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Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:26 am Title: Chapter 5

At least the school did something. Then again, they really can't not...I like this.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:17 am Title: Chapter 4

God, something shitty needs to happen to these nobodies.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:11 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm crazy curious about what happened to Bill. Like, insanely so.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:05 am Title: Chapter 2

At least one of Tom's friends is talking sense. I like where this is going.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 11:00 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh, Andi...
...

*just grins at Bill and Tom*

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1

This is depressing. Extremely depressing. So far, I like it, though!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 10:48 am Title: Chapter 8

Good for Bill. I think Gustav was right to give Bill a warning about Tom ,even if it did turn out t be pretty unneccessary.

So, I'm starting to wonder, could Bill drive before, and just isn't because of the amnesia, or did he never drive?

Yay...Tom is picturing Bill. I like it.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 03:34 am Title: Epilogue

Loved this. LOVED IT. I was dreading this epilogue, as I was pretty sure there wasn't going to be a happy ending, and I wasn't really prepared for that. I don't think my heart could take it, after the last chapter. This is such a great story. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 03:31 am Title: Chapter 32

Oh god, bawling my face off.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh no... Hes gone isn't he? To that place...with the clouds...thats not Seattle...Well, ok as much as I would love to read some more...its nealry 3am my time and I gotta get some sleep. CAtch the rest later!! Wonderful work so far, and I can't wait til I get home tomorrow!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:32 am Title: Chapter 6

I don't understand the second sentence. The prinipal didn't tell him ahe had to look after Bill or anything, in fact for two weeks he isn't supposed to be at shool at all...Other than that small bit of confusion, I really liked this chapter. I knew Alex would be pissed, but I'm glad he's gone.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:20 am Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm...not usre what I think of his punishment. I mean, I don't think I've ever heard of someone getting a two week suspension for playing keep away with a back pack, unles he has been disciplined for bullying before? B ut I am so proud of him for coming clean. and I am glad the pricipal is takigit seriously. I'm sure it would b very easy to let it slip to the way side seeing as Bill doesn't have anyone that is going to complain

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 02:00 am Title: Chapter 4

Reality check too much for you Georg? Tom wasn't even in the stairway when it happened. Picking is one thing, seriously maiming is another...What did Tom tell 911 anyway? He just found him like that?...

I can't believe people would do something like that. I mean, I know people do it ll the time...but I can't ,i>believe people would so it, do you know what I mean?

I'm glad Tom i sticking up for Bill, even if it dos have more to do with them abandoning him.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 3

awww insert adorable!cute!innocent!befuddled!Bill here. And Tom stayed! *is pleased*

But...what did happen to Bill's parents or other family? He must have some sort of emergency contact musn't he?

This is starting to get really intriguing.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 01:43 am Title: Chapter 2

uh oh... this is not good. At least Tom is being decent and calling for an ambulance.

Oh and btw, forgot to mention, I think it was really smart awesome of you disclaimering for that other fic, even if it the story isn't that similar, because I was totally thinking I recognized this summary.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 01:16 am Title: Chapter 9

This story has me just in tears, and I know it's going to get worse. This is so well done.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1

I think I am going to review every chapter for you, cuz so far it looks like I will read it all the way through, and just because you posted it all at once, doesn't mean you don't deserve them all.

So right now I'm thinking 'poor Bill hugs*' Hes so sad, I just want to cuddle him and love him and squeeze him until he bursts with happiness! *nod nod* I do.

And I want to smack Tom, cuz we all know hes gonna love him before this is through, and I don't see how he can't see it. MMhhmm.

NIce first chapter. Off to the second

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Marvelous story! If this isn't your "best" work, I can hardly wait to read more of your stories!!!!

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Marvelous story! If this isn't your "best" work, I can hardly wait to read more of your stories!!!!

Reviewer: slim_chances Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 07:39 pm Title: Epilogue

Omg andyyyy this was the most perfect thing ever. I love it.

Author's Response: Genestaaa I'm glad you love it.

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