Date: 02/02/12 08:46 am Title: Chapter The Only
Okay I lied, I did think of one other criticism after I sent my review, sorry. I think you should've added more detail to the descriptions. I didn't even know what hairstyle Tom had until about halfway through and I'm still unclear on Bill's. And you don't really describe any of the settings, which is okay if you want to leave it up to the reader's imagination but there should definitely be more detail to the characters.
Author's Response: thanks for the advice!
Date: 02/01/12 08:52 am Title: Chapter The Only
THIS IS THE CUTEST THING I'VE EVER READ! I'm so in love with the idea of Bill and Tom raising kids. Alex and Eric are adorable, I love how you wrote them. Especially with Alex being the strong one but Eric sticking up for him when he discovers he likes boys. It really shows how balanced they are. And Bill and Tom's childish banter was absolutely perfect, they're just big kids trying to deal with little kids. I don't normally read Gustav/Tom but I loved every line of this. I think some of things Tom said may have been a bit too cliche to be realistic but that's really my only criticism. I think my favourite part would be the scene in the counselor's office after the fight with Bernie. Gustav dealt with the woman's ignorance calmly and effectively and left her speechless and Tom stuck by his son and didn't even think twice about it. It was wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/22/11 04:18 pm Title: Chapter The Only
This was lovely! I adored all of the characters you made, in this lovely little universe! Gustav and Tom are so sweet, and even sweeter together! This was an absolute delight to read.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/12/11 10:19 pm Title: Chapter The Only
amazing
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/06/11 01:01 pm Title: Chapter The Only
Absolutely adorable. Alex and Erik are a pair of rambunctious boys that's for sure, but when you see how (and by whom)they've been raised it's not surprising. So many wonderful twin moments here, both old and young. Love Georg's utter horror at finding out Bill's actually a boy *snort* and Bill's drunken kiss and 'pretty hair' comments. Gustav and Tom are a very sweet match, I adored Gustav's understanding and encouragement of Alex's burgeoning sexuallality, and think that he's going to be a stabling factor to the madness. I hope they'll be one big happy family. Great fic *huggles*
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, this fic was much more focused on the family aspect than the slash, but I think it was right for the fic.
Date: 09/15/11 02:03 am Title: Chapter The Only
This is an amazing story! I love how Bill is a diva!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love him too.
Date: 09/14/11 03:20 pm Title: Chapter The Only
awwwww. so sweet. tomstav is not written a lot, so it was really nice for a change. i especially love how you wrote bill's character. for me it seemed very true to bill. lol. i loved the boys. it takes a special kind of person to love being a teacher. gustav would be the best at it, i think.
Author's Response: Gustav seems like he has infinite patience (God knows with Tom, Bill, and often Georg, you'd NEED it!) so he seemed the best for a teacher ;)
Date: 09/11/11 07:10 pm Title: Chapter The Only
I loved how amusing I found reading about model Bill and his behavior, lol!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks!
Date: 09/06/11 05:12 pm Title: Chapter The Only
i really enjoyed this story, i dont normally like tom/gus but this was soooo cute :DDD and had all my fav things in it :DD like teacher gus!!! :DDD
Author's Response: Thank you!rnrnAnd yes, teacher Gustav!
Date: 09/05/11 03:13 pm Title: Chapter The Only
Nice story and congrats on finishing for the challenge! I also liked the parallels between the older and younger twins. It made me laugh when Tom and Bill fought over a watch. :)
Author's Response: Bill and Tom would totally run around fighting and setting a bad example for the kids ;)rnrnThanks!
Date: 09/04/11 10:51 pm Title: Chapter The Only
OMG I loved this so much! I adore the Erik and Alex, we need to hear more about them in the future. We also need to hear about Georg and Bill's long tortured romance and marriage, LOL BRILLIANT, Thank you for this!
Author's Response: Lol, thank you!
Date: 09/04/11 01:50 pm Title: Chapter The Only
This was so awesome. :-) I love the pairing, Tom and Gustav. And then you throw in the wonderful twin-connection that Bill and Tom still has. :-) Pure genius. Not to mention how you managed to make Tom's kids just as terrible as Bill and Tom most likely were as kids to. :-) The parallels were brilliant. And Gustav... Man, I love that man... So awesome. And poor Georg to. *lol* All confused. There'll be another pairing in the future here I am sure, once Georg stops being all confused (which was funny as hell, I might add!). I just wanted to hug Gustav at times to, what with his low self-esteem. Good thing Tom was so stubborn. And he would be, wouldn't he? ;-) Awesome. I really, really enjoyed this. WONDERFUL work! You whould write a lot more! :-D
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! Gustav's my favorite so I tend to write tons of himrnrn
Date: 09/03/11 11:51 pm Title: Chapter The Only
I completly wonderful!! All wrapped into one epic chapter I might add xD I loved how you wrote the characters (especially the kids). Don't ever stop writing!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/01/11 05:10 pm Title: Chapter The Only
Good story :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/01/11 02:19 am Title: Chapter The Only
This was really cute! I loved the dynamics between Bill and Tom and Tom and Gustav. And I really enjoyed the parallels you drew between the older and younger twins. The bits of cannon you worked in (Bill saying he dates women but never having actual dates with anyone) were well done, also. Just a really enjoyable story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah, come on, Tom's children would be JUST like him and Bill, lmao.rnrnAnd exactly! I'm not saying anything about Bill, but it's just amusing how he doesn't seem to show interest in ANYBODY. It's fun to work with in an AU.
Date: 09/01/11 02:03 am Title: Chapter The Only
the twins were really cute (both sets)! thanks for posting :)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Author's Response: Thank you! <3