Date: 04/22/08 03:10 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
You let them get married?!
I'm so in love with this story, you have no idea. You've completely wrenched my feelings this way and then that way and then this way again and all through the last chapter all I could think about way Bill showing up just before Tom got married and stopping it and them running off happily ever after. When Bill showed up, I had the hugest grin on my face, and then you went and shattered it with that last sentence.
I guess all I've got left is to just sit here and wait patiently for tomorrow and pray there's a happy ending, because if there's not, I might just cry.
Date: 04/22/08 03:05 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
oh..but...no, Tom married? No way, I'm not liking this anymore.
Date: 04/22/08 03:01 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
Aaaghhh... can't wait till tonight then :o :P
Date: 04/22/08 02:45 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
I'm close to crying. Honestly. I hope for the best, for both of them. Bill giving Tom advice was simply heart wrenching. And the last line, god...
Date: 04/22/08 02:13 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
noooooooooooooooooooo
I am crying ok
I am sitting in school sobingh my eyes out
that was too freaking bad
I dont know what to say
he shouldnt have gotten married
and
aaaaaaaaah...
that was so sweet and...
T.T
I need to get myself together, school starts in 15 min...
*tries to breath*
Date: 04/22/08 01:57 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
:(
I'm broken now.
Date: 04/22/08 01:49 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
I swear, I teared up. Marvelous darling; simply, heart wrenchingly, amazingly marvelous.
Date: 04/22/08 01:43 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
... D: -pelts with rocks!- You terrible tease. -hides away the fan art until happy ending-
Date: 04/22/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
Right so as I've said before, I'm not actually reading this before it's finished.
But my god woman. Mum, that girl made me cry a lot *points at you* ! Bill giving Tom advice, it must have been absolutely killing him, yet he tried to act the part and be a good brother, and the intensity of that scene, how dense are they!? And then the last line, straight for the kill and straight to my tear channels. Fix this, please :D
Date: 04/22/08 01:34 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
I have this pain in my chest, and I gulp, and then I re-read it again. I want to hate it, and scream NO! It's just not right!... and then I think that if Bill loves Tom so much, of course he would not interfere with the possibility Tom could have a normal life. Aaaand...then again, I want to see what tomorrow's chapter will bring! You're amazing.
Date: 04/22/08 01:24 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
Honestly? ...I don't know if I can read the rest of this. I am literally sobbing over here this chapter hurt me so bad. I don't know if I'm just overly emotional right now or what. :(
No offense to you or your writing because it's, as always, amazing. But...I don't think I can take much more on this one. This chapter really broke me.
Date: 04/22/08 01:17 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
many, many rocks... Oh, how cruel you are!!!!! why this last minute!!! and why WHY why Bill is just watching him to get married? he is the fighter.. always been... you can't let it happen!!! please!?!!
Date: 04/22/08 01:12 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
NEIN!!!!!!!!!!!
*will make sure theyre soft foamy fake rocks though*
Date: 04/22/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
o.O *speechless*
i suppose i'll hold off with the rocks...for the moment.
Date: 04/22/08 01:07 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
Only one? This is the first time I have honestly NO IDEA what to expect, or even what to want to happen. You are amazing. It's like a soap opera but better.
Date: 04/22/08 01:06 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
NO!!!!
You can't do that!!!!
He is not .... He can't do it!!! *sob*
You ... They ... NOOOOOO!!!!!!!
This is not true!! *cries*
Tom is not married!!! And you are EVIL!!!
Date: 04/22/08 12:54 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
>:o
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/22/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
"If you get the urge to tell her you love her..." He sighs, shakily, and raises his gaze again, brave enough to hold Tom's this time, "just do it, okay? Anytime you can."
You are tearing my heart out with this! ;__;
Date: 04/21/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 22 - "I know Bill."
Ahh, I hope Bill comes ... and stops the wedding? :)
Date: 04/21/08 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 22 - "I know Bill."
AHHH! ::sobs:: You're so prolonguing the agony! lol