Date: 01/30/12 05:21 am Title: two fingers
ehm okay I now you may not like me so much but you wanted my opinion:
I don’t feel like that this is a story at all, it’s just a plot and for me it was small with a few sentences and it didn’t really give me any opinion about the story at all, when I saw it I thought it was a story with a beginning, middle and ending but for me it was just a small summery. I can’t really say that I understood it at all, it would have been better if you wrote it a little long because when I read it I had more than 10 questions after wards.
Author's Response:
Hey, no, don't think i don't like you because of this review! Hihi. The thing is, there used to be a genre here, that has been blocked since. I don't know if you were a member of the site at the time? Anyway, the genre was called "Drabble", which basically means that the story has to be 100 words long, no more, no less. As i was having trouble writing shorter stories, i tried writing a few drabbles to practice. The drabble genre istn't for everyone, i totally understand that! And thank you so much for reviewing with your honest oppinion! <3
Date: 05/18/10 11:19 am Title: two fingers
O.O
^ its all i can say
very short and, different.
i dont know whether i like Tom/Gusti!
Author's Response: haha =P well, that's a really good reaction, if u ask me x) tom/gusti isn't such a normal pairing, which is why i wanted to try it out =D and the fact that it's a rape might be part of the reason why u don't like it.. =P
Date: 11/01/08 05:10 pm Title: two fingers
I love the pairing and I loved the angst, but as a story, I don't think that it was exactly whole. No matter how short the story is, it's good to have an idea, a plot, and an ending. Even when it was a joy to read, for me, it read more like a preview snippet of something that you haven't written yet.
Author's Response: thnx alot for the review and thinx SO much for being honest with me! the reason i even wrote drabbles to begin with, was actually because i can't write short things, so i love getting tips on how to do it better and don't worry, i know i suck at keeping things short and it always ends up.. i don't know how to put it.. erhm.. well, basically just not gd enough =P but htnx again for the review and ur honesty! *hugs*
Date: 09/12/08 06:16 pm Title: two fingers
Tom/Gustav is a rare couple but gosh they're my favorite pairing. I just love it how Tom is violating Gustav. Super duper hot. Plus Tom is on top. Love it. Please turn it into a long one-shot. PLEASE!~with cherries on top?
Author's Response: tsihihi ^_^ yes, they ARE hot together (A) i don't think i can make anything longer out of this one, but i AM working on a longer fic where our litt tomi and cute little gusti are a couple (A) don't know when it will be up, but keep an eye out for it ;) thnx for reviewing!!!
Date: 04/30/08 05:37 pm Title: two fingers
please continue i would like to kno what else happens
Author's Response: oh.. i don't know if i can continue this, but maybe.. who knows right? anw, i'm REALLY glad u liked it ^_^*hugs*
Date: 04/03/08 05:44 am Title: two fingers
that was something kind f kinky *grin* gooood job my love
Author's Response: aww ^_^thnx (A) really glad u liked it baby (K) *hugs tight*
Date: 03/18/08 02:21 pm Title: two fingers
=P=P never thought i would read this either:P not spes fan of stories going this far, but still:P
Author's Response: hehe =Prnrnfigured that much =Prnrnas u've told me before: u don't mind gay guys as long as u don't have to know about hte details =Prnrni think htat's just a straight guy's syndrome (A)
Date: 02/28/08 03:05 pm Title: two fingers
Great job on this. I know how hard drabbles are becasue you have such a short amount of time to set a scene and make it real but you did a pretty good job. It could be improved but hey so oculd A Tale of Two Cities, you just need more practice in this (frusturating) genre. I really felt with Gustav and his conflicting emotions so awesomesauce job at that! I hope I see another drabble out of you!! Keep it up! Excalmation Mark
Author's Response: wow =0 thanks =D now if u'd only tell me what u thought needed work... =S (A) but i'm really glad you liked it =D and i made avow to myself to atleast keep writing drabbles until i've "mastered" the genre, so don't be surprised if u find urself reading another one (A)
Date: 02/28/08 03:02 pm Title: two fingers
That was different ‘.o (Gustav/Tom) but it was hot! *likes* =D Are you gonna make it a story? ( Jeppe på bjerget *giggle* xD )
Author's Response: hehe =P glad u liked it =) (jeppe på bjerget is this danish story we had to read like a thousand times in our norwegian class =S it really sux =0) don't know if i'm gonna make it a story, but ur not the only one who's asked, so we'll see =)
Date: 02/28/08 02:15 pm Title: two fingers
I like it, and I think you really should make a story out of this.
Author's Response: aww =) thnx hun *hugs* don't know if i could make a story out of it, but we'll see =P
Date: 02/28/08 01:04 pm Title: two fingers
it was amazing!! =DD you like really weird pairings XD you're an awesome writer, i loved it ^_^
Author's Response: thnx ! XD and that might be because i AM really weird =P (A) really flattered that u htink i'm an awsome writer ^_^ *hugs*
Date: 02/28/08 12:08 pm Title: two fingers
Shouldn't you warn this as Non-Con or something? And are you going to write a next chappie?
Author's Response: oops =S forgot (A) but i dunno about the next chap thingy... don't tell me... i forgot to mark it as completed too? =P i was in such a rush when i posted this =S i'll fix that right away =) thnx for reviewing *hugs*
Date: 02/28/08 12:01 pm Title: two fingers
I fucking hate drabbles. But I think you somehow managed to make me like them a little. How did you do it!? YOU'RE A MIRACLE!
Author's Response: O.M.G. *jaw drops* do u really like it that much? =0 i'm really flattered (A) and i hope it was my writing skills that made u like it =P if it was: please check out my other fics too (A)
Date: 02/28/08 11:53 am Title: two fingers
It's very good hun! Not awfull at all! I like it very much, as I said, you have so many feelings in it and it's only this short. A one shot with this plot would have been hot *smirks*
♥
Author's Response: thnx hun *hugs real tight* hope other ppl like it as much as u do =D