Date: 09/07/11 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
Heeeey, you're so mean by giving us such a cliffhanger. xDD Please, do a sequel, I'm dying here to know what happens next. I'd love to see it. Lol, see. xDD
Anyway, it's agonizing. :(
I'm preparing my strawberry muffin weapon just in case you don't write a sequel. xDD
xoxo, Ema.
Author's Response: Oh no, that's harsh! But I said it in End notes; The end is for you to decide. Everyone has a bit of creativity, right? So make up the perfect ending and I will validate it for you. *getting ready for a muffin war* I ALSO HAZ THOSE!! But mine are chocolate! XD
Thank you anyway! <3
Date: 09/07/11 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue
0.0 AHHH!!! LOL loved this story and the ending was a shock but I liked your idea. I'm all for seeingBill but the blindBill is good too, as long as Tom is there.
Author's Response: Thank you for all those nice words! And if you wish for Bill to see, he has his sight back for you! Thank you for reading! <3
Date: 09/07/11 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 5: Love
Not rushed, but romantic and LIGHT!? WooHoo!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU again! :) Light is what they all see when Tom makes them come, isn't it? LOL xD
Date: 09/07/11 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: Love
WHAT? A LIGHT?!
Author's Response: LIGHT LIGHT LIGHT. Light! xD
Date: 09/07/11 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 4: Realizations
Ok my favorite chapter. I love that Bill had Tom be blind for a few hours, amazing how one simple experiment can make a person understand. Also the kiss AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!
Author's Response: Awws, thank you! They were just meant for each other I think! :)
Date: 09/07/11 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 4: Realizations
Hehe, 'why haven't we done this before?' and it's so sweet that Tom is being blind for Bill..Tom is just sweet in general!!
Author's Response: Of course they should have done this earlier!! :D Thanks! :P
Date: 09/07/11 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 3: Disappointment
Tom is so great, taking care of his twin like that!! He is a sweetheart. But it was mean of him to snap at Bill!
Author's Response: Yes he definitely is! :) Thanks! ;)
Date: 09/07/11 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
I love this story, it must be so horrible being blind and just living in a world of darkness. Atleast Bill has Tom :D
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 09/07/11 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: Feelings
Did Bill fall or something, to end up on the floor? Tom is such a good big brother to just sit there even though his back hurt, to hold Bill :3
Author's Response: Honestly, I don't know. :D He might have just curled up there to cry... Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 09/07/11 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pain
Poor, poor, poor Bill! And also poor Tom! He hasn't failed Bill...It's not his fault :c I can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: Yeah, things aren't all to pretty there, Thank you. :)