Date: 05/15/12 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 28
I loved it !! Absolutely amazing !!
Date: 05/11/12 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is incredible. I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews! It most definitely deserves them!!
Date: 03/16/12 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
this is such a high quality piece. it`s amazing. there should be like hundreds of comments, wtf
Date: 03/05/12 01:44 am Title: Chapter 28
Absolutely fantastic. I was so sorry to reach the end. I'll have to go check out your other works. :)
Date: 01/16/12 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 28
*Bows down* well that made my night. I read the entire thing in two days and was constantly itching when i was away from my computer haha. it was very creative and i absolutely love your style of writing so congratz!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/07/12 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 28
Very, very well done. I - wow. This was absolutely amazing, and it was so well done, and beautiful, and poor Bill, and, and...*sigh* Well done. I will be sure to read more of your stuff!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you enjoy it.
Date: 12/23/11 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 28
Wow, that was one hell of a story! I'd probably have to read it again to get all the details, cause you're pretty descriptive, but it'd be completely worth it! =)
Author's Response: I had so much in my head when I wrote this, I think only half of it made it onto paper. But I'm glad you liked it and I hope it's as good the second time if you decide to reread it :D
Date: 11/26/11 12:39 am Title: Chapter 28
Wow, this story was great! My heart broke for Bill being used and abused and for poor Tom struggling to find his way. You created a really amazing world here. This was a wonderful read that I didn't want to stop once I started! It really pulled me in. Really terrific job!
Author's Response: I love hearing that! It means I did a good job on my writing ^,^ Thanks for reviewing and sorry it took me so long to respond.
Date: 11/25/11 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
I loved these glimpses of the growing relationship between Tom and Bill. It's really interesting how you made the fire connect to Bill so by burning different elements, he'd respond accordingly. That's really cool! This story is so creative and different; I just love it!
Date: 11/25/11 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am loving this story so much. You have a beautiful way with words! I really loved the way you described Tom's motions in this chapter -- so crisp and vivid. The entire story is really good!
Date: 11/23/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 28
Yay! And so they have a new start together! Wow. You write with power! I wasn't even aware I was holding my breath, wow! I especially liked the last chapters, in which Bill was free! This felt like I was reading a published fantasy story. Incredibly amazing job!!! :D So glad I read this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and I really appreciate all the reviews!
Date: 11/23/11 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 26
*jaw on floor*
What a powerful scene. Wow. ...Wow.
Date: 11/23/11 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 24
Wow, the deception runs deeper than I thought.
Date: 11/23/11 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow, this is heartwrenching to read!
Date: 11/23/11 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
Tom has changed. This was a well-done chapter that illustrated this well. Tom is growing, developing, caring. Changing. Very good character development! Realistic and natural.
Date: 11/23/11 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
That is so neat! Bill is attached to his fire.
Date: 11/23/11 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
They already treasure each other! I'm delighted.
Date: 11/23/11 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 13
This changes things! I'm sure Tom's gonna fight for Bill's rights even more fervently now.
Date: 11/23/11 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww, they're so cruel!