Date: 07/01/12 01:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Just one thing wrong (apart from a couple grammatical or spelling errors): No mother would be THAT okay with her only sons kissing each other like that the first time she saw it. Maybe after getting used to the idea of A, them both being gay and B, them being gay for each other, but not right away. Even the most accepting mother would have a hard time with incest. Either way, the smut was AMAZING, and there was only, like, one mistake... I don't remember whether it was a spelling mistake or a grammatical mistake, though XD
Date: 09/07/11 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I haven't read it (yet) I just have to say that I love how you used Jeffree Star in the banner xD
Date: 09/04/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow. I loved this. For your first time I think you did a wonderful job! :)
Date: 01/05/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
hah . that made me laugh .
very cute though
Date: 11/06/08 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
it's hot like everything else you write!
but the story line is lacking. - I don't believe their mother, it's just too much. The story is a little ackward. I'm not sure what it needs something.
Love your style, I'll read anything you write!
Date: 09/13/08 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so hot...and the ending was funny i loved it
Date: 08/13/08 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1
That... was HOT! I loved it!
Date: 07/01/08 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh mi god i loved it. That was soo finny and wicked hot! -Insert high pitched girly insane fangirl squeel here- I Loved there mom finding out thats somethiung that no one bother to include!
Rock on
Michelle
Date: 06/21/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahahahaha that was brilliant, the ending....im still laughing. im so glad you decided to do this follow up its brilliant. Bill in a skirt and heels hahah.....ooooo actually....nvm *thinks bad thoughts*
Date: 06/02/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great fic! xD
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 05/19/08 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha X D
I like it : D
Author's Response: I'm glad you do :)
Date: 05/15/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
ahahaha. loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 05/14/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW ! That was hot! *runs off for a cold shower*
I love Bill wearing women clothes and stripping for Tom.
So well-written!!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 05/09/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1
WONDERFUL! XD
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 04/05/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
FUCK THAT WASS HOTTTT!!
OHHHHHH!!!!!
YESSS!
Author's Response: Lol ^_^
Date: 03/23/08 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
O_o hahahahahahahahaahahaha
Loooooooool
Simone has a vibrator? Rofl
Well that was hot and really funny.
I think you should write a sequel
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Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry, but sequel was not planned. I'll think about it, though ;)
Date: 03/10/08 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 02/29/08 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
hehehehe, I love it. How cute and very hot. Excellent writing.
Author's Response: thank you! :D
Date: 02/28/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lmfao! That was fucking amazing!! And for the record im not laughing AT YOU! You're just fuckin funny! Luved it!
Danke
Author's Response: i was laughing at myself when writing it :D thanks!