Date: 11/23/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
This are only getting more interesting! I'm trying to balance reading this and some homework, but forget that! You're really good at drawing a reader in, and keeping them hooked.
Date: 11/23/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Exciting! Tom's moving on up.
Date: 11/23/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 4.5
Ooh, Tom's reputation precedes him. Tom's connection with the air and wind is really interesting to read.
Date: 11/23/11 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
My dog's name is Lucas.
The way you described the Firedancer's dance was very vivid! I was as enraptured as Tom.
Date: 11/19/11 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Totally wicked!!! I can't believe it took me this long to finally read it but once I started of course I couldn't stop:-) I just watched 'the eagle' as well and couldn't stop giggling ;-) I miss you so much no one here who quite understands my steamy thoughts
Date: 10/25/11 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Every chapter of this fic are so interesting and intriguing at the same time! The way you wrote this story really feels like a novel to me =)
Author's Response: It feels like a novel to me too ^,^
Date: 10/25/11 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Im so glad i finally have time to continue reading this story! Like Tom Im very intrigued by this dancer and i cant wait to learn more!
Author's Response: Glad you're back!
Date: 10/17/11 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 28
Oh. My. God. I cannot describe how much I loved this story. It has everything I love in a story. It has an alternate universe, powers, battles, love, many chapters...and so much more. This is just...so well written, original...It really tells a reader it has been put a lot of effort to. I read this whole story in a couple of hours. I couldn't get my eyes off it, I HAD TO keep on reading. I was captivated by this, it hooked me. It really did. A really good story that takes my mind right into the heat of things (pun intended) and doesn't let go even after the story is over. Truly amazing. I cannot tell just how much I loved this. I can only say: Thank you. The experience, reading this, was just...phenomenal. Thank you.
Author's Response: Wow O.o Thank you for such a glowing review. It makes me insanely happy to hear what you think of my baby. It's nice to know that all my hard work pays off. I really appreciate that you took a couple of seconds to review :D
Date: 10/10/11 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoy your writing style =) This fire thing is very intriguing and I can't wait to read more of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's gets better so it's good news that you enjoy it!
Date: 10/10/11 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
THis chapter was excellent as well! I love how you're setting the atmosphere and Tom's character too. Really interesting so far.
Author's Response: It took me a long time to figure out how to introduce Tom, so I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 10/10/11 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is such an interesting fist chapter! I'm really intrigued to read more and I'm loving this universe already =)
Date: 10/08/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 28
Amazing story. That's all I can really say. I've been reading it for days and finding myself thinking about it when I'm not reading it. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm also pleased to hear that it lingered with you even when you weren't reading! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 10/07/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 28
I really enjoyed the story. Nice pacing, good characters and plot. The development was smooth, and the attention to detail really stood out. I liked how you spent a lot of time just setting up the story, developing Tom's character, having him grow from reckless and hyper youth to more responsible adult. Thank you for knowing how to spell! And also for finishing this, it was wonderfully long.
Reminded me a bit of David Edding's series The Belgariad (if I remember it correctly). I read it a long time ago, but it's really good fiction-fantasy, even if it doesn't have two cute boys falling in love :)
Author's Response: Thank you! and... um, you're welcome? I did a lot of proof reading in order to get everything spelled correctly. I've never heard of/read the story you mentioned, too bad about there not being cute boys in love, I think it makes everything better ^.^ Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 10/01/11 04:42 am Title: Chapter 28
wonderful story. thank you so much. =)
Author's Response: No, thank you!
Date: 10/01/11 04:15 am Title: Chapter 19
how awful for bill. what a cruel and awful way to have to live.
Date: 10/01/11 03:55 am Title: Chapter 14
Bill seems so childlike in this chapter. it makes him very endearing.
Date: 10/01/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 12
Good for Tom! and good for Bill for trusting him.
Date: 10/01/11 03:34 am Title: Chapter 11
hee hee, i knew that's what he was drawing. =)
Date: 09/30/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 10
I think Gordon is trying to convince himself just as much as he is trying to convince Tom.