Date: 11/25/17 02:14 am Title: Cant Dream without You
this was a really good story!
i hope u did a sequel to this
Date: 11/28/12 06:12 pm Title: Cant Dream without You
Since I've been on THF, this is the third time I've read this story. Goddamn, I cry at the end everytime! I have to thank you so much for writing this, and I'll sure be reading it again sometime in the future! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like this!
Date: 02/11/12 01:32 pm Title: Cant Dream without You
That was a cute ending! There's quite a few grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes here and there, but overall it was a nice story!
Author's Response: haha thank you and i apologize for that, its completely un-beta'd and by the time i was done i really didn't feel like sitting through the entire thing, always better to haven someone else spot errors
Date: 10/16/11 05:40 pm Title: Cant Dream without You
Oh no Bill you didn't o__o it's so cute Tom waited for him though, and even told the girl she had another dad. lovely n_n
Author's Response: hehe he sure did :3
Date: 09/27/11 07:43 am Title: Cant Dream without You
Hehehe, unexpected but yeah great . Thanks
Author's Response: ty x3
Date: 09/17/11 03:29 am Title: Cant Dream without You
Fantastic! Excellent job writing this!
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 09/11/11 10:56 pm Title: Illusion and Dream [Part 1]
very nice and refreshing, to read abou bad boy Bill, just one thing is bothering me, I felt seconhanded embaressement reading this line "
“DADDY!” Bill shouted, falling to his knees and holding on his father’s pants. “Dad—you cant!” he pleaded." does really anyone would do something so ridiculous and held someones pants? that's remind me of a fragment from a book "American Psycho", there was a scene where one man crawled after main character holding on his legs...>.> good that at least Bill didn't do this to his father
Author's Response: LMAo im sorry it bothered you.rnWell, i wanted to make it a little bit dramatic haha and me being Indian and catching sight of all the rubbish Hindi soaps my ma watched had an effect on me xD rnWell atleast you found it refreshing! :D
Date: 09/05/11 10:25 pm Title: Cant Dream without You
Oh my gosh! This story was amazing! I loved the entire plot!
I loved the suspence too you did it well! Like the Charlie thing! And the end so so sweet. This was gold best thing in the big bang challenge so far! (:
Author's Response: Oh my gosh you put a smile to my face (: I'm really glad you seem to think so! :)
Date: 09/02/11 12:01 am Title: Cant Dream without You
Hmm. I really really enjoyed this story, but I think its one of those stories that would;ve been better with the wait between updates. No offense o anything. It was just sitting here reading it all in one sitting kind of made things seem rished, even if you did put a few time lapses in. Maybe it was just me. Wonderful work. Congrat on completing Big Bang
Author's Response: i actually considered that cause each chapter ends in sort of a cliffhanging. I considered dropping out and updating this but well :) glad you enjoyed
Date: 09/01/11 05:26 pm Title: Midnight Runner
They would have know Bill wasn't Tom eventually, he couldn't have pretended to be someone else with all the bureaucracy involved with going to trial and prison. They would have known he was lying and he could have gotten off. The ending was cute though.
Author's Response: Yep I considered changing the endig but let it be in the end :)
Date: 09/01/11 04:48 pm Title: Cant Dream without You
i really enjoeyed it :)
Author's Response: thank you! :)