Date: 10/03/11 08:20 am Title: Chapter 18
so unexpected O.o but it makes the story more interesting. are you gonna make it a happy end or a dramatic one? i think a dramatic one would be more realistic. loved it :)
Author's Response:
I'm a sucker for happy endings but I never really know where my stories are going plus none of us want to see them die. Still who knows, it all depends on where the story goes.
Date: 10/03/11 07:32 am Title: Chapter 18
*hugs* Touchy subjects are always the hardest to write about :(
But OMG what a scary turn of events. And it's even more frightening because Nut Meg (I love that btw) is suddenly and mysteriously(?) sick. I got a sinking feeling in my chest while reading the letter >.<
If I were Tom I would have passed out after reading the letter lol. Even going as far to hear positive I would have had a heart attack and died on the spot X(
Bill really loves him though. I love this it changes the challenge of just settling into the relationship.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I hated writing this chapter but I feel it's neccesary for the relationship. I would've died too.
Date: 10/03/11 07:27 am Title: Chapter 18
hey...shit happens...you can't always know the cards you're delt...but if they're willing to work through all this then nothing can stop them...and tom should get the test...you never know what could happen...
Author's Response:
I know but Tom is stubborn.
Date: 10/03/11 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
i had read this on my friends account but i made an account so i can review and stuff, i love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks, hang in till the end please.
Date: 10/03/11 01:26 am Title: Chapter 18
omg ;-; omg nooo x.x I hate Tom's parents I HATE THEM x.x
Author's Response:
Me too.
Date: 09/30/11 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
Sweet! I'm excited about being your beta! I don't know how you want to do this exactly, but if you would like to do it via email mine is lesliealycejennings@yahoo.com! Talk soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you and I really hopes this goes better than my last attempt to get a beta.
Date: 09/30/11 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 17
hey if want a beta i would love to help. just let me no .
Author's Response:
The position has been taken but I have a few other stories floatin in my head so thanks and I'll let you know.
Date: 09/30/11 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 17
I could be a beta, if you really need one. Lol poor Georg, he jus needs some looove!
Author's Response:
I already said yes to someone but it may not be the end. We'll see how this one works out. There may be hope yet. Thank you for recognizing Georg's need to be loved.
Date: 09/30/11 11:40 am Title: Chapter 15
Sorry for lurking this whole time, its a bad habit of mine ^_^" but if you're thinking of a sequel 11 years later, would "Teenagers and Tiaras" be a good one, I know it sounds pretty lame for a title ...Anywhozles, great story! I started reading lastnight and haven't stopped yet!!
Author's Response:
It's ok you stopped lurking. Thank you for the suggestion you are the first to rise to occasion. Doesn't matter lame or not I have a hard time coming up with titles. Thank you always glad to here I have new readers.
Date: 09/30/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 17
I can make you a banner. i do my own and a couple for other ppl. you can look in tie banner shop at my work my name is tokiok :)
Author's Response:
That would be great. I've sent you a message with my email. Thank you.
Date: 09/30/11 10:08 am Title: Chapter 17
xD love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Please keep reading.
Date: 09/30/11 09:09 am Title: Chapter 17
too sweet :D I love the two
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 09/30/11 08:10 am Title: Chapter 17
I lost track of something in this chpter or I may be confused. Isn't Bill older than Tom? If so there is a little part to be fixed. If not I need to pay closer attention.
Author's Response:
Tom is older than Bill. I probably confused a lot of people because it seemed Bill was older but Tom is older here just like in real life.
Date: 09/30/11 07:25 am Title: Chapter 17
so gus likes geo...maybe he could at least try...maybe that's the void that geo's missing...that would be interesting...and they love each other...they should just make it official and move in together...
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I am moving in that sort of direction but stayed tune we are about to hit some bumps.
Date: 09/30/11 05:55 am Title: Chapter 17
I am loving this story to pieces!! I love the relationship between the guys and the kids! So sweet!
Also, if you are still needing a beta, I would like to help! I could definitely keep up if you are going to update every other day. Everyday might get crazy, since I'm an au pair in Germany right now, but I check my emails constantly so communication shouldn't be a problem! Let me know if you need me!
Author's Response:
I am glad you love this story andthe relationships. I tired to keep them light without making everything sticky. I will update whenever possible so it might be everyday or every other day but I have stopped kidding myself sometimes I just can't focus on writing. I would love for you to be my beta especially since you have good spelling, tone and grammar.
Date: 09/29/11 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh no!!! poor geo...i hope he'll make it...and has he found the one? we'll see...
Author's Response:
Next chapter coming soon but I did get distracted so they may come a bit slower.
Date: 09/29/11 08:30 am Title: Chapter 15
i'm glad bill and geo worked it out...at least geo realizes what he wants...or doesn't want in this case...
Author's Response:
Sometimes you just gotta stand your ground no matter what and I wanted Georg to be sure of this decision so he would still be likeable and not a complete grinch.
Date: 09/28/11 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
Damn...poor Georg...are we gonna be able to find out more about his past?
Author's Response:
Definitely.
Date: 09/28/11 10:03 am Title: Chapter 16
awww georg :/
Author's Response:
Mopey music and a dark room caused this chapter.
Date: 09/28/11 09:17 am Title: Chapter 16
Poor Geo, I hope he'll be okay.
Author's Response:
I know I was listening to mopey music when I wrote this and this is what happened.