Date: 05/01/23 01:11 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/23/16 08:16 pm Title: Part 5: Circus
I'm happy that Bill still got to be on the stage ;) But I'm not sure about the ending... I like the ending! I love that they're happy and together and I love that Tom is all suited up and they're both enjoying themselves, but I guess I just didn't like the last line. It felt like it could've been more, I suppose. However, that's just me being a weirdo about it because you write so well and you use words that, while I'm familiar with them and their usage, I wouldn't really think to use myself because my mind gets muddled so easily (that's why I take a week to write a single chapter). Your usage of them was fantastic in conveying every aspect of the story, and I love it :)
Date: 09/23/16 07:42 pm Title: Part 4: Blackbird
And here I was yelling at my phone screen, dammit Bill! But now all is well... So far, that is. I might not believe in Toll in real life but I ship them hard in stories and always want them to be together. They're my OTP 👀
Date: 09/23/16 07:11 pm Title: Part 3: Roxanne
I love jealous Tom because it's kinda sexy in its own way lol Yet... I feel fairly sad for him. Sure, it's his fault he got involved in the first place, but he's so desperately in love now that it even hurts me the reader lol Bill better get his shit together 😜
Date: 09/23/16 06:23 pm Title: Part 2: Lady Marmalade
Well, I don't t have a man to steal! Anyway, I love jealous Tom. He's definitely one of my favorite types when it comes to writing. I feel so bad for him though. Poor boy. He's in love with Bill and there's nothing he can do about it :(
Date: 09/23/16 05:39 pm Title: Part 1: Prologue
I'm so in love right now! You have no idea. I feel like I've seen this floating around somewhere, but things like this have never really been my type. I suppose I thought it was more circus themed, judging by the title, which would usually be my reason for avoiding it in the past ;) But I'm glad I decided to read it when you tweeted it out. Honestly, it's fantastic so far. Also... Is Tom the milkman? 👀
Author's Response: You're making me so happy with all this, thank you so much for reviewing!!! And I think you may know by now 😘
Date: 09/23/16 10:33 am Title: Part 5: Circus
I'm practically farting glitter, it was that sparkly!
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Glitter bomb! (I like to think Bill always farts glitter)
Date: 09/23/16 09:13 am Title: Part 5: Circus
This story was... satisfying! I like how you approached the argument, since it's not exactly the easiest thing to write about, I suppose - it's so peculiar. One of my favourite bits is Gustav's cameo, don't ask me why, I just found it really sweet! So yeah, I think the glitter has been felt :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And yay for sweet Gustav!!! Glitter! Thanks for the review, moon face 😘
Date: 04/13/14 05:34 pm Title: Part 5: Circus
Cool story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am working on a few things right now, I've been battling writer's block and a busy schedule for a while, but every review is like a little seed of inspiration. :)
Date: 12/15/13 08:14 am Title: Part 5: Circus
This was great. I really love your writing. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I am currently working on a few things, so keep your eyes peeled!
Date: 09/10/12 11:49 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
Ah! I am not sure what happened to my original review! o_O
I loved your sultry Bill and seeing him grow up and mature into himself, then exploring what he really desired. And I loved your Tom, as a horny guy that evolved into a love-struck man. They are so precious together! Kudos to Bill for figuring out what he wanted and going for it!
Author's Response: thank you :3 I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for such a thoughtful review :)
Date: 09/09/12 04:26 pm Title: Part 5: Circus
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Date: 09/03/12 07:33 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
I always appreciate the feminine side of Bill. Thank you for hightlighting it in this story. LOVE it!!!
Author's Response: thank you!! :3 me too
Date: 03/04/12 11:16 pm Title: Part 5: Circus
Oh wow! I don't know why I didn't read this before but I'm glad I found it noW! That was such an entertaining and original fic, I really enjoyed it! :) love the progression of their relationship, it was absolutely beautiful!
Author's Response: thank you so much! yes, it's kind of nice these days to find something you actually like lurking around that hasn't been read yet...slow times :/ *is part of the problem*
Date: 01/11/12 08:42 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
There's totally glitter everywhere and the Hollywood atmosphere is so strong and so vivid, which is unlike anything I can put Bill into. I can totally see this happening, you're sooo good with description and characterization ;-)
Great story, simply stunning :->will lurk around to check out anything going on with you! xD
Author's Response: thanks so much, but I have to say I was pleasantly surprised with myself for this and I am not sure I can pull something off at this level again xD but...i'll try! haha. thank you so much, though, you're a sweetheart :3
Date: 01/10/12 03:44 pm Title: Part 5: Circus
I love this story! :-D
Author's Response: thanks so much, sweetheart. i'm so glad you read it and let me know that you enjoyed it!
Date: 01/10/12 11:46 am Title: Part 4: Blackbird
You're an awesome writer :-P
Author's Response: thanks so much!!! *heart*
Date: 01/10/12 11:30 am Title: Part 3: Roxanne
It's good! :-)
Author's Response: thanks :3
Date: 01/10/12 10:59 am Title: Part 2: Lady Marmalade
Amazing! :-D
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 10/22/11 04:27 am Title: Part 5: Circus
"the embodiment of his parents' sultry enterprise, king of the beautiful damned, and Tom was his captive angel"
That is an excellent line. Just stunning. great story, thanks so much!
Author's Response: thank you so much, darling! i'm so glad you enjoyed it <3