Date: 09/03/11 03:17 am Title: An Accident
PS: And that gesture. Isn't that like, a vulgar sign? I've seen it censored in places, or ppl reacting all scandalized.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, it is vulgar, which is why Bill and Andi did it - they were telling Joel and co where to go.
Date: 09/03/11 03:16 am Title: An Accident
as he tried to tone out what they were saying > I think it's supposed to be 'tune'
Eep! The bus crash D: Those freaking things have no seatbelts. I do wonder, however, what the immediate reaction was from the rest of the passengers. It only describes what Tom was doing.
Heh, the nurse. Like Tom would just get up and go, leaving Bill there still unconscious.
@ last line: Yes, it will.
Author's Response: I know they don't. D: That's up to you to decide - really, I was only interested in what Tom was doing.
You're right, he'd never leave Bill just lying there.
Date: 09/03/11 03:05 am Title: The Rally
Great first chapter. I love stories that touch on real subjects like this, and I'm definetly looking forward to reading the rest of this :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope the rest doesn't disappoint. :]
Date: 09/03/11 02:34 am Title: The Rally
I think none of the people who are picking apart the grammar in this fic have any actual clue what a bloody "Review" is.
Author's Response: Ahh well, whatcha gonna do about it? -shrugs-
Date: 09/03/11 02:00 am Title: A Decision
That's it? They aren't together? who gives a damn what Tom's father thinks, if Tom get's disowned than his father doesn't deserve him as his son. And how can Bill just accept that. So, other than that there are some grammar mistakes, and this isn't a bad story but I am kind of disappointed with the ending. I think there should be a sequel or an epologue.
Author's Response: That's it. They aren't together. Yes, his dad doesn't deserve him as a son, but Tom doesn't have any other choice. He's in full time education and doesn't have a job - what's he supposed to do when he's kicked out? Bill doesn't have a choice but to accept it; there's nothing that either of them can do about it. It's too bad that you're disappointed with the ending - I hope you enjoyed the rest of it. Sorry, but there's not going to be a sequel.
Date: 09/03/11 01:43 am Title: Spotted
Joel's a prick, why can't Tom tell his dad and Joel to just bugger off and that people who are gay are not bad, I think homophobes are the worst.
Author's Response: Because Tom's trapped. He knows what will happen if he does tell them to bugger off. I agree that homophobes are the worst - I can't stand to be anywhere near them.
Date: 09/03/11 01:33 am Title: The Rally
I hate homophobes and Tom is an ass for following his father's orders.
Author's Response: Same, although Tom doesn't really have much of a choice.
Date: 09/03/11 01:19 am Title: A Decision
I enjoyed this story immensely. It was nice to read something that isn't like so many other stories on here. The plot, the characters, everything about this story was wonderful.
I applaud you for writing this. More people in this world should realize that everyone is human and everyone deserves love whether it be a man and a woman, a man and a man, or a woman and a woman.
There needs to be more love in this world and less hate.
Again, I want to say that I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing =]
P.S. Would there be a chance of a possible sequel?
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it. It means a lot. :]
There needs to be much less hate in the world.
Thank you for reviewing; I'm glad I didn't disappoint. Hmm, I'm sorry, but I can't say there will be.
Date: 09/03/11 01:06 am Title: Maths Tutor
“You have him your number?” > gave*
And lol! Simone is right. When you're attracted to someone, you're attracted to someone. It's not uncommon for the guys I'm attracted to to turn out to be gay XD
Author's Response: Simone is definitely right; you can't help it. Ahh, I know that feeling. :3
Date: 09/03/11 12:46 am Title: Rough Night
Lol, omg, what Andi said to the teacher XD
And aww.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it. :3
Date: 09/03/11 12:11 am Title: The Rally
Only the first chapter and I want to knock Tom's father over the head with a shovel. I checked up that group you mentioned in your note, and it took about five seconds for me to get offended and exit their site. I have a feeling my opinions of Tom's father aren't going to improve. Not. A. Chance.
So far I really like Bill's character, and Andi's support. The title "NO H8" is also something I really like, because it's different and it took me an extra moment to get it when I first read it.
I did notice a few mistakes, but they're not too major.
Author's Response: I think everyone wants to hit him over the head with a shovel. Oh, they're just awful. I watched a programme on them and I got so furious that I started crying, because that's what happens when I get angry. :| I wouldn't expect your opinions of him to improve - he's not a good person.
Awhh, thank you, I'm glad that you like Bill, Andi and the title. :]
Date: 09/03/11 12:05 am Title: Lets Do Lunch
Awwww. Hehe, now I can breathe a sigh of relief.
Author's Response: Haha, good! :D
Date: 09/02/11 11:38 pm Title: Spotted
He was loathed > Actually it's phrased 'He was loath*', believe it or not. You also use that spelling a bit later.
And I think this is supposed to be 'He' > The noted that as the boy saw him coming
Oh, gosh. I don't like misunderstandings ;.;
But yet at the same time I love Andi like no tomorrow for being a strong friend and standing by Bill :3
Author's Response: Andi's just great, Bill really is lucky to have him. :3
Date: 09/02/11 08:59 pm Title: The Rally
Oh, I really like the premise of this one. Bill and Andreas are adorable (love their signs!), and I feel so bad for Tom. It's so true that the Westboro kids are hated by pretty much everyone because of what their parents make them do, although I think most of them are more brainwashed than Tom is.
Anyway, I'll definitely be reading on! :) I wonder what'll happen when Bill and Tom meet.
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you. :] I know, they're just so cute! :3 Ahh, some of them are just awful. I watched this programme about them and there was this little boy who was about 10 years old going on about "fags" and the presenter asked him if he actually knew what a "fag" was. So the little kid when went off on one about guys who have sex with guys and their dirty so the interviewer can just shut up. When the interview then asked if he'd just told him to shut up, the kid freaked and started apologising. It was really strange, seeing someone spouting all this hateful stuff and then apologising because they said "shut up". :|
Anywaaaay, thank you, I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :]
Date: 09/02/11 08:31 pm Title: Caught Out
Well, crap >.
Author's Response: Crap indeed.
Date: 09/02/11 08:22 pm Title: The New Student
Aw, Bill was pretty mean to Tom. If I were him I would have noticed that he seemed reluctant at the anti-rally.
Eh, but people generalize. *sigh*
Author's Response: You would have? You're a better person than I am. If I had been in Bill's position, I think I would have reacted exactly as he did, except I would have ended up punching someone too.
Unfortuantely, people do.
Date: 09/02/11 07:46 pm Title: The Others
Ack, if anyone knows anything about God, it's that love and acceptance are supposed to be extended at all. Hateful people like this don't even deserve to be affiliated with Him.
Author's Response: Mmhmm, I know. I'm not religious in the slightest but people like that make me beyond angry - hatred and discrimination isn't what God is about.
Date: 09/02/11 07:05 pm Title: The Rally
Poor Tom :'( What a horrid situation.
Author's Response: Definitely. :( Thank you for reading and reviewing. :]
Date: 09/02/11 06:04 pm Title: The Rally
I feel sorry for Tom!! If he gets with Bill I cannot imagine how much shit he is gonna get into.
Author's Response: Ahh yeah, poor Tom. He doesn't have it easy. :[ I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :]
Date: 09/02/11 04:42 pm Title: A Decision
I really hope there will be a sequel! you can't leave me hanging like this!
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D I hadn't actually thought about a sequel to be honest. :3