Date: 09/14/11 06:54 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm not ready for this to be over lol awww I really loved this. I can't wait for the epilogue ^_^ what a unique story!
Author's Response: Well, I might be convinced to make an extra chapter or two - picturing the pack in Mexico City has my brain working! Thank you for all your reviews. Hope you liked Gustav, I was thinking of you!
Date: 09/14/11 02:07 am Title: Chapter 12
Still loving this.
Author's Response: Still glad you're out there!
Date: 09/13/11 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
Very nice. I know its not really important, but I'm wondering how far along the woman was, for them to be impressed that he could tell she was pregnant.
I really like how you got across that he was totally consumed with 'hunger', but that he recognized he was horny too. And then they combined, which was awesome.
Bushido was being a creeper at the rave. That tickles me. But oh my goodness, the Bu/Tom kiss! I was wondering if/when that was going to happen! And there it is! I dunno, I just liked Bushido in general this chapter. I'm real picky with my Bushido for some reason, sometimes I like him, sometimes I don't. But I am liking him in this fic. Mr. Ferchichi.
Hopefully Persis has calmed down. I hope Bill doesn't have to 'get rid' of her *whispers* You know permanently... As a side note to that, I'm not sure how effective most vaults would be at keeping things inside. I would think they would be along the same lines as a trunk. Designed to keep someone out not to keep things in
Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to see more! Keep up the fabulous work
Author's Response: Love the review, got me thinking about my own story! So, let's see... we'll say she is four months along, no longer a little zygote. And Tom is just a big bundle of vampire neediness right now. Good thing he has his pack to take care of him. I'm so glad you like this Bushido - he is a favorite of mine and so many people make him a bad guy. I just want him lovin all up on Bill. Maybe a little Tom, too. As for the vault, well, let's see... Kay and Bu had checked it before, so they of course re-configured it for just this sort of emergency. rnThank you so much for your review, it was fun!
Date: 09/13/11 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm so amused by the "more of me to love" comment. And the fact that Tom really just has no problem kissing Bushido. I never thought about that before, tbh. I like it!
Author's Response: Tom with a little belly to rub.... so adorable.... And kissing Bu, well, who knows what could happen there. Maybe in a sequel. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/11/11 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
lOVE IT
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/11/11 11:08 am Title: Chapter 11
So happy Tom got to him in time
Date: 09/10/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
ok, thats totally the bill wiggle thing I pictured, fyi.
Wonderful chapter. Where the hizneck did Gusti go?!?!...wait...he is okay isn't he?...I hope so...
I thought you had mentioned earlier that Bu had been with Bill longest not Persis?...I dunno. I thought you did, but I could be wrong...
I'm glad Bill is okay, and I thought it was adorable how you had Bushido sniff when they walked in the room. Though I must admit, I was a bit surprised he wasn't up waiting for them. I would think his Bill senses would've been tingling like Tom's/
Wonderful work! I can't wair to see more!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the BillWiggles! Too adorable. And Gusti's going to make more appearances, promise. As for who was made first hmmmm... now I'm going to have to go back and make sure.... If I made a mistake, sorry and thanks for pointing it out! rnrnBu is hibernating.rnrnThanks for reviewing :)
Date: 09/10/11 05:10 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm Persian so you can imagine my face when you mentioned Rumi's name. it was like I was as shocked as Tom was. I had a huge silly grin on my face. you're doing an amazing job two thumbs up :D
Author's Response: Why Rumi isn't more well-known, I'll never know. Happy to shock you in a good way. Thank you for taking time to say you like the story, makes my day!
Date: 09/09/11 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
"MY ARMS AND LEGS ARE MADE OF STARS" OMG THAT TAKES THE CAKE FOR BEST QUOTE FROM A FAN FICTION OF ALL TIME.
...{once I've actually finished the chapter lol}...
Awww, what a sweet ending to this chapter. And an interesting way to write the change!
Author's Response: I am blushing very happily right now.
Date: 09/09/11 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
But is it the same pretty vampire boys that we really want to see kissing more?
I don't know if I like Persis anymore. Trying to attack Tom. The nerve of her. Its a good thing Gusti managed to bring her down, or poor Gusti might've been without a girlfriend. And, well. That would suck for him.
I'm so happy Tom has turned! And that they came up with a decent excuse on such short notice to xplain his absense. It was very nice of his bro-in-law to give him Fler's bonus.
Jackass Fler, why do they call him that anyway? He needs to mind his own biznezz ad keep his head down, or the next coven might not be so leniant on his little group.
I think you described the whole turning process very nicely. The floaty stars wavey thing, it really does happen if your blood pressue drops really low
Very spiffy chapter. I look forward to seeing more soon! Keep up the fab work!
Author's Response: Don't we want to see B and T keep doing lots of that kissy stuff!! And Persis, well, she's got some issues. Fler's just a jerk, plain and simple. Glad you liked the "hi, Mom, I'm not turning into a vampire or anything, just got a new job" excuse! I was worried it seemed a little crammed. Thanks for reviewing and more chapters next week!
Date: 09/09/11 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just started reading this story ... honestly thought it won't be good and now I can't stop reading! Bill is a vampire? is he? he is :) gee ... perfect opening for the story. hope you keep your promise and finish the story as you promised. will die of curiosity if it's left unfinished!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you admitted that you didn't think it would be good but kept reading anyway! Did it start a little slow? Thanks for sticking with it. And I would never not finish a story, even if a meteor was headed straight for Earth, my last breath would be spent trying to get out one last chapter!
Date: 09/09/11 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
WOW. I am really in love with this wonderful tale!
Date: 09/09/11 01:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Wtf, did I lose a couple of days or did you update three times in one day? These were three amazing chapters. Tom's hate for his life turning into a vampire fic is highly amusing.
I'm gonna be honest and tell you I don't normally care for Bill'Bu, but somehow you made it work ok.
And oh my goodness, the feeding scene, and thn the post feeding/sleepy times scene...and damn Georg. Damn him to hell.
Can't wait to see more!Keep up the fantastic work!...and btw, eve now, I can tell you a sequel would be nice.
Date: 09/09/11 01:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Wtf, did I lose a couple of days or did you update three times in one day? These were three amazing chapters. Tom's hate for his life turning into a vampire fic is highly amusing.
I'm gonna be honest and tell you I don't normally care for Bill'Bu, but somehow you made it work ok.
And oh my goodness, the feeding scene, and thn the post feeding/sleepy times scene...and damn Georg. Damn him to hell.
Can't wait to see more!Keep up the fantastic work!...and btw, eve now, I can tell you a sequel would be nice.
Author's Response: I try to get my stories out and done as soon as they're written (this one is almost complete, first time I've posted without all the chapters finished, so I am hoping there's not a two week delay at the end, I'd be highly disappointed in myself). rnrnSo happy you like the story! And wouldn't it be great if my own ennui could be all fixed by a pretty vampire.... sigh...rnrnAnd knowing you tolerated Bill/Bu for this story?? Wow, thanks! I love Bill/Bu, but I know there are plenty of people don't. Glad to know it wasn't off-putting :DrnrnGeorg - what are we going to do with Georg. He's trying so hard to help Tom. Maybe if he knew how pretty Tom's new beau is, he'd totally understand.rnrnAnd thank you for your review, letting me know your opinion. I have a couple ideas for sequels if there's enough attention. Got another Bill/Bu/Tom story in the works though!rnrnThanks again!
Date: 09/08/11 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
GEORG WHY?! lol it was SO good and then he just had to fuck it up lol. I wonder if he believes Tom? I want them to change himmmmmmm *pout*.
Author's Response: I wonder what's going to happen to Georg.......... Guess we'll have to wait and see. Especially since that last chapter isn't done yet. His fate is still up in the air. Although I do have some ideas :)
Date: 09/08/11 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Please give me a birthday chapter? pretty please with cherries on top?
Author's Response: Working on chapter ten but I won't have it done tonight - hopefully tomorrow!
Date: 09/08/11 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
I haven't finished reading this yet, but I wanted to write this down before I forgot. Reading this story is like someone picking out all of the marshmallows in a box of lucky charms and putting them in a bowl by themselves. And that's a good thing because the marshmallows are the best part. I love this story.
Author's Response: I am overwhelmed. This is the best thing anyone's said about any of my stories. I mean, marshmallows - definitely the best! I am humbled.
Date: 09/08/11 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Can I just say that I love love LOVE the way you're writing Gustav?
Author's Response: Really?? Thank you! Maybe he'll get a little more face time, just for you :)
Date: 09/08/11 03:29 am Title: Chapter 8
Dammit. I want more but i dont want it to end. Weird. But true.
Author's Response: Not so weird, I know the feeling. Raiju's King of Kings is a behemoth, but if it were another 200 chapters, I'd only be thrilled to death! And I'm glad you don't want this one to end, makes me very happy. There are still about 4 chapters to go, depending on how long it takes me to wrap it up!