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Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 12:42 am Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

I may need a smoke. Jesus, man. First porn on THF and you do it good.

Author's Response:

ZOMG YOU READ IT

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AND LIKED IT

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GBHDSKUJFHNKJDS YAY

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Camels are on the side table, btw. You can light it on the scorched sheets.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 11:49 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Awww Wassee I so proud o' youuuuuu :D And damn I'm a bit confused; did Tom just get played xDDD

Author's Response:

EXCUSE YOU LITTLE MISS, READING YOUR BROTHER'S PORN-

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Did Tom get played? Yes. No. Maybe. Probably.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 11:33 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Lol, wut? What is this. At first glance I only saw your name and thought, *Another* story? XD

Hehe, this was really good. I'll admit, I thought the typical witty banter would detract from the smuttyness, but uh, yeah. It didn't XD

Author's Response:

LMAO, SHUT UP OKAY

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I'm so glad it didn't! I had fun writing it, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

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/sniffs/ Mmmmm, minty fresh monkies...

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 11:16 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

I haven't read any of you stuff yet because 1. I don't read anything that isn't completed 2. I've been crazy busy. I was so excited when mohanrocks tweeted about this and when I found it was a one shot I wanted to dance. I really enjoyed it. This was amazing for your first time. It wasn't boring or too long, it flowed well and was very descriptive. I didn't want it to end I wanted more. I loved where you ended things so I wouldn't be upset per say if there wasn't a sequel but I would LOVE one. I really enjoyed this. Great job.

Author's Response:

WHY YOU LITTLE BITCH j/k I've secretly wanted to be friends with you for like, ever

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Dance! Dance with me! We can rock out to Lip Gloss! Or like, Tokio Hotel, IDK if you've heard of them, they're pretty cool

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Thank you, so so much! I am glad you enjoyed my pornographic forays! I was sew nahvous tonight~ but you helped ease my nerves, thank you! <3 You sugarbritches. <3

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I have other one shots :D But neither of them are porn. u_u I apologize.

Reviewer: Hikarist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 11:14 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Yes, yes yes yes. They are so snarky, it's cute... I love Tom's mental comment at the end! ;) Lovely chapter. :3 I certainly won't complain if there's more.

Author's Response:

You may call me Joan... of Snark.

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Hahaha, thanks! Oh, you. <3

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I wouldn't complain either! YEAH LEICHENWASSER WRITE A SEQU- oh no wait

Reviewer: Jane Buz-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 11:13 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

OMG. That was so hot I think I died. I love it.

Jane

Author's Response:

YESSSSS, GOOD, EXCELLENT

rn

/buries you with a bell just in case you didn't actually die

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 10:44 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

I can only hope that when I one day post porn to THF that it will be this epic and .. . . . awkward yet awesomely arousing. I've said too much. /flies away

Great read, Dreggs! I'm gonna re-read now, let my mind absorb it a second time. I'm very proud of you! You're a wonderful writer.

Author's Response:

WHAT DO YOU MEAN THERE IS NO MELONE PORN. I DON'T UNDERSTAND. WHAT.

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/rides you like I'm Gandalf and you're one of the Great Eagles

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Proud. ;_; One day, maybe my father will be too.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 10:36 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Great story! XD

Author's Response:

Great review! :D

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 10:18 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Hahaha, instead of me commenting on how absolutely awesome this was- Imma comment your usage of "darned some socks..."

Plus +10 points, Mr. Leichenwasser.

Author's Response:

/takes 10 points, buries them out back, sits on them

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 09:56 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

Down on the corner, doing Trix.

This was even better the 160th-I MEAN 2ND time around. :D

Bravo, Kit. Bill blew Tom so well.

Oh! That parcel should be arriving in three days, now! And there is something in it that is QUITE relevant to this story. /intricately braids monkey tail beard.

Author's Response:

Buffalo's gotta earn a livin' somehow. /snap snap

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THANK YOU. I am glad. My v-card just got punched. :D For the 87th time. :D

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omg did you airmail me a blowjob

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 09:54 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

I know it doesn't have "humor" in genre, but I laughted almost whole story! I love it! just this Andrew is not necessary:/ I was hoping until the end that Bill will choose Tom over him >.

Author's Response:

Bill totally made up Andrew.

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My soul can only be at peace when I have successfully combined porn and humor. Else I must wander the earth forever, alone.

Reviewer: nyxleigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 09:46 pm Title: What's Better Than a Rose on a Piano?

oh mein gott. this was just...omg

Author's Response:

OH MY GOD BECKY

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LOOK AT HIS DICK

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IT'S LIKE SO HARD

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HE'S LIKE ONE OF THOSE GERMAN ROCK STARS BROTHERS OR SOMETHING

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