Date: 09/18/11 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Damn! I love this kind of a stories... I can't tell why, but I just do! The way you portray the characters makes me so... I don't know. I feel addicted. xD
Date: 09/18/11 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damn! I had a feeling this was going to happen! Stupid, stupid Tom!
P.S. In the previous chapter you should change the text in italics cuz it says 'Bill kissed Tom when he was 14' and in here he's 13. No worries though! Th story's pure awesome!
Date: 09/18/11 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm really liking this story! I seriously need to keep reading, I'll leave a longer review in the end.
Date: 09/16/11 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
I have a question... is this Bill bipolar or something?
I loved this story by the way, i´ve been reading the BBS and thats the one i liked the most
Author's Response: What in the hell is the BBS??? Is it something I wrote or something else entirely?
Date: 09/14/11 03:20 am Title: Chapter 10
Fantastic!!!!
Date: 09/11/11 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
"Bill is eighteen when he never has doubt Tom’s feelings again"
... and if Bill really believed him he was beyond stupid :)
Date: 09/11/11 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
Is it really happening? Did Bill finally grew some balls? Too bad that not earlier, he would keep some remains of his dignity at least.
Date: 09/11/11 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
"Bill crawled across the floor and grabbed onto Tom's leg."
Oh God, I'm so embarrassed to even read about such action, I don't know how Bill could survive doing that and not just die there and then after he realized how he humiliated himself.
Date: 09/11/11 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
""I don't like to view myself as a kid. Being a kid is awful." Bill shook his head, thoughts immediately going to Claude."
Claude?
Date: 09/11/11 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, where was Bill's dignity? For sure he didn't take it with himself to Tom's tent.... In general he seems to forget about it quite often.
Date: 09/11/11 02:46 am Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm...this was interesting...I think you skewed the timeline a little bit once or twice. When they were at the 4th of july thing, you said Bill was fourteen, but then he next chapter at six flags you had him back at 13 and it was a few weeks afer the 4th picnic...just thought I would point it out. This was a pretty good fic. Bill just kind of broke my heart and Iwas thinking that Tom was gonna be soem sort of pedo/sociopath thing. I'm glad it ended fairly happy though.
Date: 09/10/11 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
well, Bill is pretty stupid trusting Tom again, all of sudden, just because Tom saved his life. once a liar always a liar. but Bill is still so young, maybe that's why he is so naive.
Date: 09/08/11 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love it really! Tom was an ass but what can someone do when he looks so good and its so cool? lol
Author's Response: Thank you! I /loved/ writing this version of Tom. This story originally was something I wrote for another fandom and I just love the dynamics of that couple. Like the Tom character is so cold but you're rooting for him to get together with the Bill character the whole time. Thanks for your review (means the world to me) and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/08/11 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
sometime thing come back to be a fairytale again =)
Author's Response: Ahhh but what a twisted fairytale it was. Tom wasn't exactly Prince Charming up until the very end.
Date: 09/08/11 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
yes, sometime something is not always like a fairytale...
Date: 09/08/11 06:11 am Title: Chapter 10
I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you liked it! I wasn't quite sure if anyone was going to read this since it's one of those high-school-growing-up-first-time fics but I'd wanted to write something like this for a while
Date: 09/08/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter 10
I think you messed up the ages a little bit. Bill went from being 14, to 12 and then back to 14 earlier in the story, and also, at the beginning, there was only a two year age gap (you mention Bill being 13 and Tom being 15), and then later on you mention that there's 3 or 4 years between them, depending on what time of year it is.
Author's Response: *hides* please forgive me. This was un-betaed, originally for another fandom so things got messed up trying to adapt it for TH, and I totally ran out of time when deadlines rolled around. I'm trying to the best of my abilities to fix the mistakes. Thank you
Date: 09/07/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG I hate that Tom has a girlfriend -pouts and flails-
oh on a side note I thought that Bill was 14 in the last one, not 12
Date: 09/07/11 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mm, if this is in chronological order, shouldn't the top bit be "is fourteen years old when"? Or is it like... he feels as if he's twelve?
Author's Response: Fixed it... thanks.. this fic was for another fandom that I adapted
Date: 09/07/11 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's great to see something from you again :D
I can't wait to read this. *starts*
Author's Response: I love you... like seriously...