Date: 09/06/11 12:59 am Title: The Idyllic Interlude Provides Opportunities
Lol, going back, I realized I didn't leave a review on chapter 7; so I shall do so now to ensure I've left a review on all of them.
The thought of Bill just "having his way" with Tom was intriguing to say the least XD
I loved how it was actually a double picture within the locket.
I also liked those very interesting "soap plants", hehe. I sort of want to try them.
Date: 09/06/11 12:51 am Title: The Screaming Siren Charts a Course Beyond
*sits in silence* That was SO awesome. *grins like crazy* I'm slowly discovering that I love stories that take place on the seas. I might implement sailing into one of my own stories, original fiction or otherwise.
Ahh... Sailing, discovering new lands and islands...
Oh yeah, seeing Andrej again was a real happy surprise :D
This was an absolute treat to read :)
Date: 09/06/11 12:11 am Title: The Crucial Die is Cast
*squeals* That was probably the best swordfight scene I have ever read! :DD
"If a corrupt old spirit can possess the flesh through greed, so I can be made new with love's unselfish intent," -- Lol! That was such a cheesy line, but somehow it works :D
Date: 09/05/11 11:20 pm Title: The Brilliant Merman Leaves His Mark
Lol, my goodness, they've already had sex 3+ times so far. But oh, how the togetherness makes me go awww. I'm not even done and I'm thinking about reading this again.
Date: 09/05/11 10:15 pm Title: The Divided Hearts Strive for Accord
Lol, this is having the super entertaining feel of a movie.
Uh oh, though. I believe the items really are cursed in some way.
Date: 09/05/11 09:51 pm Title: The Screaming Siren Charts a Course Beyond
Hooray~ I want more adventures from them. And more Adventures of Andrej~!! He was so delightful *_* my fave part~ I'm so glad he made another appearance before the end
Date: 09/05/11 08:57 pm Title: The Crucial Die is Cast
I'd have killed him, tbh. Scary spidery writing~~~ exciting battle~~~~ Marcus hud (-_-) I'd have killed him, too.
Date: 09/05/11 08:51 pm Title: The Storm's Calm Gives Way
So that's what Bill's after, and what Norton supposedly wants to prevent him acquiring. I neither trust nor like Norton but I may be wrong in thinking that, guess reading on will tell me if I'm right or not :D
God, and I just LOVE Bill as a pirate, it's such a spectacular image, the most fantastic thing to visualise :D I'm gonna read onwards!
Also, I love Andrej :)
Date: 09/05/11 08:40 pm Title: The Roguish Pirate Suffers Doubly Thwarted
Oh my gosh, Andrej knew Tom was following all that time XD
Aww, angry Bill :/
Date: 09/05/11 06:50 pm Title: The Storm's Calm Gives Way
Lol, I'd love to see the plan of Georg being "the ugly step-sister".
Date: 09/05/11 06:15 pm Title: The Headstrong Beauty Shows Mettle
"Who is there?" a high voice responded, thin with fright. -- Oh my god XDD I'm sorry, but I'm probably going to laugh throughout this whole scene.
I'm surprised Tom knew it was Bill, and not that a maiden (or some other man) had stolen his brother's locket.
Also, I'd thought, from the premise, that the disillusion of Tom trying to kill the captain of the Siren would last longer, with the realization that Bill was still there and alive delayed till at least the middle, hehe. Though, at this point he still thinks Georg is the captain, I assume. (If he didn't hear Bill addressed as Captain)
Anyway, wow, what an amazing escape. And omgosh, Tom took the locket.
Date: 09/05/11 05:41 pm Title: The Clever Trap Springs Shut
So many things happening @.@
So Tom saw Andrej jump into the water. Hmm, I'm assuming he went to hide in the depths, but he might have another task as well...
I'm reading this so fast (unintentionally), that I'm getting the events a little mixed. *concentrates*
He's after a chart..? Hmm.
@ending: Omg, is Bill doing what I think he's doing? XDD
Date: 09/05/11 04:48 pm Title: The Clever Trap Springs Shut
I don't understand the dilemma at the beginning. I thought the plan was to lure the Siren in with the cargo ship, and then when they start attacking, the Lionheart would go jump them. Well, isn't that what Captain Norton is saying? He's saying "make way", doesn't that mean "make way" towards where the fight is going to be? I don't understand how the cargo crew would be in more danger... :/
Edit: Oh wait, unless the captain means for them to be left attacking longer than usual. Okay, I get that part. But, to me, it still seemed he gave the order to go ahead and get over there immediately. Lol, now I'm just confusing myself more. Sorry. I hope you can explain it further in a response.
*shelves the issue and reads on*
Date: 09/05/11 03:59 pm Title: The Fearsome Pirate is Baited
Lol! Lemon trees on deck? Now that's something I've never heard of ;P
Hehe, Andrej is a merperson? That makes sense.
Lol! Bill and his fashions.
I wonder what specifically Bill is after, to risk a trap.
Date: 09/05/11 03:25 pm Title: Prologue - The Wayward Wind Begins to Blow
Lol, this looks absolutely fascinating. I didn't realize you were doing a Big Bang. What's amazing (and slightly ridiculous) is that our cable keeps playing the PotC trilogy repeatedly XD That is, if my mom doesn't play it from the DVR list herself.
Date: 09/05/11 01:44 pm Title: The Screaming Siren Charts a Course Beyond
I love period pieces and this once was done very well! I really like the way you write - especially the dialogue! And yay! Andrej came back! Even though it was only for a little while.
I enjoyed reading this story and I’m off to read more from you :3
Date: 09/05/11 10:33 am Title: The Screaming Siren Charts a Course Beyond
I promise to go through each chapter and review/comment on each section but I wanted to let you know as soon as possible that this is incredibly well written! Something minor in your writing has changed and it has affected your writing in a major way that the last few stories you have written have been more fulfilling. The worlds you create and the characters in them feel whole and real and believable. I expect to be paying to read your writing sooner rather then later.
Date: 09/05/11 04:15 am Title: The Screaming Siren Charts a Course Beyond
I loved this! Everyone was so marvelously in-character even in such a drastically different setting.
Date: 09/05/11 01:48 am Title: The Screaming Siren Charts a Course Beyond
I loved this story so much :)
Thank you!You´re the best:)
Date: 09/05/11 12:18 am Title: The Brilliant Merman Leaves His Mark
was a lovely goodbye for Andrej but I never wanted him to leave ;~; come back, my love~~~
ugh, I bet that dumb barrel had a message on it... dumb cook! Or whoever. :(