Date: 08/12/13 02:34 am Title: Chapter 3
so suspenseful, are the baby beloveda alive?
Date: 10/01/12 02:01 am Title: Chapter 7
Okay, I wasn't going to review til the end, but that was just hilarious. Gustav doing the Count from Sesame Street, Geo going obsessive/compulsive. I started reading this yesterday after re-reading MI, and I'm so glad I did. Usually not too interested in the G's or in anything rated below nc17 (I need my pervy moments), but because I know what an amazing writer you are, and am jonesing for a fix of MI, I started this one. I was surprised that it doesn't have five hundred reviews - this is excellent! The entire set up was disturbingly funny. Retarded Gustav is wonderful, and Baby Vamp Geo was so well crafted. I love the holy trinity of his personality. And Gus' undying (erm...) devotion to Geo, well, it's obvious it was there from way before Geo died, came back, got all cute and needy, and then turned into a sexy vampire. Love your writing, hope you've got more coming!
Date: 08/18/12 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
I cannot even begin to explain how much I loved this story! I loved the description of georg's behaviour as a new vampire and of course gustav's endearing, if psychotic, and undying love. It was sad and made me cry but also made me happy and made me laugh! It was perfect! Sorry for the rant.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I'm very glad you liked it! I'm glad you found it, not many people have seen it!
Date: 03/24/12 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
a LITTLE? i`d like to see what YOU`d call really insane. people probably don`t survive that with their brains intact) lol indeed
Date: 03/20/12 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah. you might call it different. though "insane" would be more accurate. i enjoyed it muchly. xx
Author's Response: Yeah, ok, maybe a LITTLE insane, LOL
Date: 03/18/12 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
you, my beloved, are crazy. CRA-ZY. but it`s all very entertaining, in that oh-now-he-didn`t! kind of way. did i mention crazy?
Author's Response: Hehehehe I wanted to do something completely different. XD
Date: 01/14/12 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
What a wonderful story! The image of baby Georg playing with barbies is just magical. I love the characters that you create so so much.
Date: 12/27/11 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
...And by 'more', I meant more stories from you in general, not an add-on to this story. Although one-shots and spinoffs would be great
Date: 12/27/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
This is such a great vampire story. I honestly can't even tell you how wonderful and creative and fresh it is compared to many of the others I've read lately. I love how you've portrayed them in the story and how you've portrayed the process of becoming a vampire, too. All in all, it's a wonderful story and I can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I'm so glad you liked it. Not many people have seen it, and I'm glad you found it, and also found it enjoyable. I love baby Georgie, so I know I'll be writing more about him.
Date: 11/23/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter 10
Aww Georg left. That was sad. But he was right. Georgie would come running back. I love how Gustav responded to that crisis.
This action packed chapter was great! I was laughing so hard I cried at the scene where Georg threw the eggs and the one vampire is puking.
Yay! Gustav isn't going to die! And he loves Georg, not this new Georg. Old Georg.
Whatever. WHATEVER. Buttsex, death, transformation. WHATEVER. Regardless, this was very emotional and serious. This was almost painful to read-- how much they love each other (I think) and how it's so wrong and dangerous.
In the hospital, the return of Georgie was very touching. Georg's beloved was dying, so of course Georgie would come out. It was like greeting a familiar friend again, since he was here since the beginning. The scene of him learning about babies was so guhhh ;u; Baby butterflies~ That's so precious!
Love-- why you let a vampire squeeze your arm black and blue for his own comfort, not yours. :') I am so incredibly glad I read this amazing story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so very glad you liked it. It was really hard for me to step out of my comfort zone to write this, but I'm very glad I did!
Date: 11/22/11 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh no! This is the next to last chapter!
Ah, love.
Date: 11/22/11 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh yay, so the minature beloved were barbies? That's really funny and disturbing! I'm glad it wasn't a real human child Georgie abducted.
I'm really glad Georgie comes out sometimes. He's the funniest. The other two are really funny too. His eating and consuming storm was hilarious!
Georg needs to be nice to his inner vampire child, because Georgie is very sweet and a part of him.
The ending was very touching.
Author's Response: Thank you. I love baby Georgie. He's very brilliant for a "child," LOL
Date: 11/22/11 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
So that's why Gustav was dumb!!! I wondered.
Georg's English is hilarious. You had fun with this, didn't you. It's like he has phonemic paraphasia. People can get this, usually from acquired brain injury.
And counting. This is very amusing. Thanks for writing this. I'm delighted that there's still more to go.
Author's Response: I did have fun with this one. I like that in fiction we can pretend english is their base language. The phonemic paraphasia was exactly because his brain was healing itself. I wanted to show an injury moving in reverse, getting better over the course of several days. I never knew until starting this story that vampires counted things. The muppet count became hysterically funny to me after this, because he was obviously modeled on folklore vamps, but no one knows it.
Date: 11/22/11 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
The dumbass thing had me bawling with laughter.
Again, the logic in Georg's mind is so astonishing to read. I'm so glad the beloved thing was cleared up, though it was quite amusing to read about.
Ahhh Gustav is a fucking smoothie!!! This is endlessly entertaining to me! :D I burst out laughing so hard at the tea party part where Gustav washed him, dressed him and stuff.... I woke up my dogs with my laughter! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was funny. I tried to lighten the mood a bit!
Date: 11/22/11 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
...I wonder why Gustav isn't more disturbed by all of these happenings. Ahaha! Gustav is so oblivious! There's blood on the McDonald's bag, not ketchup!! This is so hilarious in a gory way--I love it! "Your mouth is always bleeding." That made me crack up so hard! And then "His beloved had a very bad memory." Tell me about it! XD Even Georg is smart enough to realize how oblivious Gustav is!
The amount of attention the baby gave to Gustav's heart was so sweet! And did Georg just level up? Like a pokemon that evolved?
Author's Response: Yes! Folklore vamps come in two basic types, those that are wild biting animals, and those that seduce and are people. It seemed to me that it was really one kind of vampire but in two different states, newborn, and fully changed. I decided to make Georg a full vamp once his teeth grew in.
Date: 11/22/11 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
The simple way that Georg is rationalizing the world is terribly adorable. Like the washing machine, that a monster chews them and eats the dirt? Impossibly adorable. And in my head, I kept reading "Uppyman" which was highly entertaining, considering Georg's odd juvenile intelligence.
OMG Miniature beloveds in a garbage bag, turned off and shoved out a window! That's awful!
Author's Response: It was awful. A lot of people stopped reading at that point, thinking it was children, LOL
Date: 11/22/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Georg is entirely too adorable.
I love that the nutterkins are rabbits. I really like that this is told from the naive baby's point of view. It's a very unique way to tell the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried people might not get what I was going for, it's a bit demented.
Date: 11/22/11 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's really weird. I can see how his weird behavior was relevant enough to name the story after it. Clicking to the next chapter....
Date: 10/08/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg...read it all.. fucking amazing, but what the hell is up with the ending? please tell me there is a continue to this?! :D:D I honestly thought Gustav was gonna end up as a vampire but obviously ch.10 disagrees.. so pleas make it happen! :D
Author's Response: I wanted to leave the ending open so I could add more to this story later. The story isn't anywhere near over yet, LOL Thank you!