Date: 09/28/11 04:53 am Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter, as usual =)
Author's Response:
Thank you that is so great.
Date: 09/28/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 15
lol this is cute!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 09/27/11 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 15
gotta love the connection between bill/tom...:D
Author's Response:
I know I love it whether it's in other people's stories or my own. Thank you.
Date: 09/27/11 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 14
love this chappie!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 09/26/11 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 14
Fantastic chapter =)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 09/26/11 09:57 am Title: Chapter 14
Oooh...this was good, can't wait to see what you have in store for up coming chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will continue to update as long as everyone keeps reading.
Date: 09/26/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 14
i understand why bill's upset at his brother...but he also has to realize that it's his life...if he doesn't want kids, why force him?
Author's Response:
I didn't realize when I wrote this that Georg not wanting kids would be such a big issue. Anyway this is how families are they all want babies to dote on and parents want their kids to be happy with a family of their own. People don;t understand how someone can be happy alone. It'll all work itself out.
Date: 09/26/11 07:13 am Title: Chapter 13
it was good...they don't want to rush things...that seems more real than them just having sex right away...
Author's Response:
Reall relationships often develop differently then books protray but I wanted a real realtionship in this book. Thank you for saying it seemed real that makes me feel like I achieved my goal.
Date: 09/26/11 05:34 am Title: Chapter 14
Lol omg Georg O: he's got a point though I mean he's being practical, why should he go marry or have ids when he dosent want it, Bill should understand
Author's Response:
This is all gets resolved but you should understand Bill's perspective too. He loves Sophia with all his heart and doesn't understand how someone can not want that kind of love. Bill should also realize that his brother is scared and maybe not ready for that committment.
Date: 09/25/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awesomeness!! Love it =D
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 09/25/11 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
i love the idea of a series...i would read it with no problem...i love how this story's going...it's great that bill stood up for georg...i would love to see these two when they're sixteen...
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked the idea of a series but it would be the girls when they're 16 not any of the main characters. I am glad you liked that. I watched my guy friend and his brother for a while before I wrote the brotherly scenes.
Date: 09/25/11 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
eeeep sexy! :D loved it tbh, being a first it was short and concise and honestly filled its purpose well i think :)
Author's Response:
Thank you I am glad you liked it.
Date: 09/25/11 10:01 am Title: Chapter 13
yes a sequel would be awesome, the girls could be 16/17 or something.
liked it. hey why dont u ever mention sophias other grandparents? xxx
Author's Response:
I wondered if someone would catch the lack of mention of Sophia's other grandparents. This will be explained more fully but if you remember the flashback to the hospital Mary's parents didn;t except Sophia because she was convienced and born out fo wedlocak and they were really strict about stuff like that.
Date: 09/24/11 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm sure it was hard for Tom (& Meagan) to be in the middle of a loving family. More so on Tom i'm sure. But i'm glad he's made it through =) Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I thought I should remind the audience that the past may be the past but people with bad pasts remember it vividly and bitterly.
Date: 09/24/11 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
i love the scene at Bill's place! lol
Author's Response:
Which one? I am glad you liked it. I try to make this stary as enjoyable as possible
Date: 09/24/11 01:28 am Title: Chapter 12
Hey there =] I'd loooove to be your beta! I adore this story and I want to do anything I can to make it better. Shoot me an email at sharpies_skate@yahoo.com if you're interested! =] That's also my msn id, if you use msn.
Author's Response:
I hope you're up for alot of reading because i am currently working on chpater 14 and i write really fast and get alot done on the weekends. i would be glad for the help. thanks
Date: 09/23/11 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
damn Bill! lol
Author's Response:
I know right. Hope you continue reading.
Date: 09/23/11 11:36 am Title: Chapter 11
i think the backround with Ricky is a good thing, it would be too forced if he just fell in love with Tom and never be with a gut before. And loved it like always and the holyday spirit is sweet and dont forget to write the opening presents part :)
Author's Response:
I won't I promise. I like the holiday spirit too which is why I had to write a Christmas story in September. I am glad Rickie fell so easily into the story.
Date: 09/23/11 07:51 am Title: Chapter 11
it's all good...it makes sense with rickie...that way it comes as less as a shock that he would go for a guy...and i think everyone's curious at one time or another...
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 09/23/11 07:37 am Title: Chapter 10
i do like how they're progressing...it's great...i'm so glad that bill stood up for himself and his daughter...it's great that simone can see how tom is making him happy...i can't believe how horrible tom's parents were...i could never imagine doing something like that to my kids...but tom's done a wonderful job raising his sister...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like how I am taking the relationship. I also like how Bill stood up. Simone seems to be very insightful into her youngest son. I know Tom's story is so sad. Thank you