Date: 07/04/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Was the only person who was let down when it was all a dream? lol.
Date: 07/04/08 02:46 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
I'm kinda unsure how to take the ending. I was about the cry when Tom got married because he was happy, but then when it was a dream, I dunno....I loved it though.
Date: 07/04/08 12:17 am Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
*lips scrunch* the whole sex thing was a dumb thing to do on Tom's side.
Author's Response: I never claimed him to be the brightest bulb in the tanning bed.
Date: 07/03/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Oh wow. That was...amazing. The song was beautiful and the story was perfect. They encouraged each other. Again amazing! I'm excited to read further.
Date: 06/24/08 06:30 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
You..you... I wanna say you BASTARD!! But really can't. Hated you a chapter ago, but now I just, well, still sort of hate you for giving me a heart attack, but adore you as well for this. OH MY GOODNESS, girl! Mwah.
Date: 06/22/08 06:23 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
Oh my god... i though i was going to die if the whole thing was real and then you just go and pull something like this... and i... it's just... i have no words for it, but i think my tears of joy kind of say it all right now. Love this story sooo much!
Date: 06/22/08 06:18 am Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
::Pelts you with rocks:: if this doesn't turn around in the next chapter i'm going to kill you
Date: 06/22/08 06:13 am Title: Chapter 22 - "I know Bill."
Yeah it feels kind of strange to be imagining Jorg as kind of looking like them, but he IS their father...
Hope things get better after this cahppie, cause it's killing me
Date: 06/22/08 05:47 am Title: Chapter 16 - Verloren in Übersetzung
I loved this chapter so much... mainly because i understood the German :P
Date: 06/22/08 05:36 am Title: Chapter 13 - Drunk and Disorderly, Part I
Oh, you're good....
Date: 06/22/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - It's Your Gradual Descent, Into A Life You Never Meant
if you start using song lyrics as chapter names you're going to get my computer filled to the brink with new song, my dear. I'm already a Vienna teng freak because of this story. :P
Date: 06/18/08 02:07 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
Aagh. I can't even say anything to this chapter!
You had me, like, frickin' *crying* at the first chapter because it was so sad, and, like, frickin' *crying* now because it's not. Although that does mean you did an excellent job as a writer.
I sorta wish I had just skipped to the last chapter after I read the first one, just to see. Because then that would've saved me a lot of heartache reading through 23 chapters of angst and raw emotion.
"Bill watches Tom get married." That has to be the saddest line I've read in a long long time. I was just like, aagh. I have no words.
(I should probably pause here to analyze in exactly how many ways it's not good that I got so affected by some *story* on some *website* that's probably not good for my health. But I won't. Because that would ruin the moment. :p)
Just know that you are a really really good writer. I mean, like, fan-freaking-tastic. :]
Date: 06/18/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
I wasn't going to read this because it sounded really sad just from the summary, and I wasn't in the mood for sad. But curiosity got the better of me and I had to read at least the first chapter, especially when I saw that it had music in it.
Now, I just have to read the rest of it. I'm drawn in and I really want to know what happened for them to end up that way...
And it's really sappy, but I kinda wanted to cry, reading along and listening to that song. Is that bad of me? Well, it means you've done your job as a thought provoking writer, huh?
Congrats. :p
Date: 06/13/08 02:25 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
oh wow. little muse, I just finally read all of this in one go and... I am just... floored. this was so amazing, all of it. I can't believe it was all a dream, I mean, I had gotten spoiled before, but I managed to forget by the time I started reading and then it just HIT me. oh godddddddd, AMAZING. it tugged on everything I had, my heart, my belly... not many stories shake me, but this one did, and thank you so much for writing it.
Date: 06/02/08 05:57 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
HOLY MONKIES! IT WAS A DREAM?!
A FREAKING DREAM?!!?!?!?
YOU BITCH!!! *screams and picks up a rock to throw at Little Muse*
*suddenly drops rock*
Do you have any freaking idea how many times this story made me cry? And mind you i read it in one sitting?
*shakes head*
Shit, girl... you are good.
What else can I say?
I mean, yeah, I wanna stone you for making me (and many others i'm sure) think horrible things had gone wrong, but at the same time....
*giant snuggly hug*
You have NO idea how relieved I am.
Thank you for writing this! You made the world a little lighter there with that last chapter.
Date: 06/01/08 03:34 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
ufff.. I was so disappointed from the last chapter and till the end I didnīt understand... happy that bad dreams exist :D:D
great work, really. I enjoyed it. Thanks :-)
Date: 06/01/08 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Precipice (or Spring)
no no no no... nooooo!!!!!
Date: 06/01/08 07:24 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Other Side of the Planet
I like the picture of Tom without dreads, but maybe itīs enough without his cap :-D
Date: 06/01/08 07:03 am Title: Chapter 2 - Transatlanticism
oh no, he canīt marry her! NO!!!
;-)
lovely story...
Date: 06/01/08 06:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
Great, really great.... what actually happened?