "Tooom! Are you here?" she screams, going upstairs. She hears some moans and banging sounds. "Tom? What the hell?". All the sounds stop. Vanessa walks to bedroom and see half naked and blushed Tom who is trying to put on his t-shirt. "You asshole! You cheated on me! Where is the girl?" she says. Suddenly Bill gets up from under the bed. "Hi, I'm Tom's brother, nice to meet you" *
Haha xD.
Date: 04/02/08 04:53 am Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
I love it. Absolutely LOVE it. This is just perfect. I really admire you, you're such a talented author and wow, this whole plot is brilliant! You can never really tell what's about to come next and I like that very much! It makes everything much more interesting. Wow, great work!
Date: 04/02/08 03:27 am Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
wow
wow
wow
thay are both equally fucked up
thats good
and I think bill is staying
I hope Vanessa...dies on her way home from work or something *evil*
Date: 04/01/08 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
lovely, lovely, lovely!!!!
good he is not letting him to hotel... maybe he will get the willpower and courage in himself to talk this time for real...
i just can picture the face of Vanessa - she will be sure Bill is more beautiful than her.. at least if she has eyes!! )))
Date: 04/01/08 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
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:)
Date: 04/01/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
Can't wait to see how Bill interacts with Vanessa. She seems nice so far but I wonder if that's really true or if she's got a mean streak hidden somewhere. And women can tell when they've got rivals, but she'll be thrown off because it's Tom's brother and she won't understand why she feels the way she does.
Look at me all speculating.
But I wonder if Bill and her will genuinely get along or will it be this sort of forced politeness. And for some reason I still think Bill would out bitch her. That is his man, honey. Don't you forget it. Even if Tom is being stubborn about it. LOL
OMG I am so happy about this new update. Thank you! *dances*
Date: 04/01/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
Kiss kiss KISS!!! Now! JAA good idea! :D
I want Vanessa to be stuck in traffic for the rest of her life :P
Is it mean to want that..?
Date: 04/01/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
Of course it's Bill. Who did people thik it was? Saki?
You'd better give me a happy ending to this story, damn it!
Date: 04/01/08 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
they are both strong in their own ways.
i'm looking forward to read about bill tom and vanessa in one room.
that'll be wow.
Author's Response: Hehe. Next time...
Date: 04/01/08 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
yahoooooo
roller coaster ride
Date: 04/01/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
He asked BIll to stay; at least that's something... My heart goes out to the both of them, but I must say: GO BILL! He took the initiative and went to LA. Good for him.
Date: 04/01/08 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
AH!!!! I think at this point, all this story can do is make me scream in agony. But, its a good kind of agony. I think. ^^'
Date: 04/01/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
Omigah cliff-hanger!
Date: 04/01/08 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
asdölfkjasdlfknasdölkasndf omg.
I wish I could be coherent but I just. It's Bill, right? Please be Bill!
Date: 04/01/08 11:56 am Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
voice: O.O ..... its me.
tom: who?
voice: SANTA!!! x )
Date: 04/01/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
oh...
I got shivers down the whole of me when i rerad about the wake up after the drunk night
poor Tomi...feeling so gulity
and now; Bill in LA
why? I wanna know! *jumps up and down*
Date: 04/01/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
Yay! Bill came after him! Vanessa's gonna have a heart attack though. Does she even know Tom has a brother? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 04/01/08 08:55 am Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
woeiiii!! yeaahh.. bill wants tomi! :D
Date: 04/01/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 14 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part II (or Beep)
Bill!