Date: 11/03/11 10:35 am Title: Chapter 18
Condolences. Your grandfather'sdeath was timed perfectly by the Lord. He would not have taken him if it was not for the best.
I know a tatoo would be cool, but, just think about this first ok? Consider what I'm about to say. People with tatoos are rarely accepted as blood donors. Sort of, last resort people. What if someone close to you needed it direly, you matched, bt couldn't donate because of the tatoo.
But if you do get one, just slap on a cool 89 and your good!
Nice chapter! Thank you for the dedication to push through after you've been through so much.
Author's Response: Thank you :3 Yeah, that's right, thank you for your kind words :3rnOh I have thought about it for a long time! Yeah, that is something I will definitely think about, although I am not too sad about not being able to donate blood (to loved ones, I would be sad, of course) because I hate needles and blood :) rnHaha, a cool 89, that's a nice idea! HaharnThank you! Aw, you're welcome, I felt the need to get out with some frustrations :) Thank you so much!
Date: 11/03/11 03:43 am Title: Chapter 18
thanks for the new chapter!!
it is so sad that bill got hurt that bad!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
an i am so sorry about your grandpa dieing!!
Author's Response: Aw you're welcome :) rnYeah it sure is! rnNext should be up in hopefully not too long :) rnThank you sweetie :3
Date: 11/02/11 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm sorry about your grandpa. JUst...he's in a better place now, not hurting, or having trouble breathing or anything.
This was a really good chapter. You really got the emotion and sitting around waiting stress through. Wonderful work. Lets hope Jorg makes the smart decision and just confesses and pleads guilty.
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 Exactly, he is in a better place now :) rnAw, thank you! Well, I've spend the last couple of weeks in a hospital waiting for something to happen, so thank you :) Yeah lets hope he does that! For the best.. :) And thank you for your e-mail :)
Date: 11/02/11 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 18
ohh sorry for your grandpa, but, sometimes is better cause he is better now, and he is with our BIG FATHER.... go ahead kiddo!!
A chapter interesting, cause Tom is so worry for Bill, Tom loves so badly to Bill and I only want that Bill could hear Tom and he recover sooner...
hugs from Colombia!!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 Yeah, he was in a great deal of pain before he died... And he is now watching over me and my family :) rnYeah, Tom loves and cares a lot for Bill already :) rnHugs back!
Date: 11/02/11 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
i think a really nice tattoo would be a picture of a phoenix.
like :
a phoenix represent death, life, rebirth, and redemption all in one.
Author's Response: Oh wow! That is a wonderful creature! And the meaning/representation of it is amazing! Thank you for your idea! :D
Date: 11/02/11 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm very sorry for your loss
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3
Date: 11/02/11 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 18
AWWWWW I'm so sorry, My grandpa died when I was 8, I loved him alot. but I'm excited for your first tattoo!! I don't have one yet but I want to get a Red Hot Chili Pepper logo with a lyric from Soul to squeeze or fortune faded (do you know RHCP? sorry if I'm rambling) I love this story, such great detail
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :3 Aww, I'm sorry about YOUR grandpa! rnOh me too! Ooh Of course I know Red Hot Chili Pepper! My mom loves them too! Ooh, that is a wonderful idea! I think I might have an idea with that, instead of RHCP then TH... And lyrics! rnAww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 11/02/11 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
First of all i LOVE this bit of the story, I'm really sorry to hear about your grandad, i send you my love and i hope you feel alright! xxx and i would say freedom 89 like the on on bills arm? Its so pretty and cute heehee
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you did! :D rnYeah we will miss my grandpa greatly, thank you sweetie! :3 rnFreedom 89... hmm... Maybe Freedom 93, the year I was born, to maybe... personalize it a bit? I totally agree, it's beautiful and cute! <3
Date: 11/02/11 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 18
Woot woot I hope Bill's dad gets his dumb ass locked away in jail!
Sorry for your grandpa, least he isn't in any kind of pain now
Author's Response: Yeah me too! We'll just have to wait and see :)rnThank you. Yeah we are all really glad he isn't in pain anymore.
Date: 10/21/11 10:14 am Title: Chapter 17
Don't lose hope for your Grandpa! I have one who is now 95 yrs. old. He faught in WWII, got hit by a car TWICE, and for a few years, lived on a deit of BBQ, coke, varied fruits, bread, and icecream. A year or so ago he got a stroke. Half of his body was paralyzed due to a part of his brain shrinking (caused by his old age). They told us that there was no chance that he could talk or move the paralyzed part of his body again. A few days later he was screaming profanities that could be heard all the way to the lobby of the hospital, and they had to restrain him by tying his hands to the sides off the bed to prevent him from ripping off the tubes attatched to him. My grandfather is still going strong today. So you see there is always hope despite what other people tell you!
Author's Response: I won't, even though it's hard. Oh wow, only my great grandpa got that old, he died of age a couple of months ago though. Oh wow, that certainly is a lot he went through! Oh my god, he did? Even though they told him he probably wasn't going to? Wow, your Grandpa sure is a fighter! I'm glad you told me this :) Makes me believe in him staying a little more :) Thank you for sharing <3
Date: 10/21/11 05:16 am Title: Chapter 17
Its was amazing!! and i'm sorry to hear about your grandad and i hope he gets better:) awww
Author's Response: Thank you! We hope so too :) Thank you sweetie <3
Date: 10/21/11 03:25 am Title: Chapter 17
this was a good chapter!
i feel bad about bill!:(
i hope he is ok!
an i cant wait for the next chapter!
an im so sorry about your grandpa!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! rnAw, he's hopefully gonna be okay :)Next chapter shouldn't take so long to get up :) Thank you sweetie <3
Date: 10/21/11 01:37 am Title: Chapter 17
i just read all this in one sitting..kudos for me, right?lol. i'm sorry i didn't review though, that 'next' button was taunting me..that evil thing! *glares at it* but anyways..i truly enjoy your amazing writing skills and reading this very captivating story, makes me super excited to be tracking it! :D
im sooo sorry to hear about your grandpa, i already both of mine :'( just stay strong, and remember all the memories :)
Author's Response: OH wow! Kudos for you indeed! Oh it's totally fine! I know, that "next" button taunts me sometimes too! Hahaha, aww thank you so much! Ooh! Thank you thank you thank you! :D rnAw, I'm sorry for yours! I definitely will, thank you sweetie :)
Date: 10/21/11 01:07 am Title: Chapter 17
I am so sorry about your grandpa (HUG) I understand the way he is thinking-we went through that bit of stubborn personality with my grandmother. They try so hard to hold on to what independence they have left. MY thoughts are with you and your family!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie *huggles* Oh you did? Yeah, I think so too... Like it's the only thing they feel they have left, right? Thank you sweetie :)
Date: 10/21/11 12:40 am Title: Chapter 17
Jesus, I hope Bill is fine. Poor Tom...
Author's Response: I hope he is too! Yeah, poor Tom.. Next chapter shouldn't take so long I hope :)
Date: 10/20/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 17
very emotional chapter
Author's Response: Indeed!
Date: 10/20/11 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 17
Beautiful chapter, you always brighten my day, I came home from work and saw you updated :) My grandma is in the hospital. They sat she is not doing well at all :( I hope your gramps get better :)v
Author's Response: Awwwww! Thank you so much! Aww, that makes me happy to know! :) rnOh I'm sorry about you grandma! I hope she gets better! Thank you sweetie :)
Date: 10/20/11 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 17
* want to be all "Yay!! Bill is saved ^_^ "...but also "oh no....Bill is in critical condition :( *tear* " at the same time... I'm feeling so confused!!!
This was a very nice chapter. Awesome work, I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, to find out what happens. *hugs*
Author's Response: Aww! I'm sorry I confused you! But remember, you can always be both! :) rnAw, thank you! Next one shouldn't take so long I hope:) *huggles*
Date: 10/20/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg i hate Bill's dad! He's a horrible horrible man!
Author's Response: Me too, oh gosh! He really is! :O
Date: 10/20/11 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 17
Iīll be wait for the next chapter, coz I think Billīs dad hurt to him...
And... please, go on with your grandpa... you only left all the things in Godīs hands... I only send you my positives vibrations... hugs from Colombia!
Author's Response: Next chapter shouldn't take so long to get up I hope :) rnI will, thank you sweetie :) Huggles back!