Date: 10/20/11 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 17
I really hope Bill's dad doesn't get away with this. I'm worried for Bill tho. What happened? Looks like Tom made the call just in time...i'm really sry to hear about ur grandpa. My thoughts & prayers go out to u & ur family.
Author's Response: Oh I hope not either! Well, you gotta wait for next chapter to find out :) I'm evil heheh! He really did! Thank you sweetie, it's very much appreaciated <3
Date: 10/14/11 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
eeep o: i wonder whatll happen, short but amazing lelf me craving for more lol
Author's Response: :O Oh gosh, never good to know :) Aw, more up soon I hope!
Date: 10/14/11 03:14 am Title: Chapter 16
I feel like the biggest monster alive for lurking! Sorry! Trust my I know its frustrating!
Well this art of a story is completely fantastic! Even though there's some creepy sad stuff going on! o__o
Also I'm very sorry for your unfortunate triumph, best of wishes.
Author's Response: Oooh no! Lurkers are more than welcome too! Lurkers push up the readers number, so it's good! :) Oh well, welcome to the review world! :D rnAwww! Art? Aw so sweet! Thank you! :D Haha, yeah and trust me... the creepy stuff is far from over :P rnAw thank you sweetie :) <3
Date: 10/13/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh my, whats this plan of Tom's?...Personal guess. He wants Bill to pick a fight so that he can call the cops on them for public disturbance, and the cops show up in the middle, and Bill tell them what be goin on. But thats just a random guess.
Very nice chapter. I think Gordon's attitude was pretty horrible. I kinda get it, but that doesnn't make it right.
Can't wait for more! Keep up the spiffy work!
Author's Response: Aw, it's a really good plan that one :) Buuuuut, not completely what his plan is :P Nice guess anyway :) rnAw, thank you! No, Gordon just tried to put some reason into Tom... Tom is kinda... reckless sometimes :P rnAw, more will be up soon I hope! :) I will! Thank you!
Date: 10/13/11 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Next will be up in not so long I hope :)
Date: 10/13/11 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
aghhh.. Tom has a plan.. I wanna know...
I hope your grandpa will be fine soon...
hugs
Author's Response: Hehehe gotta wait for that! :D rnWe hope so too, thank you :) rn*Huggles*
Date: 10/13/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm sorry about your gramps :( I can't wait to see what Tom's idea is :)
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 Hmm... Tom has got a lot of good ideas I tell ya! :)
Date: 10/13/11 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
Short, but sweet chapter nonetheless =)
Author's Response: Yeah sorry about that :) Next one will be longer :) Aw, thank you!
Date: 10/10/11 06:23 pm Title: Prologue
More than welcome
Author's Response: :)
Date: 10/10/11 10:26 am Title: Chapter 15
I hope your grandpa is better soon :/ my condolences. Amazing chapter, smile at reviews just a bit? -huggles and loves on you-
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 Aw, thank you! Yeah, you guys write amazing reviews, who can't help but smile at least a bit then? :3 *huggles and loves back*
Date: 10/10/11 07:11 am Title: Chapter 15
this was a sad chapter!
i hope bill dose not get hurt!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
an i am sorry about your grandpa!
an no prob about 100th review!
Author's Response: Ooh, it was indeed, but I can tell you so much, it will be nervewrecking in the next couple of chapters, so hold on :3 Hopefully I will update in not so long :) rnThank you sweetie :3 rn:3
Date: 10/10/11 03:09 am Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update. I'm sorry about your grandpa.
Author's Response: You're welcome :3 Thank you sweetie <3
Date: 10/09/11 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awww I hope your grandpa gets better soon! I'll keep him in my thoughts/prayers.
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 It's so nice of you, thank you. It's greatly appreciated! <3
Date: 10/09/11 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
AHHHHHH!!!! O.o I was getting so into that and it just stopped! I'm loving this plot so much though! Thank you for writing! *Holds arms out* Hug?
Author's Response: Hehehe, I'm evil? Mwahaha maybe? Aww, I'm glad you do! Aww, you're so very welcome sweetie :3 *sniffles* Thank you *huggles*
Date: 10/09/11 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh, my. I am so sorry about your grandpa. I hope things work out for him.
On a (slightly) happier note. I love this fic. It takes me back to 8th grade, when we did a project similar to this for Health class. Ours was only for the weekend, and we didn't do partners, and the doll wasn't quite as high tech as the one n the story...but yea, it cried at all hours, and you had to hold a key in its back for so long to get it to stop...I remember thinking 'why are they were teaching us to stab a kid in the back to quite it?'...but I got th point of the lesson. Its hard shiz taking care of a baby.
Anyway...I feel so bad for Bill in this. It does seem a bit fast, and you kind of did a time jump, so we missed out on Bill skipping his Sunday dinner with his dad, and does he come back most Sundays all timid again, or has their progressing relationship kept him for falling back?
This is a really good story so ar. I can't wait to see more! Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 I hope so too, cause he's precious to me <3rnrnAw, I'm glad you do! Oh really? That's so awesome! I wished we had such cool schools... Oh wow, that must've been a real wake up call for everyone! :O Even the boys had to do it? God I would've loved to see the boys carry around a doll! Haha, good point! Stab a kid and it goes silent! :O Horrible! rnrnYeah me too... Yeah I know, and I apologize for that :3 Yes, I decided not to write that so it would come as a surprise that his dad came to get him back :) I would most definitely say that Bill isn't as timid anymore, but he's still a bit weird when he returns from his father, but things are happening in the next couple of chapters, so hold on to your seat, cause it's gonna be nervewrecking! rnrnAw, thank you sweetie:) Aww, more will be up soon I hope! :D AW, I will try :D
Date: 10/09/11 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
I hope your grandpa will be okay
Author's Response: Thank you :3 I hope so too <3
Date: 10/09/11 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
Whatever Tom is up to, I hope it works..I'm really sry to hear about ur grandpa. I surely do wish the best for u & ur family.
Author's Response: Tom has got some plans up his sleeve I tell ya! rnThank you sweetie :3 It's greatly appreciated :3
Date: 10/09/11 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
Cuuuute chapter.
I'm so sorry about your grandpa :c My grandma got cancer, but it was only on her tongue and they got rid of it, and I know how scary it is, and sad :c
I hope he gets better.
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 Oh I'm sorry about your grandma, I bet it wasn't nice to go through for either of you. rnThank you, with a sister dead from cancer at the age of ten, I kind of lost faith in it, but thank you sweetie :3
Date: 10/08/11 02:49 am Title: Prologue
It was 3 am then xD and yes it was good spasming :D
Author's Response: Oh wow, I hope you got some sleep then! We can't have sleep deprived reviewers :O rnOh that was good! :D
Date: 10/07/11 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the update. Tom is lucky he has such a good mom.
Author's Response: Aw you're welcome :) He sure is! I want Simone as my mom! :D