Date: 02/04/12 09:10 am Title: Chapter 8
this was a really good story!!
i am sad that it is over!
is there going to be a sequel to this?
Author's Response: I don't think there will be a sequel, but thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked it xD
Date: 02/03/12 09:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Let me dieeeee *sobs* i love this a lot!! good job :'D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much !
Date: 10/11/11 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yeah they're perfect too. :-)
Date: 10/11/11 01:55 am Title: Chapter 8
nice to have the mystery solved. This was a good story. It could have been developed more, but I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: I agree. It could have definitely been developed more, but to be honest it took me a lot more time to write I than I eventually thought xD I'm glad you liked it. Thank you !
Date: 10/11/11 01:13 am Title: Chapter 6
Some tantalizing hints thrown in there.
Date: 10/10/11 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
"Fuchsia is just a sugar coated word for pink." I love that!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks !
Date: 10/10/11 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh wow! thats a big bombshell to drop.
Date: 10/10/11 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohh, great first chapter! I can't wait to read more and find out what happened.
Date: 09/13/11 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry, didn't want to sound mean. I just find behaviour of almost all characters a bit odd, like they are trying to see only surface and not what is inside, if you know what I mean (english isn't my first language as you can clearly see). they are like from The Stepford Wives, too easly forgiving without asking about any explanation, are taking things as they are, I think it's not realistic. how can someone forgive being left behind just like this? I don't know if any real person would accept without any question sudden come back of old lover and his sudden change, from gay to homophobe to gay again, it's simply strange. "love is not enough", what about trust, friendship, caring about each other and respect? they are also very important part of relationship, without them it will not last long. in relationship of Tom and Bill all of it was missing, there were only love, lies and lust. don't get me wrong, I think you did a good job, and it's very nice story, just too short, like everything is going too fast.
Author's Response: Yeah,I get where you're coming from. I know things are going really fast and the characters could use some work, but it's the best I could do in two months. I absolutely did not want to drop out of the Big Bang, so this is the result. I will definitely take my time to write my next story, cuz this was way too much time pressure. rnAnyway, thanks for telling me all of this. I really appreciate it.
Date: 09/13/11 10:54 am Title: Chapter 8
it wasn't very logical or natural story, but it was nice to read anyway.
it looked like most of those characters were either from asylum garden or kindergarden, Bill, Tom's aunt, Georg, Andreas, even Tom a bit.
I think it was pleasent to read, but whole plot was a bit in soap opera style.
Author's Response: What can I say? It's my first English story ever. I wrote it in two months and I'm proud of it. It is soap opera style, but that's my style. Although you're pretty harsh and a bit mean I appreciate you took the time to review all of this. I just wish you would have given me some tips to improve my writing also.
Date: 09/13/11 10:42 am Title: Chapter 7
“Cause whatever you say. I know you hurt me too. I’m an asshole and I deserved every sneer I got from you, but you hurt me too.” Bill found a perfect way to solve his problem then
so he slept with Tom after all again? what about denying being gay? and why Tom isn't questioning it?
Author's Response: Well, obviously Bill was gay. Denying you're gay won't change the facts. Of course Tom isn't questioning it. I mean, would you if you really loved Bill? You don't ask questions. You just go with it...
Date: 09/13/11 10:33 am Title: Chapter 6
"“Oh. Well, it says ‘Wir hören nie auf zu schreien, wir kehren zum Ursprung zurück.’ I got it a year ago or so.”
“What does it mean?”
“It means I’ll always be the guy I used to be.” Bill smiled."
that was hilarious!!! it was said by a person who changed and denied his sexual orientation, who instead of being musician became a lawyer, who stopped to do all sport activities that he likes to do. wow, impressive, how much he must be blind or stupid!
"Bill grabbed his arm and looked him in the eyes. “You deserve so much better, Tom.”
“Wha-what are you trying to say?” Tom stuttered.
“He’s not good enough for you. You deserve better.” surely he deserved someone like Bill- totaly asshole, who will abandon him without any explanation, then will back all of sudden and will expect Tom to be his friend.....
"Andreas took Tom’s hands. “Look Tom, all I’m asking for is a second chance. I’ll change. I won’t be jealous anymore just…please. He’s gonna hurt you again.”
Tom pulled his hands back and looked the other side. “Andi, you need to go now.”
“So this is it?”
“No, you’re getting your second chance, but you really have to go now.” oh God, what's wrong with all of them?? they are talking about breaking up and getting back together like about dinner they are going to order, like it's so not important, just a small detail, one moment they are together, seconds later they are not, in a while they are together again, and Andreas is acting like Tom just said he prefer french fries over baked patatos, but eventually agreed for patatos >.>
Author's Response: Thank you for your review.
Date: 09/12/11 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
poor Tom..>.< he should forget about Bill...
"Georg smiled. “I’m not as short-sighted as Tom. I know you had your reasons.” ha, seriously??? Is George stupid or what? Bill left tom without explanation, simply run away, and Tom should spend time thinking about his reason? pfff
it looks like Bill is lying everytime he is opening his mouth...
Author's Response: You're right.He should have forgotten about Bill ages ago, but he couldn't. Love's just not that easy I guess. rnWell,as I said Tom's not an angel either. They've both got issues and Bill does have his reasons to be mad at him. rnrnBill's not lying, he's just keeping things from Tom...
Date: 09/12/11 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
"Tom gloated. “I don’t think so. He thinks homophobia is a disease.” actually I think so too.
I think you meant homosexuality
as for now I don't know what is going on, but Tom is very kind and patient person if he is allowing Bill to stay under his roof. Bill seems to be easy to manipulate idiot, huh
and why Tom's aunt is so careless and egoistic to put into Tom's house his ex-boyfriend who has run away ?
Author's Response: I did. Thanks for telling me. rnrnWell, Tom's not a saint either... rnHis aunt's allowing Bill to stay with Tom simply because she loves him and she knows Tom does too. rn
Date: 09/04/11 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was amazing!!!!! :D One of the best stories I had read!!!!! :)
Incredible!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like it xD
Date: 09/04/11 09:12 am Title: Chapter 8
@KnockturnAlley: I was gonna say 'It made me happy' but I accidentally posted it already.
Date: 09/04/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 8
This story was perfect! It's got absolutely everything that makes a story perfect! I already fell in love with it when I read the title and saw the banner, I knew that I just had to read it, and I've already read it TWICE! No, that was a lie. This is my third time reading it! It was just.... wonderful. This story actually had an excellent plot, so many complications, heartbreak, but most importantly; love. True love! :D It's so obvious that Tom and Bill are still so in love when they meet again, but we all know that just getting back together, is far from easy. Especially when you're in denial without even knowing it. ;P But they realized after a while though, and that was super! :D I thought it was so sweet when Bill suddenly just screamed, "Cuz I'm still in love with you, asshole!" I don't remember if it was exactly like that, but it was close. :D It's been a while since I've read a really good and captivating story like this! :D Maybe you could write a sequel? That would be nice. :D If not, I'm gonna continue reading this as much as I can! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I just kept grinning at the screen while reading it xDrnrn I haven't really thought about a sequel yet. In general I don't really like sequels, because they're often not as good as the first story, but who knows? Maybe I'll write. one. I'm really happy you like the story and thanks again for your review. It m
Date: 09/03/11 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just read your story, and it was so beautiful. So much emotion, so much hurt, and still so much love. I'm still caught in the events, it was just too great. Thank you for the experience!
Author's Response: You're welcome xD Thank you so much for your review. You made my day. I'm really glad you like it!
Date: 09/03/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
awesome!!!
Author's Response: Thank you !