Date: 09/04/11 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying the brother dynamic so far. Also, some of your wording really struck me--Bill had somewhat pushed everything he ever felt for Tom, aside from brotherly love, to the back of his mind, the back of his chest, tucked against his ribcage. Wonderful. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I liked that part, too, I hoped people would :)
Date: 09/04/11 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
The story was amazing and I loved every moment of it, but mostly the first chapter. It was unique and lovely and somehow interesting- it seemed tome that every chapter was different from the others as if every one of them had something else to say, characters were different and the message was different to me...don't know... But yet it was the same story. Anyway I still liked it and I'd love to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I tried my best to write every chapter different from one another to keep it interesting, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it makes me so happy to know you liked it :)
Date: 09/04/11 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4
I really liked this. I really think it was the perfect ending, but I will be looking for that sequel.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I was worried about the ending, cause it practically wrote itself. I'm happy that you liked it :)
Date: 09/04/11 12:09 am Title: Chapter 3
This was hot, sweet, and angsty all at once. Absolutely wonderful. What I love especially is that, although it is in a subtle way that doesn't overwhelm the chapter, the twins have to deal a little with the guilt about the fact that they are turned on from kissing their brother.
Author's Response: Awww thank you! :) I tried to make it subtle, or really, they made it subtle. The whole kissing chapter wasn't planned that way until I kept writing and the twins just seemed to want to kiss, so I let them :P I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 09/03/11 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, what did his mother do to him? Whatever it is, it must have been absolutely awful. Anyway, I really like it!
Author's Response: Yeah, she wasn't a very good mother :/ I will go into depth in the sequel :) Yay for you liking it! :D
Date: 09/03/11 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I already like this. I really want to know what happened in Bill and Tom's life to make them run away, but that can wait I suppose. Either way, I really like where this is going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you like the rest of the story :)
Date: 09/02/11 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Ack. I like this. Very much. You did good, Vale, you did good.
Author's Response: EEEEE :D Thank youuuu! I'm glad you liked it :P *hugs*
Date: 09/01/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome fic is awesome!!! Boo, I can't get enough of telling you this: you're a talented writer and by far one of my faves here, not just because you're my friend, but because you're original, careful, and devoted to whatever you really want, like writitng this. It's a pleasure to be able to help you when you need it, and it makes me insanely proud to see you achieve your goals, such as this!!! Plus, I kinda love you too ;) *smoooooooooooooooooooooch*
Author's Response: *flails and glomps* Oh God, Boo. I died, I seriously did. I'm speechless. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Because of what you said and because you're always encouraging me to write and give me ideas when I'm stuck. Gah, I just love you so much *smoooooooooooooooooooooooch*
Date: 09/01/11 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved this story so much. it was absolutely prefect *favorited*
Author's Response: :D!!! Thank you so much! I'm so happy to know you loved it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing :) *hugs*
Date: 09/01/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love this chapter...you're an amazing writer
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! *blushes* I'm glad you loved it :)
Date: 09/01/11 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm very surprised and impressed that you covered the topic of neo-Nazis as it really still is a problem today among Germany's youths. Very very impressed. When my friends and I went to Berlin we got spit on by sone skin heads since we were French. It's scary stuff
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so sorry that happened to you! :( I think the neo-nazi problem still happens in many, many countries; at least it still does in mine. One of my very close friends is a neo-nazi skinhead, so I know how terrifying they can be in large groups and even alone. I don't consider myself a punk, but I kinda fit almost every stereotype in terms of philosophy, music taste and image. I've had some close encounters with neo-nazis and had had some pretty nasty looks from them, but luckily nothing's happened.
I hope you enjoy my story :) Thanks for reviewing!