Date: 03/06/10 07:53 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
I think I had a heart attack at the end of the last chapter...and now I'm all discombobulated with the whole 'it was a dream' thing.
Very moving story, though.
Date: 03/01/10 01:18 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
I have just read this again for what I believe to be the fifth time and it is even better than I remember it being before. Thank you for writing such an amazing (yet different) story :]
Date: 01/20/10 07:57 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
Have to be honest! I'm really disappointed by this ending. The tension between the twins and their interaction was very real. Though admittedly I had the nagging thought all the time that it was not realistic for Tom to have upped and left, I thought that you handled the idea in a really interesting way.
Tom was able to function in his new life, but not in an entirely healthy way since he had never dealt with anything. Bill's reaction and anger was painful and heartfelt. I liked the chemistry between them.
To find out it was all a dream was a very anti-climactic ending and actually left a bitter taste. The previous chapter with Bill's speech to Tom and them pressing their faces together- that was amazing. To find out it was not real was deflating.
Hope the review isn't too harsh! I did enjoy this story, the ending just turned it all around for me.
Date: 12/21/09 10:34 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
Lmao thank fucking god Tom didn't marry that cow!! hehe lmao GREEAAATT story!
Date: 12/18/09 02:39 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
so what was it like a dream???
Date: 12/18/09 12:23 am Title: Chapter 15 - Stay
yeah stay here its not like somethings more likly 2 happen if he does stay there! but thats good i like tom/bill better then tom/ofc :)
Date: 12/13/09 07:59 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
OH MY GOD I ADORE YOU.
Date: 12/13/09 04:28 am Title: Chapter 16 - Verloren in Übersetzung
Just wondering, what were they talking about? And laughing and so? Cinsodering that just before they seemed to be quite tense around eachother?
Otherwise, great chap! Love your writing!
Date: 11/29/09 05:22 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
you're heartless...you know that right? i cried all my way through chapter 23 and i'm crying right now too (though it's not exactly for the same reason) :) you nearly killed me with the line "bill watches tom get married"...i'm telling you, you're lucky that i have a strong heart! LOL anyway it's pretty useless for me to say that it was beyond amazing, each and every part of it. your writing is just beautiful and flawless and i love it :)
i loved it loved it loooved it *hums in a singsong voice* xD
much love, chiara
Date: 11/06/09 09:58 pm Title: Epilogue - Restoration
it's beautiful. thank you. and.. i'm sorry for like, spamming you with reviews but.. yes, it's just beautiful, this chapter, this realization.. god, i'm so relieved..
Date: 11/06/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Many Meetings
oh god.. does that mean, if bill hadn't wrote "i'll be there" on that stupid note, and if he hadn't left that morning.. tom wouldn't be marrying Vanessa? god.. please, i have to know this.. can you tell me??
XD
Date: 11/06/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Tired
"He doesn't want to think about the person he's supposed to love more than anyone. He wants to focus on the person he does."
This sentence, too, was needed..
this was really smutty. smut without details, but so emotional.. so very emotional, it's crazy..
Date: 11/06/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Priorities
"How important she is to him. How much he wants her to be the most important. How sorry he is that she's not."
thanks for this sentence.. it was needed.. this is just so angsty, kind of.. and hurting, really..
< 3
Date: 11/06/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Verloren in Übersetzung
there are some little mistakes, but it's okay.. i mean, the german sentences..
and uhm.. it still hurts, reading it, i mean..
and.. i love it.. and.. i still listen to that damn vienna teng song.. xD
Date: 11/06/09 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Reden
yeah.. did I already tell you, that reading this story hurts? yes?
yeah well it does..
you've got an amazing sense for dramatic passages, and.. details and..
i love everything about it.
and i love every tear it has made me cry until now..
i still listen to vienna teng.. yah, not that it matters..
Date: 11/06/09 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Other Side of the Planet
God, this story.. just hurts so much, just reading it, hurts badly..
yeah, maybe i'm just over sensitive, but I hate it. this feeling. god..
Date: 11/06/09 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Recessional
i wasn't even through half of this chapter,and i broke down into tears.. the song, i swear, will be the death of me..
god, this is so sad.. i feel like i could be depressive after this fic, for real..
thanks for sharing this song. really. thanks so much.. even if you don't even read this review, i wanna say thanks..
Date: 08/27/09 06:52 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
Gah!! It was all a dream?!!? Ohmigod this was amazing though. It was so sad, but beautiful at the same time!
And it looks like Tom learned to appriciate his brother more. XD
I swear I sat and read this in one sitting because I couldn't stop! It's like four in the morning now! But it was worth it.
I loved it, great job! :]
Date: 08/15/09 04:11 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
Whatttt?! That was all a dream >.<
*sigh* At least they're together
Date: 08/14/09 04:50 am Title: Epilogue - Restoration
I just spent my entire night re-reading this. I love it and always will :)