Date: 04/18/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
Shit shit shit. I remember why I love you.
Date: 04/18/08 03:50 am Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
omgyay! is it bad that i fangirl just a little every time this updates? this was really bittersweet. at the beginning i thought it would be another one of those chapters that has me wishing tom would just GIVE IN and realize how much he's hurting them both. seems like he finally did, so this is a hopeful one. i just hope tom doesn't freak out next chapter.
Date: 04/18/08 03:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
omg omg omg
im drowning with tom.
this is exquisite.
Date: 04/18/08 03:38 am Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
Oh man, oh man, oh mannn. You reduced me to such a pathetic mess with this chapter.
Date: 04/18/08 03:32 am Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
Yaaaaaay!
xD Now I'm so jazzed for what happens next!
Date: 04/16/08 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
Oh it's great to be back to this story, I've been on vacation and when I came back the site was down, but now! :) You're still as amazing as ever. I loved the little part about the two of them in the vomb taking different parts of a personality, so cute your heart aches :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04/14/08 07:42 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
This fic is amazing. Please, update soon!
Date: 04/14/08 06:16 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
This is a really fantastic story. I love your style and the way you let the characters take their time developing in a natural manner without rushing emotions that can't be forced through. It appeals to me because it is very realistic and I believe what I read 100%. The complicated relationship between the twins is such a beautiful disaster -forgive me for quoting Kelly Clarkson- or mess, if you like, and the feelings are so well described -even without big analysis and long explanations. With few well-picked and well-placed words you manage to keep my attention and I'm still waiting desperately for every new chapter and haven't been disappointed one single time yet.
I hope you could use some of what I've written, at least as a huge compliment...
Take care, Mia.
Date: 04/13/08 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
Yay Vanessa's gone (I should feel bad for saying that but I don't). Bill and Tom will work eveythign out and it will all be ok again! Imagine me saying that in an overly happy, dreamy voice and that's pretty much me! I'm and sick and twisted romantic (who doesn't believe in true love but that's another story completley) what can I say? Update soon.
Date: 04/13/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
HOMG. YAY. ^^
Date: 04/13/08 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
That's precious.
Date: 04/13/08 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
I've read a lot of stories on here but this is the first i've ever reviewed, that's how amazing this story is. And that's what it is. it's not just a good fanfiction it's a good story. You write exceptionally well. I love how you delayed telling us the past instead of starting with it and then only revealing it when it needed to be said. I love your character development. We know who Bill and Tom are and how they act but you made them your own and they came to life with your words. And Vanessa, I was prepared to hate her but you made me feel for her. That's great because people continue to read a story when they care about the characters and what to know what happens to them. And you've done that. And now Bill and Tom are going to play together and I couldn't help it, it was so emotional I had to review. So yeah, props to you and I can't wait until you update. Sorry this is so long. ^.^'
Date: 04/13/08 10:24 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
yay no Vanessa for few days ^_^ use the days wisely Tom.
Make it right :p
love the update as usual
Date: 04/13/08 08:05 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
Aaahh.. how could you stop here??! :P
Go on soon!! :D
Date: 04/13/08 07:49 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
Oh I love this so much, you're a great author and this story is awesome!
Date: 04/13/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
gaaaaaaaaahhhhh! and you stop this here!!! bad bad bad bad BAD!!!
gosh... right here!
damnnnnnn! why god why?!?!! *punches the wall*
Date: 04/13/08 03:44 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
sad ; (
Date: 04/13/08 03:12 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
Ouch. You are going to kill me with the angst here. Excellent job as usual.
The shift in dynamic is getting more and more obvious now. And I love, love love the double meaning of Bill's words: "I think coming here might have been a mistake."
I don't know why, but those words gutted me.
I can't wait for more.
Date: 04/13/08 02:47 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
I am so happy that she left and I know that I really shouldn't be. I don't know what I'm supposed to be feeling here. I think I'm as confused as Tom is.
I love how you talked about playing together being more intimate than if they'd kissed again. I totally get that and I was thinking the same thing before you even said it.
Date: 04/13/08 02:44 am Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
Gutted yet again. The dynamics are shifting in this chapter like sand. I feel sorrier for Vanessa than I thought I would. I think that's a testament to how great an author you are. I'm kind of antsy to find out how this impromptu jam session will end up.