Date: 09/03/11 01:11 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh, dear. This entire fic was beautiful. I definitely saw the implications of a band coming on, with Georg and Tom. But anyway, this is great.
Date: 09/03/11 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 32
This chapter is one of the most depressing parts of any fanfic I've ever read. I love it, don't get me wrong, but I hope there is no more depression.
Date: 09/03/11 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 31
I feel like Andreas is going to meddle. I'm excited for this.
Date: 09/03/11 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 30
This is painful. I feel so bad for everyone involved, but Tom really should have expected it.
Date: 09/03/11 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 29
Oh, dear. This is not good. Poor Tom, poor Bill.
Date: 09/03/11 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 28
This is not good. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop. Things will now get interesting.
Date: 09/03/11 03:17 am Title: Epilogue
Ugh, Andy. I am SOBBING. For real. I just finished this - it took me two days; the first one I stayed up reading until fucking 7am! I don't have any words to even begin to explain how much I loved this. I just love the way you write and it makes me feel a little jealous because I wish I wrote a little fraction as well as you do. And just everything about this story had me at the edge of the seat - or bed, really. The end was perfect. My heart was a mess when I was reading the yearbook part. And my heart broke, seriously broke when they stopped speaking to each other. I wanted to knock some sense into Bill's stubborn head, but I guess he did need time to move on and forgive Tom. Oh, and I could feel the pain Bill felt throughout the whole story. His feelings were so accurate in terms of depression. I could really put myself in his shoes.
If I could marry this story, I would. It was perfect. I am SO glad I read it. *hugs* Now I'll go back to sobbing, excuse me.
Date: 09/03/11 02:25 am Title: Epilogue
Oh, holy sweet Jesus.
I usually don't comment only on the last chapter, but I've just been completely absorbed in this story from start to finish; too much so to even glance at the review box.
I don't really know what to say. I absolutely adored this story from start to finish, and am upset it's over. (Though don't write a sequel...sequels usually aren't as good as the original.)
I think you have amazing talent, and if you ever stop writing I'm sure I would keel over. Even if it's not in this fandom, just...do it, bro.
Also, I think the song from last chapter fit perfectly, just sayin'.
GAH. Now I'm done. I loved this story, and that's all I can say. Have an awesome day.
Date: 09/03/11 01:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh Billy...*snuggles* He's honestly sorry. You'll forgive him wont you?
*smacks Tom* Sleeping with her is not goingto elp you get in Bill's pants! I know you don't know you want in there yet, but you will, and besdies getting in girls pant's isn't goingto make you feel better or get your mind off things for long.
Great chapter.
Date: 09/03/11 12:19 am Title: Chapter 27
That is so hot and sweet. And damn it I'm too tired to appreciate it. Oh well.
Date: 09/03/11 12:09 am Title: Chapter 26
Good for Bill. I'm glad he didn't forgive Georg.
Date: 09/02/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 25
The way you ended that chapter is hilarious. Like getting a Christmas present for Tom is this huge cliffhanger.
Date: 09/02/11 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 24
Aw, poor Tom! I hope it gets better!
Date: 09/02/11 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aw, this chapter is wonderful. They exchanged "I love you's." Incidentally, Thanksgiving is always on a Thursday. The third Thursday in November. It can't be on a Friday...
Author's Response: ...That would be my bad, then. XD My beta didn't get to that chapter for me, her power was out. Incidentally, it seems you're the only one to have picked up on that. So thank you. I'll go fix that now~
Date: 09/02/11 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Iiinteresting! I wonder if Bill remembers the hospital from some kind of past experience or he was just being polite. It's kinda sad he doesn't seem to have anyone.
Georg and the rest of the potheads better not start shit with Tom for helping Bill >.> hopefully they're not that retarded. I looove it so faaar great job! o/
Date: 09/02/11 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
._. reading one of the twins harassing each other is really painful to me, even if I know it's just a fuc D: Poor Bill and those dickheads are such cowards for leaving him behind. At least Tom had enough of a brain to finally do one thing right...
Date: 09/02/11 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Reading this from my phone so I'm sorry for typos etc. I'm loving it so far, you've made Bill's situation perfectly clear without him sounding like some kind of emo kid that whines for no reason. His feelings and thoughts are perfectly natural and well presented, I could totally re-live some of the very similar moments I'd gone through back in my school-days. Really very good, I'm so glad I don't have to impatiently wait for updates heh!
Date: 09/02/11 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm around chapter 22 and I'm really enjoying the story so far.
It's is easy to fall for Bill and Tom simply had me at hello. I can't wait to read what's left out there for the boys.
Take care!
Date: 09/02/11 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor Bill
this is really good already