Date: 09/23/11 03:24 am Title: Chapter 11
Fantastic chapter, as usual =)
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 09/22/11 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
It amazes me just how shitty a parent can be to their children. Being a mom myself I just can't imagine doing anything so hurtful. I'm happy tho that Bill has the support of his mom & Gordon. Hopefully Jorg's words won't change Bill's mind about being with Tom. Great chapter =)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it and it amazes me too but it's how some parents. I have a great dad and had a great mom. I am glad you sound like a good mom. Does Bill actually sound like a parent or does it seem unrealistic? I am not a parents myself and am just kind of going with my insticts. Any advice you have would be great.
Date: 09/22/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aww...Bill & Tom graduated to hugs xD I love it =)
Author's Response:
I know it's so cute.
Date: 09/22/11 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
sorry i havent reviewed, im a lurker xD
cute story, im just waiting for more fluff from bill/tom, but im sure in time.
good story :)
Author's Response:
I have nothing against lurkers but it is nice to hear from some of my readers. I will be putting more fluff in and it will get more heated so keep reading and reviews keep me writing.
Date: 09/22/11 08:36 am Title: Chapter 10
theve had it so hard, tch poor Tom and Bill. I got all giddy at the boyfriend reference though that was cute of him :3
-hugs and loves on you-
Author's Response:
Yes, they are completely obessesed. Thanks for the cuddles and the words of encouragement.
Date: 09/22/11 07:23 am Title: Chapter 9
aww...that was a great present for tom...and i see bill liked being one...i love simone...she's awesome...a parent knows their child...even if the child doesn't completely know himself...i'm so glad the kids are happy again...bill is such a sweetheart...i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you I am glad you liked it. I am also glad you liked how Simone knew what Bill wanted to say before he said it.
Date: 09/21/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awie gotta love christmas! I wish we had the entire deal about christmas here but most of the population is Hindu/Muslim :S There are mad parties around town but eh who goes to those xD
Author's Response:
I am glad that Christmas in September isn't a deal breaker. I haven't gotten much response so I am guessing a lot of people don't like it. I am glad you liked it and glad that I gave you a bit Christmas since it sounds like you don't get much.
Date: 09/20/11 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
ok so tom's dad used to rape him?? yikes...and thats why he doesn't want poor meg to be in the pagents...humm this story is a little more serious than i thought...^.^
Author's Response:
Yeah well I like serious stories. Fluff never really did anything for me. I thought a few serious stories would make me out to be a good writer.
Date: 09/20/11 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
Short but sweet =) What are the odds of Bill's date being Tom's co-worker. At least Tom has her figured out...not that he'd hook up with her anyways. I'm really glad that Georg is so supportive of Bill. Maybe it's the way u set it up, but now i'm curious as to why Georg doesn't want kids. Maybe it's nothing. And I can totally relate to the whole friendship thing. I've been best friends with my "Hooker" since we were in kindergarten, like 30 yrs. *sighs* damn i'm old :) (Oh, & she's not really a hooker) lol.
Author's Response:
Odds in a story are always skewed. I always had the older brother thing because my older brother was awoll my whole life. I like the whole supportive thing. He doesn't want kids because he's seen how heart broken Bill is over his wife and how he worries over Sophia. I'm glad you like the friendship thing and I got that the hooker thing was a joke.
Date: 09/20/11 11:06 am Title: Chapter 8
i dont know how i miss all the updates.... and then i have to read 2-3 chapters together... not that im complaining, but you could use a really catchy banner so i would spot the story :P anyway love it more bill and tom action please xD
Author's Response:
I update every night around 10. I am glad you like it and I am working on the banner.
Date: 09/20/11 10:08 am Title: Chapter 8
o: something's wrong with georg isnt there?
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait and see.
Date: 09/20/11 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I just now discovered this story !!!!!!!!! YAY I am so glad someone took the idea !! YAY!!!!!! :) I'm going to start reading it now!! Thank you :)!
Author's Response:
You're welcome. It was a good idea.
Date: 09/20/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 8
brothers know...even if bill doesn't know himself yet...it'll all get figured out...
Author's Response:
Exactly. Thank you for sticking with this story. I hope you'll stay until the end.
Date: 09/19/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
the boys haha and i wont get bored that easy :D
Author's Response:
Ok. Hope to see you thoroughout this story. I was thinking i would write a second one after I'm finished about when the girls are 16. Maybe you could be my beta.
Date: 09/19/11 11:25 am Title: Chapter 7
I love these two xD
Author's Response:
Which two the girls or the boys? Thank you for reviewing I see your name on all the chapters. I hope you stay through the end and I don;t bore you too bad because we are about to hit a suagry sweet phase.
Date: 09/19/11 07:39 am Title: Chapter 7
i did feel for them...it's sad to lose someone you love...but there's a promise of a dinner date so all's good...
Author's Response:
I know it is sad to lose someone. Yes, the date overshadows some of the saddness. I didn't want the story to be too sad or too happy. In the middle is where I wanted it to run.
Date: 09/19/11 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story!!! I can't wait for an update! Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am glad you like it.
Date: 09/19/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 7
so wait is bill bisexual here?
Author's Response:
He doesn't know so he is confused and the readers will have to bear with it until the details work themselves out. Maybe but maybe not.
Date: 09/19/11 01:35 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm really liking this. Bill & Tom both have sad pasts & I damn near cried reading both. I like the gradual progression of their relationship. The girls' friendship is so solid considering how young they are & it's so sweet. I'm looking forward to another chapter =)
Author's Response:
Well, I've always had really solid friendships even when I was really little and I hated people always saying you'll get over your fights or oh they'll have a new best friend next week so I wanted a strong, young friendship here. I also like stories were a realtionship builds it's not all sudden and we just met but I love you.
Date: 09/18/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
from the mouths of babes...the girls know how the guys really feel...i'm lovin it...
Author's Response:
I always notice how kids seem to notice things that the rest of us miss. I think it's got something to do with the fact that they see things with a simple innocence and not with all the constraints we do. I wanted to put that in story. I'm glad you like it.