Date: 09/05/11 03:31 am Title: Epilogue
This was so beautifully done. I'm so glad they didn't just fall in love and bang each other all lust-ridden. It was so much better than that. I've sat for a couple of hours reading it, and it was just truly wonderful. Thank you!
Date: 09/05/11 03:07 am Title: Chapter 19
Aww He did it!! *throws confetti, hugs Tom* ADmitting it is the first step! I'm so happy Andi took it so well, not that I'm surprised he did. Now Tom just needs to man up and ask Bill out. Andi is a wise bird in that respect.
Date: 09/05/11 03:07 am Title: Chapter 19
Aww He did it!! *throws confetti, hugs Tom* ADmitting it is the first step! I'm so happy Andi took it so well, not that I'm surprised he did. Now Tom just needs to man up and ask Bill out. Andi is a wise bird in that respect.
Date: 09/05/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 19
WOAH. Didn't see the outright confession coming! I looove this.
Date: 09/05/11 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start! I can't wait to read the rest of this XD
Date: 09/05/11 02:42 am Title: Chapter 18
And there we go. Not too much to say this chapter cuz I really want to just get right to the talking. Sad that Bill is avoiding him though, and feel kinda bad for Andi, feeli all third wheelish.
Date: 09/05/11 01:30 am Title: Epilogue
Wow, you write so beautifully, you've brought the most life to a story's characters out of any author's work I've read. Brilliant.
Date: 09/04/11 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
That's very intense O.O and I agree that Tom is just as guilty as anyone for picking on him, but he's not actually to blame for what happened this time. He's the only one with heart enough to help and I like that
Date: 09/04/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 17
*nods knowingly* Natalie is right...I was kind of expecting the blazer to be a siginifiant thing in Natalie's eyes. I dunno why, probably because Bill never wore it to school before... Very telling chapter.
Date: 09/04/11 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aww, and here I though man could not lve on frozen dinner alone... Wrong again appearantly.
I love that we got some Bill Andreas time in this chapter. I was starting to wonder if they were cool, or if Andi just kind of put up with him tagging along with Tom. But they look like they have a good dynamic on their own. Very nice.I liked the fake hurt thing about him not being Bill's type. And I love that he wouldn't talk on the phone while he was peeing, that always kind of weirds me out.
Date: 09/04/11 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aww,poor Tomi, all bruised and stuff. He really is too good looking for this shit.
God, stupid teenagers. Where do they come up with this shit? And how does it somehow lose all traces of "i wonder if" and become flat out 'fact'? I never did understand that.
Its good to know that Bill's dad was frugal enough that Bill is able to manage alright for as long as he has.
This was a nice bit of insight into Tom's head, about him hiding so long that he is hiding from himself now too.
And it was nice seeing them sitting around reading Bill's notrbooks. I'm not sure what I think about Bill asking. Was it ome kind of subconcious getting back at Tom thing, or did he genuinely just not want to read them alone. I could see it being either to be honest. The latter cuz I would think it would be terribly easy to slip into a depression just reading them if no one was there with you.
Date: 09/04/11 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jackass. Good for Damael breaking it up and kicking his ass out...I'm not surprised Bill didn't go, but it would've been interesting to see what people said when he showed up. You know, if Alex hadn't shown. That probably would've been really bad then.
Date: 09/04/11 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ahh, his first foray into hair and makeup...*remineces*...Well, I suppose if you want to get technical it isn't, but its new for amnesia Bill so thats all that counts. I would;ve kind have thought that the hair and makeup thing might have came naturally to him any how. I mean he still knows how to tie his shoes and cook and stuff you know? Well I imagine he knows how to cook. Man can not survive on frozen dinners alone, and I would think he didn't know how to do too much cooking before he was fifteen.
Wonderful chapter!
Date: 09/04/11 02:07 am Title: Chapter 3
I can just imagine Tom whining about having to take Bill home :) I love this so far, it's very interesting, but I can't help but feel sorry for poor Billa, though I like the naive Bill more than the bitter one
Date: 09/04/11 01:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh no! Poor Bill... :( It's still a good story, but oh, the suspense. On to the next chapter!
Date: 09/04/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I think it's lovely, very interesting :) What made the story even better for me, though, is that 'The Fight' by Avenged Sevenfold started to play just as I started to read, and in my opinion, it fit well with the chapter. I can't wait to read more :D
Date: 09/03/11 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 20
asdfghjkl;' masfjasdiofjioads cute!!
Date: 09/03/11 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
Eww. Raw egg... At least it wouldn't have done any permanent damage to Bill though. If anything its good for your hair, and I don't think it stains too badly s long as he treated it that night. But eggs'll damage pain on cars, and probably houses too I imagine.
I'm glad they had fun together all hanging out and that they are going to be doing it again soon.