Date: 07/10/08 04:08 am Title: Prologue
Honestly now, don't make me beg for another chapter.. cuz i will..
*gets on hands and knees*
PLEASE!!!!!
Date: 07/08/08 05:08 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Babe,
i m so addicted in that story of yours
Please update as soon as possible
"puppy eyes and a lot of cookies"
Date: 07/06/08 05:11 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
wow! very good chapter...I loved it!You know, i picture the number in bill's neck to be a piece of art,with a bit of graphism and style lol.
In the part where they eat at the king's table, i couldn't help but think: if i were bill, when i see all those good things, the delicious food and such , i'd think of my dear father who is poor and left behind. It would be a pain just to bite in something ,i won't be able to enjoy it properly,plus he was just there
the day before. But i guess he forced it to please the king? Even if it's not my impression.I want to punch that ethan guy in the face ,he's being really ridiculous.
The best part of course was in the king's chamberS. So much passion, wow...LOVELY. I can't wait till your next update^^
Date: 07/05/08 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
LOVEE IT!
Its so different from the other ones its great!
Im glad Toms warming up to Bill now. I just cant wait for him to ask for his name XD and when Bill becomes less depressed.
Update soon =] pleasseee
Date: 07/05/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Wow. I'm impressed. This is really something.
In other fandoms, i used to read similar things, some of them sharing your same ideas, but im surprised to find this to be much better than those.
In the first scene where Tom took Bill, i was amazed by the fact that he was gentle and yet completely dominating at the same time. When he hurt him, and then slowed down, i was sure, he was going to continue to make "sweet love" to him, and then BOOM he fucking hurt him again! I just thought that part was amazing. It shows how cold Tom really is, that not even Bill could warm his heart the first time.
I cant wait for the moment when Tom asks for Bill's name. xD. I totally see it coming.
I want to see more of Bill being "Bill", rather than the slave he's meant to be. Some parts he will speak to Tom directly and other's he'll add on the "my lord" or other shit. Are you going to make Bill more outgoing? Is Tom goign to hurt him again? You know the saying, you always hurt the ones you love. (that and i really like fictional rape. -.-'')
Anyways, i really hope you update soon, this is really awesome!
Homg, and i love how Tom claimed Bill as his own, and how no one is allowed to touch him. I wonder how mad he would get if someone did? Or even, if Bill was the one to touch someone else? Gaahahh thinking about this fic is gonna kill me! I cant wait to find out more!
Date: 07/02/08 03:05 am Title: Prologue
aww this is so amazing. The ideqa is so different, im in love with it ;)
Please add a new chapter soon
*puppy eyes*
Date: 07/01/08 06:07 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
aaw ^^ Tom is warming up! :D
please post the next chapter soon! I can't wait!
Date: 07/01/08 04:48 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
:D moreeeeeee please! hearttttttt.
Date: 06/30/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Ziemniakers is under the impression! This story is great! It's so original and briliant... And also well written, I felt all Bill's emotions. I feel sorry for him ;( but maybe he can find his love in Tom...?:D Update soon please!
Date: 06/30/08 05:26 am Title: Prologue
More bitte! Now you left me to wonder what Ethan is going to do to Bill...
Date: 06/29/08 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
OMG! I love this! What's Ethan gonna do to Bill? Please update soon!
Date: 06/29/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
OMG! I'd kill for the new chapter!!! But, please, don't make me do it, anyway... *is afraid*
Date: 06/29/08 05:49 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Aw! That was SO cute!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06/28/08 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Oh, wow. I loved this chapter! Tom's being so sweet to Bill! And Bill's all shy... *squee* I hope you update soon! :D
Date: 06/28/08 09:38 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Another chapter! :)) I've been waiting for a while now more updates from you. This chapter was amazing and very sweet. I love it how Bill's and Tom's relationship is changing and everything that happens between the boy toys are also very good. You've got a new banner too, looks cool! :D
I'll be waiting for more updates from you, my favourite writer! :>
Date: 06/28/08 05:01 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
God this chapter is AMAZING!
keep going please...
But I have to ask something...
Why dont you continue "his body and its gifts?"
Its been so long and I miss this story so much
Date: 06/27/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Awwww, Tom likes Bill.
I really like this story, and this chapter made me so happy.
Date: 06/26/08 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Awwww tommis in love =D
ahhh this chapter made my day =)
Update soon :)
Date: 06/26/08 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
Awwww tommis in love =D
ahhh this chapter made my day =)
Update soon :)
Date: 06/26/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 3: Not like the other boys
awwww *heart melts*
that was SO sweet ^_^
i can't wait for more of this =D