Date: 04/30/23 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pain
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 02/03/15 09:05 am Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
I just found your story, and let me tell yo, so far so good. I am going to keep reading, they are so cute together!!
Date: 09/02/12 09:44 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
DAMN IT! I AM SO UNSATISFIED!
Date: 08/04/12 10:52 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I want him to see :-O
Date: 02/24/12 08:41 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
this was a really good story!!
i would of liked to see if bill could see again!
u should make a sequel to this!!
Date: 01/22/12 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
Argh xD Now I don't know if Bill will ever 'see' Tom again:(
But it's a really good final piece of this story! Not what I expecting of it, but it's.. Yeah, I think that's the best part of it. I didn't expect it
Date: 10/14/11 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I kind of like that you ended it this way. I couldn't decide if I wanted Bill to be able to see or not. I mean, of course I want him to be able to see, but it didn't seem realistic necessarily. So I liked this. Nice job.
Date: 10/12/11 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
The image of Bill on the bathroom floor is just heartbreaking.
Date: 09/21/11 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
thank you for this
I wish that someone would also do a fanfic where Bill is deaf
Date: 09/19/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
thank you for doing this fanfic
I put a fic prompt in the fic prompt section of this site quit a while ago that I wanted a fanfic where Bill or Tom was blind and the other twin to care of him.
Date: 09/11/11 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Pain
CLIFHANGER >< I hate it! I m totally for team Light though, so perhaps you can write a sequel including both endings? haha xD Love it! rush a bit, but I enjoyed it:D
Author's Response: LOL. I don't think I will be writing a sequel though, so you must let your thoughts wonder as to how you wish for it to end. Thank you anyway! :)
Date: 09/08/11 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I think Im team seeing Bill, he deserves a full happy end I Love it
Author's Response: Then Bill will see for you! Thank you for reading! :)
Date: 09/08/11 11:19 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
Omg, you are such a bad person. I thought we would be able to find out about Bill's vision abilities, but noooo, bad Karin just couldn't give us that joy!
Haha, I'm just messing with you! I loved this story, and I loved the scene where Bill makes Tom get blindfolded. :'D I am glad you finished it~
Author's Response: Aww, sorry. :[ But I felt like this was the best ending for this story; I didn't want to drag it too long. LOL. Thank you anyway! I'm glad you read and found it good! Love you, Angie! <3
Date: 09/08/11 12:32 am Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
AAH! No! Not a cliff hanger ending! *Falls to the floor dramatically* WHY!!!
Author's Response: Aww, lol. I think this was the best place to leave it off. So you can make up your very own ending! Thanks for giving my story your time! <3
Date: 09/07/11 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
aww i love the story but i would have liked it to continue and say if he gets his sight back and if he did have them have sex with his sight but overall awesome story and makes me realize how much i am glad i can see
Author's Response: Thank you! The fact if he gets his sight back or not is for you to decide. Thanks for reading & reviewing! :)
Date: 09/07/11 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
I think the ending was simply brilliant, and I am glad you ere able to do this without second guessing yourself. So much packed into one short story, take a bow.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for those kind words! I'm really happy you thought so. You totally made me think a lot better about this story now! :)
Date: 09/07/11 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
loved it :D however i like it? :D Hmmm, that's a tough one, blind!Bill was a bit cute though but maybe I'll let him see again :D It was really cool of you to do this!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! For both reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it and if seeing Bill is what you would hope to see, then for you, Bill will see again! x3
Date: 09/07/11 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pain
I hate strawberry muffins, that's the main reason why I'd shoot you with them. XDD but I love you for writing such an amazing story.
I'd actually make Bill see. And geesh, I have been praying to god for a good mpreg, but it's almost impossible for me to get one, so the mpreg part plays in my mind. So yeah. That's kinda what I'd write in the sequel. :D
xoxo, Ema.
Author's Response: Lol. I don't know how strawberry muffins taste; I only eat the chocolate ones :D Thank you anyway once more! And for you; Bill will see again! <3 (and I ain't writing no mpreg, lol, I can't really stand it anyway! XD)
Date: 09/07/11 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
Lol, this was fabulous. I think I would like Bill to see again, if only because he has already been changed by this experience of being blind and I think he will appreciate the sights around him a lot more.
Author's Response: Thank you for such a beautiful review! If you wish for Bil too see, then he will see for you! Thanks for reading! <3