Date: 08/30/11 09:22 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
This was so hot and so funny, as always!
Your Bill is such a little shit; I just adore him. I don't blame Kiran one bit for making someone else get rid of the spider. Smart girl.
Oh, how I laughed when Bill popped out of the closet and Tom ran! The way you wrote it was such a good set-up! I’m gonna try that kind of outfit next time a big-ass spider trespasses in my house. Would it work with centipedes too?
I figured something bad was coming, but when Bill yelled "Haul ass" and poor Tom just *knew* what was happening... poor boy. He’s going to need therapy after all this; perhaps he could get in our support group for people traumatized by your monkey. :P
I love that you wrote the chase from Tom’s perspective safe on the kitchen chair because it made it even better not to see it, just to hear and wonder about what must have been an EPIC battle.
And of course, not even that horrible ordeal could keep a horny boy from thinking about blow jobs. Oh, Bill. I gotta say, yum, soapy-shower-Bill is perfect.
Wait. How’s come it’s *your* birthday and yet you’re giving *us* the presents! Silly girl! You got it backwards! But I’m certainly not complaining. Can you have another birthday next week? :3
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! You are just the sweetest/cutest thing since Slow Lorises, aren't you? Goodness! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Bill really IS such a shit. A lovable little shit. :D Kiran reacted to the spider in the precise way that I would, haha. Find a boy to take care of it. Lol, it just felt right for Tom to run away. I mean, even though I'm not scared of closet monsters, I'd probably run as well if someone popped out of the closet dressed like that. However, yes! That outfit does in fact work against centipedes, and any other creepy crawly things! Haha I think by this point, when Tom hears HAUL ASS, he knows that something is on his back. He could certainly get in on our pet therapy group. Goodness knows that it is necessary after all of the animal things that happen in this story, lol. I'm glad that you liked the Tom perspective! Sometimes the things that are unseen are more comical. The implied happenings. Then the imagination can wander. :D Bill is always horny. Despite any animal attacks. Despite ANYTHING, really. Hehe. I'm glad you like soapy Bill. I do, too :D *siiiiighs* Well listen, your reviews are like presents to me soooooo, we both win! Seriously though, thank you so much for this amazing review. You never fail to make me smile. I'll try to age a little faster, just for you :D Hehe. I do plan on posting another one shot this month, though!! Thank you for reading!
Date: 08/30/11 08:50 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
Omg another animal attack, first the monkey then the lizard and now a spider its just hilarious! I just love it. Awesome job...i totally missed this story!
Author's Response: So many animals! For some reason, they just go hand in hand with this story, lol. I'm so glad you loved it! Thank you so very much. I miss this story, too! Which is why I will keep writing about these boys :D Thank you for reading!
Date: 08/30/11 07:55 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
*sigh*
I HATE how the site cuts off a whole bunch of my review =_=;;
Author's Response: Well, what was left of your review was quite fantastic and made me smile! Just so you know :D Maybe someday it will let you post the whole thing! I can't wait for that day :D *hugs*
Date: 08/30/11 07:54 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
Yayayaya! Thank you for this Work Out one shot, I will never get tired of reading about these boys =D
I had already seen the Loris vid but had to watch it again... it's just the cutest thing ever!! Then I got distracted with watching other cute vids, this Hedgehog one in particular... lol
How was your birthday?! Hope it was fantastic cause you deserve only the best!
Lovedddd this one shot! It was funny and sexy, exactly like the Work Out story and that's what I like so much about it. I could quote my fav parts put I would just copy-paste the whole thing so I will just say thank youuuu for posting this. Especially on your birthday, you should be the one receiving gifts, not us!
Author's Response: Eeeeeeee! You are SO welcome for the one shot! I'm really happy that you won't get tired of reading about them, because I don't think I'll ever get tired of writing about them :D Isn't the loris just sooooo cute? I need one! OH GOODNESS I LOVE HEDGEHOGS. I think they are the sweetest little spiky things. :D My birthday was great, thank you so much! You are so sweet to me. I'm so glad you enjoyed the one shot. I always try to stay true to the characters and the story when I'm writing the one shots. :D You are sooo very welcome! But thank YOU for reading! And honestly, your reviews are like presents for me :D So, thank you!
Date: 08/30/11 07:52 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
Oh HAPPY 22ND BIRTHDAY MOHANROCKS!!!
Just a random thing, my birthday is five days after the twins and I'll be turning 20!
Goddess you have no idea how happy I was when I saw that you put up a one-shot for Workout!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!! Oh!! Yay for Virgos :D :D August/September birthdays are the best. Oh...that means that your birthday is in three days! Happy early birthday!!! I hope that it is fantastic. I'm so glad that my one shot could make you happy :D Your review has definitely made me feel the same way. Thank you so very much!
Date: 08/30/11 07:28 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
*sings really loudly and off-key*
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO KRISTEN,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.
*thankfully stops singing*
This is another awesome one shot of my favourite Bill and Tom ever (other than the ones you're writing about no). :) I'm so happy you're keeping us up to date on these two and how hilarious they are together.
Bill is such a know-it-all without really knowing it all. lol Tom is so whipped by this boy and I love watching how far he'll go to please Bill.
Thank you for giving us a present on your birthday. I'm so happy I started reading Work Out and now everything else you write. If I hadn't I would never have met you and I would have sorely missed out on one of the nicest experiences I've had in a long time.
As long as you keep writing, I will keep reading and reviewing. Hope you don't get too sick of me and I hope you are having a fantastic day. Love you!
Author's Response: Nooooo, don't stop singing! That was lovely! Hehe. Thank you sooo very much for the song and birthday wishes. I am sooo flattered that you love my characters so much. Truly! I will continue to write about them. I'm really excited for Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas, Valentines...there are soo many one shot possibilities! And I'm going to take advantage of them because I love you all :D You are so welcome for the one shot! I could not be happier that you started reading my stories. You are such a delight, Maril! I could never get sick of you :D Thank you so much for reading and I love you, too!
Date: 08/30/11 07:11 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
Happy birthdayyyyyyyy!!!
My new favorite animal is the slow loris.
And I loved the one shot!
Author's Response: Awesome review. Seriously this is perfect :D Thank you so much for the birthday wishes!! And I'm so glad that I could introduce you to the cuteness of the slow loris! I want one, so much. Especially to tickle! hehe. I'm so glad you loved it. Thank you for reading!
Date: 08/30/11 06:50 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
What a wonderful surprise I got when I signed in and saw another one-shot! Gah! I love these two! Definitely two of my favourite characters that's for sure! =] I love the shenanigans they get into and all the lovey dovey stuff as well!
Thank you for writing another one-shot on these two! I honestly, cannot wait to read more of Tom and Bill =]
And, before I click the submit button, I would like to wish you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I hope you have an absolutely wonderful day, hun! *hugs*
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy that the one shot could surprise you and get you excited. I literally cannot even tell you how delighted I am that you love my characters. Such a compliment. I have so much fun writing about them and so I'm just lucky that people enjoy reading about them. You are so welcome! But thank YOU for reading! I will definitely post another before the month is up. I can't stay away from these two, for too long :D Thank you sooo much for the birthday wishes! I did have a great day. :) Thank you for reading! *squeezes*
Date: 08/30/11 05:39 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
Awww I love this bit Kirst! So super cute and sweet in a really odd way. How the hell do you always pull that off XD Happy birthday again! I hope you're having a good one! And get those cup cakes :D
Now if you'll excuse me I'm all to go watch a loris! :D
Author's Response: Eeeeek I'm so happy that you loved it! You know I always have to make it a little bit odd, hehe. But I'm just really glad that you enjoy it even with the oddities! And dude, I'm lucky that you think I pull it off, haha. Thank you so much for all of your birthday wishes!! You really are so sweet. I DID HAVE CUPCAKES. Mini ones. They are much safer. hehe. I hope you enjoyed the loris! They are adorbs. Just like you. :D
Date: 08/30/11 05:30 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
oh and also i forgot to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY! even though the subject of birthdays is sad. HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Author's Response: Haha I know that it is sad but THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I had a very happy birthday and now this review just reminded me of that. You've got me smiling :D I appreciate you!!
Date: 08/30/11 05:30 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
OMG. CUTEST THING EVER!!! Especially the slow loris. I had to stop watching my video on emo guys kissing to watch it. but, rimming? ewwwww! and you have reminded me of the twins birthday :c I don't want them to grow up!!!!
Author's Response: SERIOUSLY how cute is that little animal? I neeeeed one. Haha. The idea of ACTUALLY rimming grosses me out, but writing about it isn't so bad. Mainly because you can leave out gross parts, lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Despite the rimming! lol. Aww, I wish no one had to grow up. Let's move to Neverland! Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 08/30/11 05:29 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
I just cannot get enough of these two! Tom's unconditional love amazes me when it comes to Bill's craziness. Lmao, I was expecting (with Bill's luck) the spider to be a ridiculouly huge thing =D Happy birthday btw! U rock & ur stories do too! =)
Author's Response: Thank goodness you can't get enough of them because I just can't seem to stop writing about them :D I'm glad you like the unconditional love; that's one of my favorite traits of Tom's in this series. Haha of COURSE the spider was huge. Bill just can't seem to get away from the absurd and random. Thank you so much for the Happy Birthday!! And thank you for reading and enjoying my stories :D YOU rock, though!!
Date: 08/30/11 05:13 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
LMAO Butterfingers
Author's Response: I KNOW haha. That commercial is ridiculous. Thank you so much for reading!! :D
Date: 08/30/11 05:11 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
YAY! another oneshot, ohh lala! and you're 22 today? really? HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! I'm also 22, as of May 24th. Have a great day and lovin these oneshots :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the Happy Birthday!! Right on, for 22! Awesome age, I think. We shall be awesome, together! I'm so glad you're loving the one shots. I'm super happy to have you as a reader :D
Date: 08/30/11 05:08 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
:"D Thank you for updating, this was wonderful
Author's Response: Of course, darling dearest!! I'm glad that you enjoyed :D Btw, you're awesome. Juuuust putting that out there :D
Date: 08/30/11 04:32 pm Title: The Things Bill Does For Tom
I love it ! Work Out is amazing !
Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed this and Work Out :D :D I appreciate you reading!