Date: 09/15/11 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 11
;_; yay, hug...
Date: 09/15/11 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
he he, methinks the tommy doth protest to much. uh, oh. "oh no"? he he...a little heterosexual therapy session? hmm..
Date: 09/15/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 9
omg, you've got me crying. i didn't expect this to be so heart-wrenching. this reminds me of...that story, i think by undrockroll, that was about tom doing community service in an asylum for a DUI...same sort of emotional journey, really really moving
Date: 09/15/11 04:11 am Title: Chapter 7
;_; is this gonna be sad? and who's paying his bills, i wonder...
Date: 09/15/11 04:02 am Title: Chapter 6
hmm look who's alone now? (apart from andi)...well, those shits deserved what they got, unfortunately
Date: 09/15/11 03:53 am Title: Chapter 5
hmm, but who will make him see that he needs to be with Bill? cuz he's a poor, sad little thing on his own...:(
Date: 09/15/11 03:45 am Title: Chapter 4
aaaaaaaaaaah.......poor bill...;_;
Date: 09/15/11 03:37 am Title: Chapter 3
aaaaaaaw, they never mentioned whether it could come back....*gnaws on fingers* but but, this is shaping up quite nicely...you're so thorough!
Date: 09/15/11 03:27 am Title: Chapter 2
ohh shit, people need to think before they get carried away by their own cruelty...obviously none of them meant for that to happen, but it did. shiiiiiiiiitt.....
Date: 09/15/11 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1
wowww. had this in my list of want-to-but-can't-yet's and it's a big amazing surprise. this chapter is written outstandingly and I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 09/14/11 12:21 am Title: Chapter 19
ROFLMAO
i loved it
hahaha
Date: 09/12/11 03:20 pm Title: Epilogue
I can't even begin to explain the weight that resided in my chest all through chapter 32 and up until the very last few lines of the epilogue. Oh my god, my chest is still tight. That entire chunk in 32, summarizing their lives without the other there for those five very long months was so heartbreaking and raw and I wanted to cry and scream and make things right again. (And I had bits of that song "Without You" from Rent drifting about my head whilst reading. Still do, actually.) I just, ah. You've made me feel these characters so much that I'm physically upset that I won't be reading anymore about them. I've blushed and cringed and grinned at Bill and Tom's back-and-forth behaviors before either confessed, I melted into their kisses, I've chuckled alongside Andreas (what a beautiful dork, that character). I sat through the three longest classes of my life this morning, waiting to get back to my computer to finish reading. And unlike Bill, I didn't have a pair of starlings to keep my mind distracted. But, I couldn't ask for anything more with the ending. Beautiful, truly.
This was simply a fantastic piece of literature. And even though you stated that you think this isn't your best work, it's still sweet (albeit bittersweet at times) and heart-wrenching and relatable on so many levels, and the style in which you wrote it, I think, fits perfectly. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Date: 09/11/11 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've heard nothing but good things about this story, which is why I'm here. Finally. And after one chapter, all I can say is I fancy your writing style. A lot. It's just so... captivating, in a way. I guess. I don't know, I only know I like how you write and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Date: 09/11/11 02:01 am Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing this. This story really got me. I spent the last three of four chapters crying nonstop!
Anyway, I'm glad you got to write this awesome entry for the Big Bang Challenge. It was really heartfelt and interesting.
Date: 09/10/11 09:49 pm Title: Epilogue
Amazing story, with an amazing ending! I enjoyed every second reading it.
Date: 09/10/11 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 32
Depressing chapter :( I remain hopeful still though!
Date: 09/10/11 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 31
Thats not encouraging, but they have to get back together in the end, they just have too! Although I completely understand Bill's reasons. Great chapter!
Date: 09/10/11 03:33 pm Title: Epilogue
i rEALLY ENJOYES THIS STORY AND THINK IT WAS VERY GOOD, YOU DID WELL :)