Date: 12/25/11 07:41 pm Title: Epilogue
I've had this in my tracked tags practically ever since it was posted, but because of school I haven't had a chance to read it.
It was perfect. I've been reading it the for the last, what, six hours. And honestly, chapter 32 made me cry so much, I almost didn't want to continue, just in case it didn't end well (I didn't think my heart'd be able to take it, haha).
It was really, really good!
Date: 11/22/11 06:59 pm Title: Epilogue
*applause*
Forgiveness is what it takes sometimes, and it's really hard to forgive. It takes power and vulnerability-- power to forgive, and the vulnerability to admit you were hurt. I'm glad Bill could achieve this!!! Lovely story!
Date: 11/22/11 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 29
I was wondering when Bill would remember, and how he would deal with the Tom of his past. Grim stuff.
Date: 11/22/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
Getting those boys expelled did them a favor, since I got the vibes they hated school anyway.
Hope Tom is ok. More so, I hope Bill is ok.
Date: 11/22/11 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
That's awful!
I liked the glimpse into Tom's past, which shows he isn't completely rotten to the core. Poor Bill...
Date: 11/22/11 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is... very sad.
I felt like you were describing me with the umbrella and locker combination lock. At least Bill remembered his combination.
Date: 10/15/11 11:33 am Title: Epilogue
You had me crying at chapter 32; it was perfect, I don't know if I could find a better word for it. I loved your story, I'm glad I've finally had the time to read it. :) (I was just wondering something... are you studying psychology? I recognized a lot lol)
Author's Response: Nah, I'm an art major. Complete opposite. All that plus anything psychological or medical in other stories is based maybe slightly on my high school class (but really only this one because I had questions) and enormously on my own researching online.
Date: 10/15/11 12:40 am Title: Epilogue
I've had this in my tracked stories ever since it was posted and now that I have finished reading it, I can't help but wonder why I never read it sooner!
I am so glad I finally did! This is one of those stories that a person could read over and over and over again. Everything about it is magical. The characters, the plot, the whole premise; it's perfect.
I loved how Tom wasn't one of those typical characters who starts liking Bill and starts to think he 'might' be gay. I love that he is gay and has been trying to keep it hidden deep inside. I think that is what I love the most about this. Of course I absolutely love the relationships between Bill and Tom, Tom and Andi, and Andi and Bill. Everything progressed at a great pace and you kept me wanting more and more.
The last few chapters were sad but that is expected. I think if I were in Bill's shoes, I would have done the same thing.
This is definitely going to be added to my favourite's! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic =]
Date: 10/11/11 10:04 pm Title: Epilogue
*deep sigh* Like I said in my previous review, I was in a real rush, last time, but I wanted to say that I just loved this story. Any story that tugs at my heartstrings is amazing in my book. *heart heart*
I'm looking forward to future writing from you :3
Date: 10/11/11 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 32
God, this is the second time reading this chapter (I was in a rush the first time around) and I'm pretty sure this is just one of those moments where you can't *not* cry. ;_; Chest... tightness..!
Date: 10/09/11 08:54 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this, so very much :') It's like, 4 am here and I was supposed to be asleep ages ago but I just couldn't let this go. I had to finish reading it. And I'm glad I did. You really made my day-well, night. Thank you :'3
Date: 10/01/11 06:40 pm Title: Epilogue
This was great. You did such a fantastic job, thank you!
Date: 10/01/11 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 30
I loved Andi's description of depression. very insightful.
Date: 10/01/11 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 29
poor Bill, and Tom really. I mean Tom is a very different person now, but how is Bill supposed to accept that now that he remembers?
Date: 10/01/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
good for Tom, he's not a lost cause. I thought Bill's dad might be dead when Bill said he recognized the hospital.
Date: 10/01/11 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
the scariest thing is, is that kids really are this cruel.
Date: 10/01/11 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am glad you wrote that little explanation, because my first thought when I read the summary was 'haven't I already read this story?'. this is extremely well written so far, I'm very excited to read the rest of it.
Date: 10/01/11 04:53 am Title: Epilogue
Okay I just finished reading every last word and I can't see what I'm tying... I'm tearing up your story was perfect. I loved the start to the end.